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[Akroma]

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I.C.A.R.U.S Legnard (Independant Combat And Rescue Utility System)
Theme Song

An original project by IRIS and DARPA to create the ultimate weapon for the fight against the supernatural, 7 Prototypes were built and distributed around the world for testing purposes. Through interactions of remnant magic from Winries technomancy and Kyles supernatural fertility when he tried to update ICARUS programming, a sort of electronical spirit was sparked into life, which slowly but surely grew more intelligent, eventually sentient, and even obtained a soul. This spirit, Icarus, marks the beginning of an entirely new age of supernatural phenomena, but is sadly entirely reliant on a sufficently advanced computer to sustain her existance.

Currently lives with Alice in Lyon, trying to not draw too much attention, as previous events that maaaay be interpreted as a terrorist attack forced her to abandon the ICARUS-05, and go into hiding with the PIXEL-01. That doesn't stop her from going out at night and beating up criminals. She just can't help it, it's part of her nature. She also has taken up hacking, and is showing quite a talent for it, understanding systems better than most humans could. The PIXEL has various cables that can be used to gain access to systems, should a port be found, and has little trouble wirelessly accessing W-Lan, or even tinkering with mobile phones.

Level: 8
Exp: (780)
Stats (124)

Health:         18 - 54 HitPoints
Mana:           16 - 32 Mana
Speed:          16 (+1)
Skill:          20 (0/+3) (10% crit chance)
Strength:       18 (+7/+4) (3 SP)
Mag:            14 (+5)
Defence:        15 (+8)
Resistance:     11 (+4)

Perks: (I guess they carry over from v2?): Brisk - Speed roll is increased by +1 when dodging
Statperk: Speed - Dual attack on two targets at 80% damage, calculated after damage reduction
Level 5 Statperk: Health- Unbreakable. Once during a plot, if Icarus health would fall to 0 or below, her health falls to 5 instead. 1/2 of her Mana and all SP are refilled, and all limitations are lifted from the overdrive. Manouvers in this form use all SP, obviously.
Equipment:

White February, a semi-sentient ignition disk. A compression weapon.
Very unassuming in the form of a white disk the size of a coin that may as well be plastic, White February hovers behind the user, for no obvious value. It shows its real value only when the user is attacked, expanding to up to a meter in diameter, and moving quickly to block incoming blows.
Passive: White February has a 20% chance to block an incoming blow completely. After it has blocked a blow, it goes on cooldown for the next 3 incoming blows.
Active: Like all parts of the 13 month series, White February has an ignition mode. Conditions for ignition are unclear, but mostly seem to depend on wether or not the weapon, which is semi-sentient, agrees with you. In the case of White February, we have a very motherly, protective personality.

PIXEL-01: A body created by Winry, which at least while dressed, looks human. Made for intermingling with society and evading law enforcement.

Robot-Fists +3 on damage on "unarmed" attacks. Concealed weaponry that pretty much looks like normal fists, but quite suprise when you notice they have a steel skelleton
Normal Handgun, +3 on damage, ranged, 10 shots in magazine, unregistered.
Steel-Frame (light armor) +1 on damage reduction
Weak to electricity, weak to acids, immune to poison, Overdrive is locked at small acts. Overdrive in this body can increase Str, Spe, Skl.
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ICARUS-05: A body created by Winry in cooperation with IRIS and DARPA, after recent events, is locked up at the headquarters of Interpol in Lyon (that's where the HQ really is. Convenient coincidence that our old base is not far from there)

Orichalcum high-frequency blade, +4 on damage, ignores 1 point of armor. Increased damage against the divine.
Silver Particle Cannon, +2 on damage, magical damage, allows the increase of mag through Overdrive
Boron-Nitrate-fiber Armor +2 on damage reduction
High torque cyclonic barrier, when activated allows the increase of Def with overdrive.
Weak to electricity, resistant to fire, immune to poison, resistant to cold, Overdrive is locked at medium acts. Overdrive can increase Str, Spe, Skl, Mag, Def.

Currently stolen by Belkelel
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HYDRA-01: A body designed by DARPA, and ICARUS by faking the identity of various designers that worked from home.


Serpent high-frequency blade, +7 on damage in short blade form, +4 on damage, +3 on skill and 8 meters reach in serpent form. Can be used like an harpoon to latch onto an enemy, which is a pretty dangerous situation.
Plasma-Thrower: Allows for a +5 magical fire attack
Coolant-explulsor: Allows the expulsion of highly pressurized coolant, for a +5 magical ice attack.
High voltage charger: Allows to send a strong electric shock through a target, dealing +5mag damage.

Boron-Nitrate-Fiber Armor of the next generation: +4 damage reduction from physical sources. An inlay of nano-runes also provides +1 damage reduction against magical attacks.
High torque cyclonic barrier, when activated allows the increase of Def with overdrive, as above. +1 on Def in passive mode
Short range anti-magic generators: Allow for the increase of Res via overdrive. +1 on Res in passive mode
Weak to electricity, resistant to fire, immune to poison, resistant to cold.
Ability: Overdrive. Icarus sends energy into her systems to for a short time, greatly increase her combat abilities. Not all stats can be buffed, details in backstory. Because her current body, the PIXEL-01 is not the high tech military hardware she used to pilot, her abilities are currently locked at minor acts, until the ICARUS-05 (medium) and/or the HYDRA-01 (enormous) have been attained

Negliable: Sensors. Unless whatever Icarus is scanning is actively shielded against scans, her Sensors can gather a large amount of information hidden to the naked eye. [locked]: Flight.

Small: Add a +25% to a single stat or 15% to two stats

Medium: Add a +50% to a single stat, or +25% to two stats

Big: Add a +75% to a single stat, or +50% to two, or +25% to 3 stats.

etc.

All increases only last until Icarus next turn, so speed or defence boosts against an enemy that is faster than Icarus would be effective next turn. Increasing skill also affects crit chance, however increasing Def/Res/Str does not grant bonus damage block (except for what it was increased for, I mean the +1 for every 5), or additional SP

Special manouvers:

All of Icarus manouvers can scale lineary, due to very precise controle of how much energy she actually puts into an attack.

Shooting star:
Icarus, boosting her speed, shoots forward in a straight line, closing the distance between herself and the enemy for a piercing attack.

1SP, attack deals normal attack damage, +25% of a speed roll, +10% crit chance. Requires only a distance of about 5 meters to her target, and no empty space behind.
2SP, attack deals normal attack damage, +50% of a speed roll, +15% crit chance. Requires a distance of about 10 meters to her target, and about 5 meters minimum to break. Solid obstacles in that breaking area can damage Icarus, and get damaged in return.
3SP, attack deals normal attack damage, +75% of a speed roll, +20% crit chance. Requires a distance of at least 25 meters to the target, and about 15 to break.


Limit Break -> God killing Lance.
Once the unbreakable perk is activated, shooting star becomes the god killing Lance manouver. Accelerating herself in an instant to a speed that basicaly ignites her body, Icarus becomes a projectile capable of taking down even the biggest of foes. Deals Str+200% of the normal attack damage, and 150% of a speed roll, +50% crit chance. Requires no distance to the target, but regardless of any obstacles behind the target, will damage Icarus to be out of the fight.


Blade Hurricane:
Icarus unhinges her waist, sets her upper body into a very fast spinning motion and blade extended, goes windwaker style on the enemy. This adds an AoE to her attack that deals damage to every enemy in melee range.

1SP, normal attack damage, to up to two enemies
2SP, +25% attack damage to the first target, normal attack damage two 2 more targets
3SP, +50% attack damage to the first target, +25% attack damage to the second, and normal damage to two more targets.

Limit Break -> Sky Splitter
Icarus massively charges her strength, and with a devastating swing, cleaves everything in a 180° angle in front of her, even if it is a mile away. The damage is increased by 300%, at the cost of not only collateraly destroying possibly an entire city, but also taking the ICARUS-05 out until it is repaired, which takes a while.

Pheonix Talon:
Using the flamethrower installed in her left arm, as well as the jet engines in her feet, Icarus imbues her normal attacks with a fiery twist.

1SP, attack deals normal attack damage, +25% of a mag roll (+5 from equipment, dont forget), has a 30% chance to set the enemy on fire, dealing an additional 1d6 damage every turn, until extinguished, 50% chance to extinguish on its own.
2SP, attack deals normal attack damage, +50% of a mag roll (+5 from equipment, dont forget), has a 60% chance to set the enemy on fire, dealing an additional 1d6 damage every turn, until extinguished, 40% chance to extinguish on its own.
3SP attack deals normal attack damage, +75% of a mag roll (+5 from equipment, dont forget), has a 90% chance to set the enemy on fire, dealing an additional 1d6 damage every turn, until extinguished, 30% chance to extinguish on its own.

Limit Break -> Salamander Dance
Once the unbreakable perk is active, Pheonix Talon is replaced by the Salamander Dance, Moving across the battlefield gracefully with flames shooting wide out of her limbs, Icarus covers the entire battlefield with flames that are almost unavoidable. Her movements are not random at all however, making a clear distinction between friend and foe. Deals no normal attack damage, as no actualy punches are being dealt, however deals +300% to the mag roll in a wide AoE, same fire debuff is applied as with the 3SP manouver.


Cold Embrace:
Icarus propels super dense coolant unto the enemy, which rapdily expands, cooling the enemy down massively.

1SP, attack deals normal magic damage, enemy is cooled down for 2 turns, decreasing speed and skill by 25%
2SP, attack deals normal magic damage, enemy is cooled down for 3 turns, decreasing speed and skill by 25%
3SP, attack deals normal magic damage, enemy is cooled down for 4 turns, decreasing speed and skill by 25%

Limit Break -> Frozen Sigil
Icarus literaly takes the enemy into a cold embrace, requiring a normal melee attack to land (no damage), and then proceeds to expell coolant from every vent avaiable, freezing the enemy, and herself, in place. This deals Mag+150% magic damage to the enemy instantly, Mag+100% every following turn. Icarus takes no damage from the frost, however can not move. She, and her victim, take double physical damage while frozen.


((insert idea for electric based attack here))


Blade Windmill:
Icarus, in anticipation of a blow, instead of letting her shield ossilate randomly, uses it to actively redirect an incoming attack unto the attacker, or a target in range.

1SP: Increases Icarus defence by an additional +3 damage block, and has a 25% chance to redirect the attack, in which case no damage is dealt to Icarus. If the target of the redirection is the attacker, this attack can not be dodged, but only deals 75% damage. If no attack lands Icarus while using this manouver, the SP is wasted
2SP: Increases Icarus defence by an additional +5 damage block, and has a 50% chance to redirect the attack, in which case no damage is dealt to Icarus. If the target of the redirection is the attacker, this attack can not be dodged, but only deals 75% damage. If no attack lands Icarus while using this manouver, only 1 SP is wasted
3SP: Increases Icarus defence by an additional +7 damage block, and has a 75% chance to redirect the attack, in which case no damage is dealt to Icarus. If the target of the redirection is the attacker, this attack can not be dodged, but only deals 75% damage. If no attack lands Icarus while using this manouver, only 2 SP is wasted

((insert idea for limit break here))

[Kansa]

Spoiler: Alice Legnard (click to show/hide)

Level 5

70 exp

Alice Legnard
Female
Age: 21

Appearence:

Alice is 6'0” tall and has long black hair which hangs down loose below her shoulders. Her eyes are bright blue and she is slim in stature. Almost all of the skin on her body is covered with clothing apart from her face, she always wears gloves.

Alice is currently living in Lyon with ICARUS, she makes money with her healing magic and is generally in the dark about ICARUS' hacking. She has also started to take collage classes so she can finish her education. Alice has mostly gotten over her fear of touching other people, at least in ICARUS' case, she has also taken steps to improve her speech impediment.

Stats    (100)
 HP------15 [45]
 MP-----18 [36]
 SPEED---11
 SKILL---10
 STR-----13
 MAG----24
 DEF-----11
 RES-----14

Perks
Mana Efficient: -1 to mana casting spells
Four extra stat points
Dramatic Save: Once per battle if a ally would fall below 0 hp by an attack Alice can immediately make a move at her max speed towards that ally and use any healing spell on them. The healing is done before the damage is taken.

Equipment
 Electric Machete - +5 damage. Is enchanted with the power to also shoot lightning

Ability:  General healing and medical things

Negligible-

Minor-
  Minor cure wounds (Restores 10% of the target's maximum health)


Medium-
Medium cure wounds (Restores 20% of the target's maximum health) (TN 3)
Cure (Removes a single negative effect from an ally) (TN3)

Major-

Major cure wounds (Restores 40% of maximum health to a target) (TN 6)
Purge(Removes all negative effects from an ally)  (TN6)
Mass minor cure wounds (Restores 10% of all nearby allies maximum health) (TN6)

Enormous-
Enormous cure wounds (Restores 60% of the target's maximum health) (TN 9)
Mass Purge (Removes all negativeeffects from all allies) (TN 9)
Mass medium cure wounds (Restores 20% of all nearby allies maximum health) (TN 9)

Gigantic-
Gigantic Cure Wounds (Restores 80% of the target's maximun health) (TN12)
Mass Major Cure Wounds(Restores 40% of all nearby allies maximum health) (TN12)

Colossal-
Colossal Cure Wounds (Heals target to full health) (TN 15)
Mass Enormous Cure Wounds (Restores 60% of all nearby allies maximum health) (TN 15)

[Empiricist]

You need to add a [/spoiler] tag to the end.

[Kansa]

Missed that, thank you

[smurfingtonthethird]

*cracks fingers*

Alright, I'm back on my PC now. No shitty phone copy pasting! Time to get shit done.

Let's leave it up to the GM.

Speaking of, GM, PM me any ideas and shit for balancing it if you have issues.

Always glad to help.

Until 682-tan is more balanced and fair, it's rejected. Although, granted, it is a legal character, it's also unfair and pretty 'munchkin-y'. I really, really don't like munchkins.

excuse me, a damage reduction of 21 points?

attacks averagely do what, 4-7 damage - assuming equal strength to defence. That's maaaybe a bit too tanky.

How about:

Minor: increases damage absorption by 2 for one turn

medium: increases damage absorption by 4 for one turn, or by 2 for 2 turns

big: increases damage absorption by 6 for one turn, or by 4 for 2 turns, or by 2 for 3 turns

etc.

All these abilities need to be used actively and take mana and a roll. No, you may not get nuked and just tank that and even become stronger from it. Invincibility is not a legit ability.

That fits generaly pretty well into how everyone elses abilities are scaling compared to mana cost and difficulty

I'd take Akroma's advice.

@KJ and @Ragnarok probably should post all relevant data on how their respective conspiracies acquired their funds, power, resources, etc. for all to audit. As I recall, PCs having access to the might of enormous conspiracies was an issue.

Aside from that, my involvement basically ends here. Good luck with the reset.

Good idea.

I'll do my best to hold the line, sir! Good luck with your future projects, and thanks for all the help.

Spoiler: Alice Legnard (click to show/hide)

Alice Legnard
Female
Age: 21

Appearence:

Alice is 6'0” tall and has long black hair which hangs down loose below her shoulders. Her eyes are bright blue and she is slim in stature. Almost all of the skin on her body is covered with clothing apart from her face, she always wears gloves.

Alice is currently living in Lyon with ICARUS, she makes money with her healing magic and is generally in the dark about ICARUS' hacking. She has also started to take collage classes so she can finish her education. Alice has mostly gotten over her fear of touching other people, at least in ICARUS' case, she has also taken steps to improve her speech impediment.

Stats    (100)
 HP------14 [42]
 MP-----15 [30]
 SPEED---10
 SKILL---10
 STR-----13
 MAG----18
 DEF-----11
 RES-----13

Perks
Mana Efficient: -1 to mana casting spells
Four extra stat points

Equipment
 Electric Machete - +5 damage. Is enchanted with the power to also shoot lightning

Ability:  General healing and medical things

Negligible-

Minor-
  Minor cure wounds (Restores d4 health to a target)


Medium-
Lesser cure wounds (Restores d4+2 health to a target) (TN 3)
Cure (Removes a single negative stat effect from an ally) (TN3)

Major-

Medium cure wounds (Restores 2d4+2 health to a target) (TN 6)
Purge(Removes all negative stat effects from an ally)  (TN6)
Mass minor cure wounds (Restores d4 health to all allies) (TN6)

Enormous-
Major cure wounds (Restores 2d4+5 health to a target) (TN 9)
Mass Purge (Removes all negative stat effects from all allies) (TN 9)
Mass lesser cure wounds (Restores d4+2 health to all allies) (TN 9)

Spoiler: Icarus (click to show/hide)

I.C.A.R.U.S (Independant Combat And Rescue Utility System)


An original project by IRIS and DARPA to create the ultimate weapon for the fight against the supernatural, 7 Prototypes were built and distributed around the world for testing purposes. Through interactions of remnant magic from Winries technomancy and Kyles supernatural fertility when he tried to update ICARUS programming, a sort of electronical spirit was sparked into life, which slowly but surely grew more intelligent, eventually sentient, and even obtained a soul. This spirit, Icarus, marks the beginning of an entirely new age of supernatural phenomena, but is sadly entirely reliant on a sufficently advanced computer to sustain her existance.

Currently lives with Alice in Lyon, trying to not draw too much attention, as previous events that maaaay be interpreted as a terrorist attack forced her to abandon the ICARUS-05, and go into hiding with the PIXEL-01. That doesn't stop her from going out at night and beating up criminals. She just can't help it, it's part of her nature. She also has taken up hacking, and is showing quite a talent for it, understanding systems better than most humans could. The PIXEL has various cables that can be used to gain access to systems, should a port be found, and has little trouble wirelessly accessing W-Lan, or even tinkering with mobile phones.


Stats (100)

Health:         14 - 42 HitPoints
Mana:           11 - 22 Mana
Speed:          16 (17)
Skill:             15
Strength:       13 (16)
Mag:              9
Defence:        13 (14)
Resistance:     9

Perks: (I guess they carry over from v2?): Brisk - Speed roll is increased by +1 when dodging
Statperk: Speed - Dual attack on two targets at 60% damage, calculated after damage reduction

Equipment:
PIXEL-01: A body created by Winry, which at least while dressed, looks human. Made for intermingling with society and evading law enforcement.

Robot-Fists +3 on damage on "unarmed" attacks. Concealed weaponry that pretty much looks like normal fists, but quite suprise when you notice they have a steel skelleton
Normal Handgun, +3 on damage, ranged, 10 shots in magazine, unregistered.
Steel-Frame (light armor) +1 on damage reduction
Weak to electricity, weak to acids, immune to poison, Overdrive is locked at small acts. Overdrive in this body can increase Str, Spe, Skl.

ICARUS-05: A body created by Winry in cooperation with IRIS and DARPA, after recent events, is locked up at the headquarters of Interpol in Lyon (that's where the HQ really is. Convenient coincidence that our old base is not far from there)

Orichalcum high-frequency blade, +4 on damage, ignores 1 point of armor. Increased damage against the divine.
Silver Particle Cannon, +2 on damage, magical damage, allows the increase of mag through Overdrive
Boron-Nitrate-fiber Armor +2 on damage reduction
High torque cyclonic barrier, when activated allows the increase of Def with overdrive.
Weak to electricity, resistant to fire, immune to poison, Overdrive is locked at medium acts. Overdrive can increase Str, Spe, Skl, Mag, Def.


HYDRA-01: A body designed by DARPA, and ICARUS by faking the identity of various designers that worked from home. Not built yet.


Ability: Overdrive. Icarus sends energy into her systems to for a short time, greatly increase her combat abilities. Not all stats can be buffed, details in backstory. Because her current body, the PIXEL-01 is not the high tech military hardware she used to pilot, her abilities are currently locked at minor acts, until the ICARUS-05 (medium) and/or the HYDRA-01 (big) have been attained

Negliable: Sensors. Unless whatever Icarus is scanning is actively shielded against scans, her Sensors can gather a large amount of information hidden to the naked eye. [locked]: Flight.

Small: Increase of single stat by 1.5 or two stats by 1.2 (TN: No roll, cost 3 mana)

Medium: Doubling of a single stat, 1.5 of two stats, increase by 1.2 of 3 stats (TN:3, cost 5 mana)

Big: 2.5* a single stat, doubling of two stats, increase by 1.5 of 3 stats (TN:3, minor drawback - deals d3 damage to body, cost 7 mana)

All increases only last a turn.

Accepted. I was worried about ICARUS being a bit OP, but the systems work out nicely.

[Empiricist]

Likewise, it's been a pleasure

[Akroma]

compared to the old system, Icarus ability got nerfed. In the old system, she straight up go an increase on the roll, so with enough mana put in, she could not roll below that point. In the new system, all that is increased is the range of the dice - which does not actually guarantee you roll higher. In the example fight, she kept increasing her strength, but only rolled higher than her actual normal strength *once*. It seems an appropriate downside, considered how versatile the overdrive is. And a bit of a gamble is always nice. No more what Icarus ability used to be, a button that said "pass next roll"

[smurfingtonthethird]

Hit the jackpot:

ICARUS
Alucard, Bartimaeus, HILDA, Lizzy, Winry
Selina
Alice
Dalia
Stella
Frederika
Kyle
Ashley
Sen
Tobias
Laura
Grimrick
Angel/Nuriel
Maria/Anima

Which characters are still active? I'm pretty sure Bart died somehow, and I've already posted up some charsheets.

[Akroma]

I am not sure, but most of these should be active. Bart I think did not die, but was locked away fro plot reasons

[smurfingtonthethird]

Well, once we're out of this endless OOC deadlock, we can get back to the game. Time to think up some plots...

[Akroma]

don't worry smurf, the players have you covered. I have 3 detailed plots more or less finished (though everything needs re-statting), and a large, overarching plot, which is in collaboration with Projeck. Then there is also PrivateNomad who has at least one plot chalked up. That's how ROTMG goes, most plots are player driven.


The v3 starts basicaly with me and PN kicking off my first plot, which acts as an introduction for the overarching plot. Feel of course free to think of plots making use of the overarching plot once that has been established. The whole point of making it overarching is to provide a set of reoccuring villains that can to some extend be used freely by everyone. Less of the villain of the week, and more of the evil organisation kind of thing

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Hey guys, mind if I upgrade Anima's staff to masterwork? It IS a magically crafted object and it IS really damn old- something that old is either rusted or really damn well magicaly crafted. I dunno for what it would be used FOR, specifically as she can't use flashy fireballs, but blah. It made sense in my head.

[Akroma]

humm, I'd say since it is only a fluff item that never gets used, since you said you can't do anything but do summons, I dont see why the stats even matter - unless you plan on giving the staff to someone else.

[Empiricist]

Well, I suppose it may matter if she decides to become a pimp and repurpose it as her cane. I suppose the gods she summons would count as her homies in that case.
Anyway, one final note: if Will is still going to be used, then his rifle may actually end up with a negative bonus due to its nature.

[GreatWyrmGold]

The characters look properly-GURPSed, though I'd argue that including an explanation of what everything is is more important than the raw GURPSey stuff.

When we make the trope page, lets not clog it with the old stuff.

We already have a trope page.

Current one is really clogged up in my opinion. We could just add on to it, I guess. Keep the old one and use a new one maybe.

Why do we need a new one? Does the trope page for Star Wars ignore the prequels and the Expanded Universe? Does the trope page for D&D cover only AD&D? Does the trope page for TWoOtA stop and link to a new one once things took a turn for the serious?

...GWG still has Hell, I have the insane clusterfuck that is the Celestial Bureaucracy...

1. The Celestial Bureaucracy was part of my Hell-lore before you got it. Just sayin'...
2. My Hell-lore has been ground into dust by anyone who thought they had a better idea of what demons or the Afterlife should be.
3. Despite designing demons, I've never claimed that I should control them.

But yeah seriously relevant flaws and 150 in variable power pool Y/N?

That would give her 15 points to play with at any time. Balanced as a PC, but pathetic for the creator of the universe.

Soooo I'm making 682-chan.
Their advantages would be something like this:
Bloodlust -10
Enemies (IRIS or Midorikawa Group, @ Gm's Discretion) (Large Group, Hunter) -40
DR (Absorbtion, Semi-Ablative, No Armor) - 21 levels, 147 points
Sanitized Metabolism - 1 pt
Penetrating Voice - 1 pt
No Hangover - 1 pt
aight?

Hey, someone who wants to make their own character! Just keep in mind that this isn't actually GURPS.
DR is a bit...wonky. If you want to have it reduce damage, you halve the DR (ie, DR 21 would take 10 damage off of each attack). The reasoning for that can be found in my GURPSifying post about HP, FP, &c, but the short version is that attacks in RMG-3 tend to do a lot less damage than ones in GURPS. You might want to reduce it to 20 and save some points. Seven points...you can surely do something with that. Maybe tale Talons and have a natural Good weapon.
Or drop even more DR and add some Regeneration.

Ok, To be completely honest, No matter how 682 is made, statted, or otherwise written, it's just going to end up being another immortal being that no one can deal with IC or OOC. Rebooting the game was meant to get away from that. No offense, but please do not make such an OP character. And yes, Talia is OP. No matter how you fight her, all she does is get stronger. There is no winning against her.

Looking at her stats, she isn't that OP. Sure, she's tough, but she's not that tough. Enough bullets will wear down her armor, and big enough bullets will punch right through it. Plus, she doesn't have much else, and the Midiyorkas (I know I spelled that wrong) should show up in at least a third of her adventures to capture or kill her.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Stella finished her last year of school and got accepted into university for a dual chemical engineering/biochem degree in which she did well but not top of the class. She kept in touch with the council of Wyrms just in case, but was basically happy that they left her alone.  She bought a house (somewhere not sure where kinda depends on if Will wanted to move in with her, but not in the center of a city) with money that her mother had given her to get set up. and tutors university students, she is not sure that she wants a different job.

Some but not many of her students know she is a dragon, specifically the ones she likes in addition to any trouble makers.

How would the trouble-makers find out?

The carapace armour is mainly physical in nature. Certain spells will crack her open like wet cement...

Certain spells? I'd say just about any spells would ignore her armor. And don't get me started on save-or-die. She's like...um...*factchecks Pokemon wiki* Dammit, Ferrothorn has excellent Special Defense. Um...pretend it doesn't, and she's like Ferrothorn. Sure, she's tough, but Special Attacks get past her defenses, and Fire(ing AP rounds) is super effective!

@KJ and @Ragnarok probably should post all relevant data on how their respective conspiracies acquired their funds, power, resources, etc. for all to audit. As I recall, PCs having access to the might of enormous conspiracies was an issue.

Aside from that, my involvement basically ends here. Good luck with the reset.

Indeed.
Thank you.

Anyway, one final note: if Will is still going to be used, then his rifle may actually end up with a negative bonus due to its nature.

Huh?