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[Dsarker]

Oh, and remember. Last stage is, after having had the cupcakes style story up for a day, we switch it back to cute.

[Crazy Cow]

Hmm...
I noticed there tends to be a bit of a bias against OC ponies in stories, at least involved with the Mane Six. Although it would be interesting, playing off the absolute best and absolute worst sides of our OCs...

@Bauglir
Please, do point our way. I would love to take a bit of credit for this masterpiece of a troll brewing here :p

[Fniff]

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Crazy fell to his knees, dropping his saw. Fniff's grip no the gun loosened, and it fell. Fniff ran over to Fluttershy, hugging her. She was a wreck. Blood covered her coat, her throat was mostly sawed off, and her eye was hanging out. She was bleeding out, but Fniff still held her tight.

"I am so sorry, Fluttershy... I... Didn't get here soon enough..." He said, looking Fluttershy in the eyes. "I am so goddamn sorry...." Fluttershy looked at him, then at the gun, with a pleading look. He nodded, and took the gun. Tears dripped down his cheeks as he put the gun in Fluttershy's mouth and pulled the trigger.

I vote for mane 6.

[TheBronzePickle]

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Slag gently stroked Pinkie's blood-soaked mane as she stared at the bared muscle before her. Twilight was trying to mumble something against the stitches that bound her jaw in place, the mumbles barely audible over the pink pony's crying. Suddenly, the gentle hand became firm and shoved Pinkie's mouth over her friend's snout. Another hand came up from under and squeezed Pinkie's jaws shut. Twilight made a horrid hum of pain as Pinkie's teeth pressed into the flesh. Slag slowly withdrew Pinkie's head from Twilight's, tearing flesh and causing blood to spill into Pinkie's maw. As the two became separate, Slag tilted Pinkie's head back and held her mouth closed until she finished swallowing. Her tears flowed like a river as she made a slow, sad whine.

[Jacob/Lee]

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Slag gently stroked Pinkie's blood-soaked mane as she stared at the bared muscle before her. Twilight was trying to mumble something against the stitches that bound her jaw in place, the mumbles barely audible over the pink pony's crying. Suddenly, the gentle hand became firm and shoved Pinkie's mouth over her friend's snout. Another hand came up from under and squeezed Pinkie's jaws shut. Twilight made a horrid hum of pain as Pinkie's teeth pressed into the flesh. Slag slowly withdrew Pinkie's head from Twilight's, tearing flesh and causing blood to spill into Pinkie's maw. As the two became separate, Slag tilted Pinkie's head back and held her mouth closed until she finished swallowing. Her tears flowed like a river as she made a slow, sad whine.

Oh god, if stuff like this is going to be in the fic then there is going to be some grade A trolling going down.

[Fniff]

I also vote it has an ending where the serial killer is killed but the rescuer realizes that the rescuee is beyond saving, and mercy kills her/him, then kills he/rself, ending the fic on a neutral tone.

[Dsarker]

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Rarity desperately strained against the ropes that held her spreadeagled to the ground. She tried desperately to forget what had happened and what they had planned for her. It seemed so long ago that her only troubles had been finding the right ribbon for her latest outfit. Celestia above, the pain was unbearable. But she couldn't let out a scream. Her throat throbbed in pain but no sound could emerge from her mouth. The perpetrator, a strange pegasus who claimed to be a doctor, was almost dancing in glee, the scalpel held securely in her mouth. "Friesden always gets the job done!" she shouted in joy. Rarity would never be able to speak again, but this was the least of her troubles. Her life was about to be ended painfully and horrifically by the bloodsplattered 'doctor'.

[TheBronzePickle]

There's going to be multiple serial killers, namely everyone who participates in writing the gorefic. We're self-inserting, remember?

By the way, on the cute fic, we need to at least try to include all the main cast so a larger body of people will check it out. Of course, I suck at normal stories, so I won't be able to help much more than vague suggestions X(.

Edit: I'm going in as a human, if that's all right. Not anything against ponies, but hands have a few nifty uses hooves lack. Like fingernails that can easily get under small bits of skin to peel.

I was also thinking, each writer could claim a pony to torture with Pinkie Pie off limits. As we go through the story, we pass Pinkie around and show her our 'work' as we continue to mind rape her.

[Crazy Cow]

Right, so it seems that the general plan is this:
*OCs arrive in town*
*Mane cast gets tortured horribly*
*OCs doing the torturing get killed by the other OCs*
*Surviving mane cast mercy killed*
*Remaining OCs commit seppuku*

So, what's the game plan for the gorn version?

[Dsarker]

The gorn one is we make a cupcakes-length chapter for each of the tortures.

[Jacob/Lee]

Someone should totally place me somewhere (as a bystander!) because I am a terrible writer.

[Fniff]

Right, who is torturing and who is doing the noose jig? I'm rescuing Fluttershy and being human. Suicides by biting the gun.

[Flying Dice]

I will be watching this, but I'm not going to participate, as I actually like having my stuff up on EqD and don't want to endanger that.

_{Which doesn't mean that it won't be funny if done well...}

[Dsarker]

Ooh! Even better idea! OCs doing the torturing are actually working for the opposite side after the mane 6 splits apart over an argument. Double suicides for all!

[Crazy Cow]

In all seriousness...
Maybe the 'normal' one is where our OCs show up in Ponyville as a group set out to found a settlement in the name of some country or other. Problem is, we get lost int he Everfree and come out the other side with little in the way of supplies or knowledge about our surroundings. The Mane Cast graciously aid us in getting back on track. We can throw in some Bay12 injokes and have some fun with it.

And Crazy the mechanic is going to torture Fluttershy, unless anyone has objections to this.