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[Swordstar]

I'd like to be part of chapter 0 but will do whatever works best

[Tawa]

There. Finished backstory and gave a decent explanation to my character's decidedly foreign appearance.

Spoiler: Trakri Vendison, Fourth Son of Lord Vendison (click to show/hide)

Name: Trakri Vendison
Race: Human
Class: Rider Trainee
Character Specific Skill: Counter
Affinity: Wind
Personal Fault: Asthmatic Horse: If Trakri travels his full movement range in one round while mounted, he gains -2 Evasion until the next round.
Personal Skill: A Friend Calls for Aid: When an allied unit within 3 spaces of Trakri has half HP or less, [NAME] gets a +15 to hit.
 
Preferred stats: Skill, Speed
 
Weapon profs: Lance (E)
 
Starting Progression: 330%/330%
 
HP: 16+1 (60%)
STR: 4 (60%) (Raised from 40%)
MAG: 0 (0%)
SKL: 3+1 (70%)
CON: 4
AID: 3+14 (Horseback)
LCK: 2 (10%)
DEF: 3 (60%)
RES: 0 (20%)
SPD: 3+2 (70%)
MOV: 4+2 (Horseback)
 

Code: [Select]

Inventory:
Name            Type ( ) RNG MT WT CR Hit QL
Iron Lance      Pier (E)  1  7  8  0   80 45
---
Vulnerary

Battle Stats (with weapon):
AT: 11
Hit: 89
AS: 1
Eva: 4
Crt: 2
DG: 2
 
Bio:
Trakri comes from the far northeastern edge of Molvonia, born to a small noble family that seems to have interbred with some heretical Lehtians somewhere down the line. Being the third youngest of six siblings, Trakri was never raised to rule the fiefdom of House Vendis; rather, he was trained as a knight from day one. He showed an average skill with the lance, his chosen weapon, but he loved riding his horse, leading to his decision to become a member of the cavalry. When it was announced that [LORD] was going to be claiming [his/her] own land, Trakri, roughly of age twenty-seven at the time, immediately deemed this his chance to see adventure and glory and rode off to join [LORD]'s escorts in hopes of dealing justice to villains of all sorts.

NINJAFAKEDIT: I hear your advice, good sir Glowcat... but I must have GLORY as soon as possible! Chapter 0, please.

[GiglameshDespair]

Took me like half an hour, but I finally managed to get this random goatee guy who I have deemed to be the source of Trakri to smile.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

That last one is supposed to be anger, since I didn't feel like fiddling around with his mustache any more but the sprite sheet came with free squinty eyes. He has a very slightly upward-curved mouth in the third one.

I read that as goatse and was very afraid of opening that spoiler.

[Sirus]

Seems like Giglamesh and I will be joining in the prologue. Assuming IRC discussion is accurate.

[Sirus]

There. Finished backstory and gave a decent explanation to my character's decidedly foreign appearance.

Spoiler: Trakri Vendison, Fourth Son of Lord Vendison (click to show/hide)

Name: Trakri Vendison
Race: Human
Class: Rider Trainee
Character Specific Skill: Counter
Affinity: Wind
Personal Fault: Asthmatic Horse: If Trakri travels his full movement range in one round while mounted, he gains -2 Evasion until the next round.
Personal Skill: A Friend Calls for Aid: When an allied unit within 3 spaces of Trakri has half HP or less, [NAME] gets a +15 to hit.
 
Preferred stats: Skill, Speed
 
Weapon profs: Lance (E)
 
Starting Progression: 330%/330%
 
HP: 16+1 (60%)
STR: 4 (60%) (Raised from 40%)
MAG: 0 (0%)
SKL: 3+1 (70%)
CON: 4
AID: 3+14 (Horseback)
LCK: 2 (10%)
DEF: 3 (60%)
RES: 0 (20%)
SPD: 3+2 (70%)
MOV: 4+2 (Horseback)
 

Code: [Select]

Inventory:
Name            Type ( ) RNG MT WT CR Hit QL
Iron Lance      Pier (E)  1  7  8  0   80 45
---
Vulnerary

Battle Stats (with weapon):
AT: 11
Hit: 89
AS: 1
Eva: 4
Crt: 2
DG: 2
 
Bio:
Trakri comes from the far northeastern edge of Molvonia, born to a small noble family that seems to have interbred with some heretical Lehtians somewhere down the line. Being the third youngest of six siblings, Trakri was never raised to rule the fiefdom of House Vendis; rather, he was trained as a knight from day one. He showed an average skill with the lance, his chosen weapon, but he loved riding his horse, leading to his decision to become a member of the cavalry. When it was announced that [LORD] was going to be claiming [his/her] own land, Trakri, roughly of age twenty-seven at the time, immediately deemed this his chance to see adventure and glory and rode off to join [LORD]'s escorts in hopes of dealing justice to villains of all sorts.

NINJAFAKEDIT: I hear your advice, good sir Glowcat... but I must have GLORY as soon as possible! Chapter 0, please.

Uh, Taw? You need to use your working sheet. This is the one you made pre-edit.

[Glowcat]

Personal Fault: Asthmatic Horse: If Trakri travels his full movement range in one round while mounted, he gains -2 Evasion until the next round.
Personal Skill: A Friend Calls for Aid: When an allied unit within 3 spaces of Trakri has half HP or less, [NAME] gets a +15 to hit.

That fault is.. not even close to balanced :x
Change it to either -2 of a hard stat (e.g. Attack Speed, Defense, Strength/DMG) or -15 Evasion.

The Personal Skill is also really powerful if you intend the ally to get the bonus (and not Trakri). I could tentatively accept +10 to hit though, possibly with an easier trigger of the Fault.

[F.O.E.]

:"I sense grumpiness. Time to use friendship beams of death."

BTW, who here can identify the two series I used to make my character without using google?

That's very clearly FE6 Anna but the colors look like you took them from FE8's palette

[darkpaladin109]

I'd be alright with joining whenever.

[Tawa]

Personal Fault: Asthmatic Horse: If Trakri travels his full movement range in one round while mounted, he gains -2 Evasion until the next round.
Personal Skill: A Friend Calls for Aid: When an allied unit within 3 spaces of Trakri has half HP or less, [NAME] gets a +15 to hit.

That fault is.. not even close to balanced :x
Change it to either -2 of a hard stat (e.g. Attack Speed, Defense, Strength/DMG) or -15 Evasion.

The Personal Skill is also really powerful if you intend the ally to get the bonus (and not Trakri). I could tentatively accept +10 to hit though, possibly with an easier trigger of the Fault.

Eheheh, whoops. I accidentally only fixed the Personals in the posted sheet, then wrote the backstory in the one I wrote in a word processor.

Spoiler: Real Sheet (click to show/hide)

Name: Trakri Vendison
Race: Human
Class: Rider Trainee
Character Specific Skill: Counter
Affinity: Wind
Personal Fault: Asthmatic Horse: If Trakri travels his full movement range in one round while mounted, he gains -15 Evasion until the next round.
Personal Skill: Fight Harder: When Trakri has half HP or less, he gets a +15 to hit until the next round.
 
Preferred stats: Skill, Speed
 
Weapon profs: Lance (E)
 
Starting Progression: 330%/330%
 
HP: 16+1 (60%)
STR: 4 (50%)
MAG: 0 (0%)
SKL: 3+1 (70%)
CON: 4
AID: 3+14 (Horseback)
LCK: 2 (10%)
DEF: 3 (60%)
RES: 0 (10%)
SPD: 3+2 (70%)
MOV: 4+2 (Horseback)
 

Code: [Select]

Inventory:
Name            Type ( ) RNG MT WT CR Hit QL
Iron Lance      Pier (E)  1  7  8  0   80 45
---
Vulnerary

Battle Stats (with weapon):
AT: 11
Hit: 89
AS: 1
Eva: 4
Crt: 2
DG: 2
 
Bio:
Trakri comes from the far northeastern edge of Molvonia, born to a small noble family that seems to have interbred with some heretical Lehtians somewhere down the line. Being the third youngest of six siblings, Trakri was never raised to rule the fiefdom; rather, he was trained as a knight from day one. He showed an average skill with the lance, his chosen weapon, but he loved riding his horse, leading to his parents deeming that he should be a mounted warrior. When it was announced that [LORD] was going to be claiming [his/her] own land, Trakri immediately deemed this his chance to see adventure and glory and rode off to join [LORD]'s escorts in hopes of dealing justice to villains of all kinds.

Sorry for my constant noob-induced disruptions. ._.

[Glowcat]

It's alright, though you still have incorrect Strength Growth. That would only apply if you used the Hybrid rule (requires 40% put into both Strength and Magic)

[Tawa]

Fixed. That was also corrected in the first posted sheet.

I think I'm finally ready.

[scapheap]

That's very clearly FE6 Anna but the colors look like you took them from FE8's palette

The character, not the portrait.

[Lucus Casius]

As I think you included me amongst the character list, here's my sheet sans bio.  Working on that.

Spoiler: Teagan (click to show/hide)

Name: Teagan
Race: Human
Class: Performer Trainee
Character Specific Skill: Miracle
Affinity: <Pick from one of two (determined randomly by moi)>
Personal Fault: Reminiscent:  When targeted by siege magic or ballistae, -2 Def/Res.
Personal Skill: Battlefield Academic:  When over 50% HP, +15 Eva.
Personal Skill: Survivor of Countless Wars:  While three or more enemies are within three squares, +2 LCK.
 
Preferred stats: Luck, Speed
 
Weapon profs:
 
Starting Progression: 330%
 
HP: 15 (80%)
STR: 2 (0%)
MAG: 2 (+1) (60%)
SKL: 2 (+1) (50%)
CON: 3
AID: 2
LCK: 5 (+1) (60%)
DEF: 1 (10%)
RES: 3 (10%)
SPD: 5 (+1) (60%)
MOV: 4
 

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Inventory:
Name            Type () RNG MT WT CR Hit QL
<starting weapon here>
Vulnerary 3/3

Battle Stats (with weapon):
AT: -
Hit: --
AS: 6
Eva: 18
Crt: 1
DG: 6
 
Bio:

[F.O.E.]

The character, not the portrait.

Oh. Um, Serra (FE7) and L'arachel (FE8)?

[scapheap]

Oh. Um, Serra (FE7) and L'arachel (FE8)?

Character's sheet. Sorry that I wasn't clear.