You forgot to mention the dubious quality of writing, the lack of detail, the questionable plots, the tendency for people to project onto their characters, the Mary Sue-ish traits, the constant OOC arguments and how irritating it is to keep up with this when people post up to ten pages over night of content, likely irrelevant to your characer.
Shush, Empiricist. We all know it's pretty bad, but that's why we all love it. Some Cheese and Ham isn't always bad after all.
It is when it constitutes the majority of it and is rather jarring considering the original plot and gameplay (which also had far greater potential lethality).
You forgot to mention the dubious quality of writing, the lack of detail, the questionable plots, the tendency for people to project onto their characters, the Mary Sue-ish traits, the constant OOC arguments and how irritating it is to keep up with this when people post up to ten pages over night of content, likely irrelevant to your characer.
Just a random question because I like to improve my writing and stuff: Except for length of posts (I'd like to post longer stuff but I never have enough to say xD) do I do any of these things?
I never actually mentioned length of posts, though if memory serves, Mallory did have actual expressions described, the signifier rather than the signified so that definitely was a nice deviation from the norm. Overall though I can't comment too much on your characters seeing as Mallory was initially active when I was a bit busy though I don't recall anything that irritated me pertaining to his design. I have no clue about your persona user though seeing as I've hardly been paying attention now ha I've left.