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[Kot]

Eh, I think there's still this one thing, as the robe lines up with the hat, but the nose breaks it up pretty well so it's not a biggie.
The crocodile is damn fine, tho the top of his head looks weird.
Maybe because crocodiles aren't exactly bipedal but eh.

[Yoink]

Spoiler: So I started doodling intensely today. (click to show/hide)

I forgot to shade his/her right shoe. :c

[HawaiianJon]

So I had a dream (Large Image Warning)

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[Haspen]

Tileset stuff

Spoiler: dun steal plos (click to show/hide)

[flabort]

Even I can tell there's not enough contrast in that tileset.

[Haspen]

I thought the ivory wall strips help distinguish them from brownish floors? v:

[flabort]

I can tell between the tops of the walls and the floor, but I can't tell the pillars, floor, treasure, or sides of the walls from the floor.

[Tawa]

I'd say that it's just a bit too monocolor. Maybe darken the floor a bit? There's also a conspicuous bright pixel on the mid-upper-right of the dirt that makes it look like the floor is built out of doors.

Pixel art on the walls is top notch, though.

[XhAPPYSLApX]

Reworked my knight, got rid of the foot tapping until I learn proper leg animations, but I added a sheen to his helm, but I don't know if I should tweak it, need some opinions on that.

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[FArgHalfnr]

Reworked my knight, got rid of the foot tapping until I learn proper leg animations, but I added a sheen to his helm, but I don't know if I should tweak it, need some opinions on that.

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The shining should probably happen as he's moving his head (I think?). Also just saying that I liked the foot tapping
Otherwise it looks amazing, much better than any animation I can make (see my avatar, that's basically the best I can do (and also the only thing I ever animated)).

[XhAPPYSLApX]

Reworked my knight, got rid of the foot tapping until I learn proper leg animations, but I added a sheen to his helm, but I don't know if I should tweak it, need some opinions on that.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

The shining should probably happen as he's moving his head (I think?). Also just saying that I liked the foot tapping
Otherwise it looks amazing, much better than any animation I can make (see my avatar, that's basically the best I can do (and also the only thing I ever animated)).

I will do the foot tapping again at some point, but he really shoudn't be bending his foot quite like that. Like someone else said, he should be moving his whole leg rather than his foot. And thank you for the compliment

[Rubidium]

Reworked my knight, got rid of the foot tapping until I learn proper leg animations, but I added a sheen to his helm, but I don't know if I should tweak it, need some opinions on that.

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The shining should probably happen as he's moving his head (I think?). Also just saying that I liked the foot tapping
Otherwise it looks amazing, much better than any animation I can make (see my avatar, that's basically the best I can do (and also the only thing I ever animated)).

I will do the foot tapping again at some point, but he really shoudn't be bending his foot quite like that. Like someone else said, he should be moving his whole leg rather than his foot. And thank you for the compliment

Nicely done!

[XhAPPYSLApX]

Nicely done!

Thanks again

[NJW2000]

Rushed this one, an ISG is pretty hard to manage if you get back from the beach at mindnight. Oh well, who needs sleep.

Spoiler: more skelingtons. (click to show/hide)

[Nirur Torir]

Reworked my knight, got rid of the foot tapping until I learn proper leg animations, but I added a sheen to his helm, but I don't know if I should tweak it, need some opinions on that.

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[Snip]

Good work so far.

The helmet sheen is an interesting idea. I think I'd like it better if it was slightly more ... Cartoony? Exaggerated? (More of a stylistic preference on my part than something that will objectively improve the piece.)
Also, it being a straight line makes the helmet look flat. It should curve and contour to the surface, with the right side moving more slowly. (Personally, I'd try starting the right side at the ear and sweeping up, or sweep up from the bottom where it starts now. I think either would work.)

I like that the cape now moves with the arm, but it looks too static without the bottom changing colors as well.