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[Sensei]

I think William, in that pic, looks very separate from the background. Also the cobwebs are crummy. Else is good.

[Solifuge]

I haven't looked back in on this in a while... I'm liking the most recent pages, and the direction you're going in with the art here. It's getting rather polished... really fond of how William looks on page 40 and 41.

[Fault]

yeah it is just stupid how inconsistent william looked on the early pages. Glad you think he looks better now.

On a similar note, is it getting easier to tell the dwarves apart? do you think I should do like... a character model sheet for them, to clear up any confusion?

[Acanthus117]

The more the merrier, brah.

[Sensei]

I bet I could tell them apart if I wasn't only seeing them every two weeks.

That said, I can mostly tell them apart but i still don't remember their names too well. I think you should have one of them braid their beard if you want them more recognizable.

[Fault]

page #43 is up.

In which the party starts the long(?) trek home.

I've switched to a finer Pen since the last page (my old one ran out of ink) so the lines are a little different...

[Sensei]

I was thinking something looked different. I think some panels are harder to make out than normal and some easier. A finer pen would definitely be a better choice in color but in black and white the large shots are a little unclear sometimes.

[Fault]

page #44 is up.

in which SHIFT GOES HUNTING

my webcomic stats say my update ratio is back to once a week, apparently... hope I can keep it there.

[SolarShado]

is he killing it with his bare hands? 

[Armok]

Bad. Ass.

[Fault]

I've started doing little pages that explain character traits and physical appearances so the characters are easier to tell apart.

Spoiler:  dwarven labourers (click to show/hide)

I don't think individualistic is actually a word

Bad. Ass.

is he killing it with his bare hands? 

I think the alarming part here is how close he got to the deer before it noticed him.

[Mephansteras]

Very nice.

[Sensei]

I think the cloaks hide their breadth, making them look gnome-ish. On the other hand, from the way they look in that drawing, I could never possibly mistake the two (although I'm not sure how distinguished they are from behind).

[Fault]

I think the cloaks hide their breadth, making them look gnome-ish

yeah I hate the cloaks now.

they were kind of like... a lazy way to avoid drawing their entire bodies before I had finalized the design. But now that I have, the cloaks just make them look.. well, as you said, gnome-like. They totally have to lose the cloaks like... really soon.

(although I'm not sure how distinguished they are from behind).

Norik has his hair in a pony tail... and Kolgan doesn't. that's about it, for now...

[Sensei]

I noticed the colored beards help distinguish them a lot, which explains why we've been confused about the dwarves from time to time.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)