I dug up your previous post here, and you're
definitely making progress. The proportions are much closer to what they should be.
Anatomy remains the biggest issue. Her neck seems to be almost as thick as her torso, and actually wider than her head should be. Her hair grows like a mane, completely covering the back of her neck. Unless you are drawing some kind of werewolf, hair's pretty much confined to the top and back of the head. Not the neck and not the ears. There's too much lower jaw between her lips and the tip of her chin. The eye seems to be pictured from the front in a profile, like something painted by an Egyptian priest. The breasts are too high. The midsection looks mainly like a cylinder of dough, needs more shape, should probably be a bit thinner. The foreground arm doesn't look like it actually connects to the shoulder. Even when an arm is completely straight, the elbow should still be visible. The right leg is longer than the left leg, and both legs seem to be built mostly of weird lumps. The skirt should have some depth to it to provide the viewer with a clear reference as to which leg is which. Hands and feet are some kind of claws, so I can't say much about them.
Okay, that's quite a block of text, especially since it's essentially a list. I can clarify as needed. But yeah, this is a huge improvement over the last one. You seem to mostly have a hang of the rough shape a human body should be, and it's possible to pick out individual mistakes.
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