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I'm not a player but I want to see the results.

[Swordstar]

As for what classes are needed, we don't have a performer or a peg knight, maybe a few other things, but really just make what you want. Making a class that you find interesting and that fits a character you like will make a better character overall.

[Twinwolf]

We also don't have light magic.

[Swordstar]

Oh yeah, that. Forgot I had been the only one, lol. But my point still stands! Make a character concept. Then find a class that fits it.

[GiglameshDespair]

Hmm.

I'm tempted to go with a performer instead of a wyvern knight. If I do...



will be (the base idea of) my mug instead.

[Bluexdog]

  "When do we start?"

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Name: May Ford
Class: Mage Trainee > Nun > Holy Guard
Character Specific Skill: Renewal
Affinity:
Personal Fault: Sisterhood (-2 attack damage when facing Monk/Nun and their promotions)
Personal Skill: Faith Armor (+2 DEF when within 3 spaces of 3 allies)

Preferred stats: Magic, Skill
Weapon profs: Light (E)

Level: 1 (0/100)
Total Level: 1

Progression spent: 330

HP: 17 (60%)
STR: 2 (0%)
MAG: 5 + 2 (65%)
SKL: 4 (40%)
CON: 3
AID: 2
LCK: 2 (10%)
DEF: 0 + 2 (60%)
RES: 3 (60%)
SPD: 4 (35%)
MOV: 4

Bio: 
         May was born into a church that trained healers and holy guards. She had a happy childhood learning all their is to know about light magic. Years later she became a sister of the church and even married a knight. Sadly all good things come to an end and that end was a murderous dark mage. The mage wiped out the most of the church except May and a few children, luckily for the May the mage was ransacking the armory so she took the children and escaped to a nearby town. May is often seen wondering the grave stones of her fallen sisters and husband.

[Twinwolf]

You seem to have mixed up Character Specific Skills and Personal Skills.

[Swordstar]

That personal fault won't work. First, we'll never face trainee enemies. So what you want is something along the lines of -x when facing monk tree. That gets monk and both promotions.  Neither will the Personal Skill since most of the maps we'll be on are going to be during the day time. Also your backstory seems... screwed up and incomplete.

[Twinwolf]

They seem to have edited the personal skill already.

[Swordstar]

Yeah I started posting before he did. I would also question how this dark mage was able to wipe out the entire church but was unable to stand up to a trainee. A more realistic story would be that he missed her because she was hiding or that she was visiting the town for some reason, etc.

[Twinwolf]

He was weakened from fighting the other light magic users and then she got a lucky shot?

[Swordstar]

Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. We're trainees. We're not meant to be awesome. If he was able to murder all those others, even if he was weakened, it seems a bit unreasonable that she'd be able to just destroy him.

[Bluexdog]

Ok I know her Bio is dark but its supposed to be like that. also I fixed the way she killed the bad guy

[Solymr]

"luckily for the May she had her spell book so she defended the children by sneaking up on the murderous mage and stabbed him with her now deceased husbands sword"

Wait what how spellbook into sword

To be honest instead of changing one sentence the whole thing needs a revision. A full rewrite once you know how helps.

[Swordstar]

It has nothing to do with her bio being dark that I'm having issues with. My character's family tried to have her killed. The issue that I (and others) are having with it is that this dark mage blasts his way through an entire church of fully trained light magic users and their healers, and then loses to a mage trainee using a weapon that she has no idea how to use by the mechanics of the game. Yes the backstory is not directly connected to the mechanics of the game, but the backstory still needs to make sense and fit with the game.

[Bluexdog]

"luckily for the May she had her spell book so she defended the children by sneaking up on the murderous mage and stabbed him with her now deceased husbands sword"

Wait what how spellbook into sword

To be honest instead of changing one sentence the whole thing needs a revision. A full rewrite once you know how helps.

thank u I missed that