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[mastahcheese]

Well, I'm suprised nobody's talked about it here.
So Haspen made a custom alchemist class for FEF, and Xanmy was talking about making one for something, so I'm posting my lame ideas for classes here, since it seems like the most fitting place.
Mastahcheese's lame class ideas

First Classes:

Spoiler: Sorcerer (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Mage Trainee
Promotes to: Snake Charmer or Oracle
Weapon skills:
Dark (D) Instruments (D)
Class skills:
Levitation
Battle Caster: If the Sorcerer has an instrument in their inventory that they can wield, they may target themselves with it when making an attack. This uses up 1 QL of the instrument, and the effects take place before the attack is made.

Stats: Similar to the Shaman class, but with more emphasis on defense than offense.

Spoiler: Skald (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Archer Trainee
Promotes to: Huntsman or Harper
Weapons skills:
Bows (D) Lyrics (D)
Class skill:
Whistling Arrow:
If the Skald has a lyric in their inventory that they can wield when making an attack with a bow, they may apply the effects of the lyric on up to two allies adjacent to the target if the Skald hits. This uses 1 QL of the lyric for each ally targeted this way. The Skald may not target themselves with the lyric, even if they are adjacent to their target.

Stats: Similar to the Archer, only with higher emphasis on skill and speed than strength and defence.

Spoiler: Dervish (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Soldier Trainee
Promotes to: Dragon Dancer or Harlequin
Weapon skills:
Lances (D) Dance (D)
Class skill:
Whirling Dervish:
If the Dervish has a dance that they can wield in their inventory when making an attack at melée range, they may apply the dance to their target. This uses 1 QL of the dance, and takes place after the attack is made.
Flurry of Steel:
The Dervish gains +5 evasion for each enemy in melée range.

Stats: Similar to Soldier class, but with more emphasis on speed and skill than other stats.

Spoiler: Notes on First Classes (click to show/hide)

These classes are designed to increase the use of performance items, outside of their use by performers. Note that none of these classes can refresh allies, nor can they use their performances in a manner aside from what their class skill permits.
The Sorcerer can only target themselves.
The Skald can target two allies at once, but they must be adjacent to their attack target, and can't target themselves.
The Dervish can only hit their target, and it takes place after the attack itself. They also gain a small boost to evasion the more they get surrounded.
In comparison, the Bard can hit 4 allies at once, far beyond anyone else.
The dancer can hit 2 enemies/allies at once, at range two. While the Skald can match this (and even exceed the range with longbows), they cannot refresh, and the buff uses up QL for each ally, so they burn through their lyrics at a very fast rate, and it doesn't work at all unless they actually hit the target.
Comparing the Sorcerer to the Shaman, the Shaman has higher access to magic than the Sorcerer, meaning that the Sorcerer has to use thier instruments in order to compete, and the GM can always subtly limit which instruments the Sorcerer can gain access to.

Promoted Classes:

Spoiler: Snake Charmer (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Sorcerer
Weapon skills:
Dark Subcategory (B) Dark (C) Instruments (B)
Class skills:
Horseback
Snake Venom:
If the Snake Charmer is affecting themselves with an instrument when they attack, then all active afflictions their target is suffering from has their durations increased by 1. This ability takes place after the attack.
Anti-Venom:
When the Snake Charmer is first affected by an affliction, the affliction's duration is reduced by one.

Stats: Mostly improvements to MAG and RES, along with a bit of SKL and LUK

Spoiler: Oracle (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Sorcerer
Weapon skills:
Dark (C) Staves (C) Instruments (C)
Class skills:
Visions:
If the Oracle has an instrument in their inventory that they can wield when targeting an ally with a Buffing Staff or Healing Staff, they may choose to also grant that ally the effects from that instrument. This uses up 1 QL of the instrument.
Prophecy:
If the Oracle has Buffing Staff in their inventory that they can wield, they may target themselves with it when making an attack if they have a Weapon Triangle Advantage. This uses up 1 QL of the Buffing Staff, and takes effect before the attack is made.

Stats: Mostly improvements to RES and MAG, along with a bit to SKL and LUK

Spoiler: Huntsman (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Skald
Weapon skills:
Bows (C) Axes (C) Lyrics (C)
Class skills:
Call of the Hunt:
The Huntsman may now use Whistling Arrow in conjunction with axes. In addition, they may now target themselves with the lyric's effects if they are within range. This takes places before the attack is made, and persists even if the attack misses.
Echos Through the Trees:
The effects from the Huntsman's lyrics now last an additional turn.

Stats: Mostly increases to STR and HP, along with bits in DEF, SPD, and SKL.

Spoiler: Harper (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Skald
Weapon Skills:
Bow Subcategory (B) Bows (C) Lyrics (B)
Class Skills:
Critical Eye
Chorus of Arrows:
By expending additional QL from their bow, the Harper may attack muliple targets in one attack. These function as normal attacks, drawing counter attacks as normal, but the Harper may only attack each enemy once. Each enemy struck triggers the Whistling Arrow ability as normal. The Harper may target 2 enemies in range by expending 3 QL of their bow, or target 3 enemies in range by expending 5 QL of their bow.

Stats: Mostly increases to SPD and SKL, along with some in STR, DEF, and LUK.

Spoiler: Dragon Dancer (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Dervish
Weapon Skills:
Lances (C) Anima (C) Dances (C)
Class skills:
Ancestor's Dance:
The Whirling Dervish skill may now be used with Anima Tomes, and no longer requires the attack to be in melée range.
Elemental Unity:
Once per battle, if the Dragon Dancer has a lance and anima tome in their inventory, they may make an attack that combines the stats of the two weapons, using the better value in each statistic, and adding the special properties of both. The higher of STR and MAG of the Dragon Dancer is added to the attack, and uses the lower of the enemy's DEF and REF. This uses 1 QL from both the lance and the anima tome.

Stats: Heavy increase to MAG, along with increases to STR, SPD, and SKL.

Spoiler: Harlequin (click to show/hide)

Promotes from: Dervish
Weapon skills:
Lance Subcategory (B) Lances (C) Dances (B)
Class skills:
Critical Eye
Pass:
The Harlequin gains the Pass character skill. If they already possess the Pass skill, the character may immediatly take a new free skill.
Dance of Death:
If the Harlequin deals the killing blow to an enemy, they are immediatly able to make another move at up to their full movement value and make an attack, if able. Any enemy they pass through during this movement is targeted by a dance in the Harlequin's inventory, if they have one. If they have more than one dance, they must use the same dance on all enemies that are passed this way. This uses 1 QL of the dance for each enemy affected this way. Dance of Death counts against the character's limit of two turns per phase, and therefore cannot be refreshed afterwards, nor does Dance of Death trigger if the Harlequin has been refreshed, or already activated Dance of Death in the same turn. If the Harlequin deals the killing blow to an enemy during the enemy phase, Dance of Death triggers at the begining of the next player phase.

Stats: Mostly increases to SPD and SKL, along with STR and DEF.

Spoiler: Notes on Promoted Classes (click to show/hide)

Of the Sorcerer's promotions, the Snake Charmer gains the ability to abuse afflictions to the fullest, making them powerful users of Ancient magic, as well as reducing similar effects on themselves. Note that Snake Venom increases the duration of all afflictions the enemy suffers from, not just those caused by the Snake Charmer themselves. Makes them great team players with users of dances and ailment staves. They also become the second caster that's mounted, so the Mage Knight isn't so alone.
The Oracle, on the other hand, finally let's the Sorcerer be more supportive, by letting them use instruments on other people through staves. They don't get any bonus with ailment staves because Haspen's alchemist already fills that role.
Note that Prophecy can only be used if the Oracle has a weapon triangle bonus, so Druidic spells actually have a point now. This does mean that Oracles need to carry a crapton of stuff, since to use their full potential they need instruments, buffing staves, and multiple Druidic spells to hit whatever they come across, but they can become very powerful if you can pull it off.

On the Skald promotions, the Huntsman lets them buff themselves and go solo properly, along with giving them axes. I chose axes because Dervishs get spears, and the Dancing Blade already gets swords. The increase to lyrical duration also means that missing the enemy once doesn't screw you over.
The Harper can use Chorus of Arrows to target multiple enemies at once, which is primarily usefull because it lets you buff more than 2 allies at once. With a full shot, you can hit up to 6 allies, which even beats the bard. The odds of people lining up well enough to actually do this is extremely small, however, and will blow through your lyrics like no tomorrow.
Also, since enemies still get counter attacks, you can easily smite yourself with the ability if you aren't careful.

On the Dervish promotions, the Dragon Dancer gains access to Anima so you can throw fire and lightning while debuffing people from a distance, along with making throwing spears viable. The Elemental Unity power probably needs to be written better, as it's quirky. Basically, you takes the stats of a lance and a spell, and take the best of each. So if you're using a heavy-but-mighty pike, and a fast-but-weak wind spell, you take the higher might of the pike, the higher accuracy of the wind spell, and the lower weight of the wind spell to get a fast, accurate, and powerful attack that retains wind's bonus against fliers, and the pike's bonus against mounted enemies. And then you add either STR or MAG to it, and hit the lower of either the enemy's DEF or RES. Note that if your STR is higher than MAG, you still use that, even if you're using a magic lance at a distance. Clearly, this is only once per fight, because otherwise it would be overpowered.
As for the Harlequin, they gain Pass for free, which is mostly just so Dance of Death works properly. Dance of Death is basically a self-refresh power that triggers on killing blows, and lets you debuff hordes of enemies in the process, provided you pass through them. It makes them not really mesh that well with performers, which is intentional, because otherwise it would be majorly overpowered. It already kinda is, since nobody else can self-refresh. Might need to nerf it some.

Spoiler: And finally, some minor notes on flavor (click to show/hide)

Originally, the Snake Charmer and Sorcerer had their names switched, since the original concept of the combination of instruments and dark magic came from snake charmers in real life. However, I switched the venom idea to the promoted class, which made the first class more generic, so it made more sense like this. I don't know why I called the Oracle that, I guess I couldn't think of anything better.
The Skald, Huntsman, and Harper went through a crapload of name changes, as I didn't really like any of them. The idea of combining lyrics with bows is the idea that arrows "whistle" in flight. In the original Thief game, you actually got arrows that made a strange noise as they travelled through the air, to distract guards. The Huntsman was originally called a Ranger, but I couldn't remember if that was already taken by something else, and Huntsman sounds more badass. In my first concept of them, they got horseback, but I decided that then they seemed way too much like a Nomad.
The Harper is still a stupid name, but I can't think of anything better. Basically inspired by the ridiculous idea of sticking multiple arrows on a bowstring at the same time. Combine this with a power where you buff allies by shooting jerks in the neck, and boom. Instant class idea.
The Dervish also has a dumb name, but again, I'm uncreative. The idea of mixing spears and dances comes from real life fire dancers. You know, those guys that spin flaming sticks around at really high speed? Anyway, those guys are Dragon Dancers, and the Dervish is the first class of them, before they light shit on fire. The Harlequin basically focuses entirely on being totally surrounded, and striking a ton of guys at once by moving stupidly fast. The inspiration actually comes from Warhammer 40K: Dawn of War, where the Eldar have a unit called a "Harliquin" which has a power called "Dance of Death", where they leap rapidly from enemy to enemy, dealing attacks to them. Seems suitably anime to be in Fire Emblem. But anyway, the names are dumb, and I'd have no problem with them being renamed to something better. (Unless people actually like them, I dunno)

Note that I don't have access to the books, so exact stats (and everything else, probably) still need to be figured out, but they're rough concepts.

[hops]

uh, ptw.

[Xanmyral]

Alright, finally everything is more or less in order.

Anyway, time for this thread to have some life! I'm going to be running a test game, a test of both my house rules (to see how they change typical play, which I assume is heavily for reasons stated below) and to cut my teeth, so to speak, with a single map FEF. More may follow suit if things look promising, either one map scenarios or maybe a full on game, should time be allowing.

Ruleset: 1.3 Rulebook with Below Changes/Additions
House rules: http://pastebin.com/1Rkcm8Sm
Alchemy rules won't be in effect, due to not being finished. I wouldn't suggest taking the alchemy or blacksmith skills, since they won't come into effect.

IC

Important rules to note in short:
- Every unit  keeps their class skill
- Healing items have echos of healing, similar to pure water
- There is a pure water-like item for every stat.
- Shoving, swapping, restacking stackable items, general quality of life stuff.
- Being downed works differently, you're downed an amount of turns dependent on a stat that decrements each time downed, to a minimum of one, with the starting and maximum amount of points a base of 3, with an additional 1 every 5 CON.
- Critical hits work like they did in 1.2, in that they're incorporated into the hit roll.
-- This is mainly to just test the feature, as we've never had a game with it included as such.
- There's a new class that people are free to pick, the tactician.
-- They're basically the green mage, so to speak. They can use staffs, all three branches of performances, and make NPCs smarter if they're in range of Tasik.
EDIT: Sorry Dark
- Split Progression between MAG and STR gives benefits, for every 10% progression in both, you gain an extra 5% progression to use as you wish (respecting progression caps, that is).

Spoiler: Signups (click to show/hide)

I will be taking an nth number of people, largely dependent really on how many want to do a short one map jaunt. New players, old hands, whichever feel the want to play. If you need help with chargen, just ask, I or someone else will be happy to help out.

- First class only, I will level the character up to level eight before the map.
- For items, you can either pick a D rank (non class) weapon and a vuln, or you can pick two E rank weapons and a vuln. The second E rank weapon can be swapped for a vuln, or if you want you can swap the E rank and the vuln for a concoction or a stat boosting item (listed in the house rules, under items).
- Affinity will be done as usual, I'll roll two and you may pick. If I roll the same affinity twice though, you get to pick, just to be different.
- Example sheet below.
- You may start with a C rank support. These must be chosen before affinity is rolled (I will hold off until either you choose or abstain).
Name: Magnus Fredrick
Class: Mage
Affinity: -
Character Specific Skill: Fortune
- Personal Fault: Danger Close: If in combat at melee range, -2 DEF
- Personal Skill: Fire Afar: When in combat at range two, +2 MAG
-- Personal Skill: Fuel for the Flame: When 3 enemies are within 3 spaces of this unit, +2 SPD
Weapon Proficiencies: Fire (C), Anima (D)
Progression spent: 330/330%
     
HP: 21 (60%)
STR: 2 (00%)
MAG: 6 (70%)
SKL: 5 (70%)
CON: 5 (---) + 2
AID: 4 (---)
LCK: 2 (10%)
DEF: 0 (30%)
RES: 5 (30%)
SPD: 4 (70%) + 2
MOV: 5 (---)

Code: [Select]

Inventory:
Name            Type ( )  Rng   Wt Mt Hit Cr Ql
Blaze           Fire (D)  1-2   10  8  70  0 30
Vulnerary       Misc (-)   -    -   -  -   - 3
        Heals 10 HP for 3 rounds. Amount healed halved each round.


Spoiler: Empty Sheet (click to show/hide)

Name:
Class:
Affinity: -
Character Specific Skill:
- Personal Fault:
- Personal Skill:
-- Personal Skill:
Weapon Proficiencies:
Progression spent:
     
HP:  (%)
STR:  (%)
MAG:  (%)
SKL:  (%)
CON:  (---)
AID:  (---)
LCK:  (%)
DEF:  (%)
RES:  (%)
SPD:  (%)
MOV:  (---)

Code: [Select]

Inventory:
Name            Type ( )  Rng   Wt Mt Hit Cr Ql


Since this is a test map, I'll also show the map before hand. All enemies with multiples of them are level 9, unique enemies are leve 10, the boss (the tactician on the throne) is level 11. You'll start at level 8 and go from there, as said above in the Signup spoiler. As a note, you'll eventually get 6 NPCs helping you out on the map, all but one being level 8 trainees that don't level. None of them use staffs.

The scenario is simple: kill or disable the tactician in some way.
Fluff: You're mercenaries hired on to take care of an upstart. A company of old soldiers, once mercenaries like you, took over a keep and have been using it as a base of operations to impose a toll on the surroundings roads, protection money from nearby villages, and generally being a nuisance. They don't really care how you do it, long as they all leave.

Spoiler: Map (click to show/hide)

You'll start here --------------------------^

Spoiler: Terrain Explanations (click to show/hide)

Plains/Carpet/Cobble/Wood/Road: 1 MOV to enter
Light Green Forests: +1 DEF/RES, +15 EVA; 2 MOV to enter, 4 MOV for Supply Line/Horseback
Dark Green Forests: +2 DEF/RES, +20 EVA; 3 MOV to enter, Supply Line/Horseback units cannot enter
Tan Hills: +2 DEF/RES, +20 EVA; 3 MOV to enter, Supply Line/Horseback units cannot enter
Cliffs: +2 DEF/RES, +20 EVA OR +4 DEF/RES, +30 EVA for Mountain Walk; 5 MOV to enter, only units with flying or Mountain Walk may enter
Pillars: +1 DEF/RES, +15 EVA; 2 MOV to enter, 4 MOV for Supply Line/Horseback
Thrones: +2 DEF/RES, +20 EVA; 3 MOV to enter, Supply Line/Horseback units cannot enter
Rivers: -2 DEF/RES, -20 EVA OR +1 DEF/RES, +15 EVA for Water Walk; 5 MOV to enter, Supply Line/Horseback cannot enter, 2 MOV for units with Levitation or Water Walk
Fords: -1 DEF/RES, -15 EVA for Non-Water Walk; 2 MOV to enter, 4 MOV for Supply Line/Horseback, 1 MOV for units with Levitation or Water Walk
Walls: Impassible
Cracked Walls: Impassible; Destructible, 10 DEF, 10 RES, 50 HP
Doors: Impassible; Destructable, 5 DEF, 0 RES, 50 HP; +3 DEF, +1 RES for every connected door tile beyond the first.

I already have two applicants (Swordstar and BMM42) who are playing a Fencer and a Nomad respectively.

Current Accepted Applicants:
Shirou; Nomad
Blake; Fencer
Ferrum; Knight
Erik Gilles; Monk
Adrianne Echran; Troubadour
Alessa; Thief
Dany; Archer

[darkpaladin109]

I guess I'l be making either a Troubadour or a Myrmidon later today, once I get home.

[Haspen]

Count me as a mage (prolly Thunder) when I'm back from making dinner :3

Eh nah, cannot come up with anythang.

[hops]

I'll be in as an archer after I get some sleep.

[darkpaladin109]

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Adrianne Echran
Class: Trobadour
Affinity: -
Character Specific Skill: Sol
- Personal Fault: Pious: When fighting Monks, Troubadours, Clerics and their promotions, -15 to hit.
- Personal Skill: Kind nature: When using healing staves, +5 to HP healed.
-- Personal Skill: Heavier means stronger: When using weapons in the Crushing subcategory, +2 to damage.
Weapon Proficiencies: Healing (C), Staves (D), Crushing (C), Swords (D)
Progression spent: 300%
     
HP:  17(55%)
STR:  5(40%)
MAG:  4(40%)
SKL:  5(45%)
CON:  6(---)
AID:  5(19 when mounted)(---)
LCK:  6(45%)
DEF:  2(25%)
RES:  4(25%)
SPD:  5(45%)
MOV:  5(7 when mounted)(---)

Code: [Select]
Inventory:
Name            Type ( )  Rng   Wt Mt Hit Cr Ql
Heal            Heal (E)  1     1               30/30
Iron Blade            Crsh (E)  1  8  9   70 0 45/45

I'l come up with my PF and PS'es later today. Everything else look fine?

[mastahcheese]

I'll see if someone can help me with a sheet in the IRC, then I'll join.

[Tiruin]

Name: Alessa
Class: Thief
Affinity: Anima
Character Specific Skill: Cancel
- Personal Fault: Dark Magic Opposed: If fighting Shamans or their promotions: -2 RES
- Personal Skill: Ambidextrous: If in range of 3 or more enemies: +15 to Hit
-- Personal Skill: Nimble and Swift: If >50% HP; +15 Evade
Weapon Proficiencies: Sidearm (C), Sword (D)
Starting Weapon: Parrying Knife
Special: Lockpick
   Activated Effect
     If the character with this skill has a Lockpick in their inventory, they can use it to unlock doors, chests
     and gates.

Spoiler: Other skills (click to show/hide)

   Steal
     Activated Effect
     If the character with this skill has a higher Speed compared to their opponent, they can attempt to steal
     any unequipped item, from weapons to items. In the case of a tie, Luck stats are compared, failing on
     another tie. The character with this skill must have an open inventory slot, or else the steal won’t work.
     If the targeted item is a weapon, it cannot be currently equipped. If all conditions are met, that item is
     instantly added to the stealing character's inventory, and they contribute to the EXP Pool. Some items
     can be locked to inventory, preventing it from being stolen.

   Overdeveloped Sense of Self Preservation
     Passive Effect
     The character with this skill gains +20 to their Evasion.

Progression spent: 330/330
     
HP:  16 (60%)
STR:  4 (50%)
MAG:  0 (0%)
SKL:  5 (60%)
CON:  6+2 (---)
AID:  5+2 (---)
LCK:  5+2 (60%)
DEF:  1 (25%)
RES:  1 (25%)
SPD:  8 (50%)
MOV: 6 (---)

Inventory:
Name            Type ( )  Rng   Wt Mt Hit Cr Ql
Parrying Knife | Side (D) | 1 | 5 | 6 | 90 | 10 | 30 |
Weapon Triangle Bonus vs. Swords

[mastahcheese]

Spoiler: Erik Gilles (click to show/hide)

Name: Erik Gilles   
Class: Monk
Affinity: -
Character Specific Skill: Counter
- Personal Fault: Close Quarters: Erik suffers -2 Defence when adjacent to his attacker. 
- Personal Skill: Shield of Light: +50% Support Bonuses when wielding Warding tomes.
-- Personal Skill: All For One: Erik gains +2 damage when 3 allies are within 3 tiles. 
Weapon Proficiencies: Warding (C) Light (D)
Progression spent: 330
     
HP: 18 (80%)
STR: 2 (00%)
MAG: 4 (60%) +2
SKL: 3 (50%)
CON: 5 (---)
AID: 4 (---)
LCK: 5 (10%)
DEF: 1 (50%) +2
RES: 7 (40%)
SPD: 5 (40%)
MOV: 5 (---)

Inventory:
Name            Type ( )    Rng  Wt Mt Hit  Cr    Ql
Blessed Iron | Ward (E) | 1-2 | 7 | 5 | 85 | 5 | 40 | |
+1 DEF/RES vs Melee per hit. Resets next Player Phase | |
Light Screen | Ward (E) | 1-2 | 6 | 4 | 80 | 10 | 40 | |
+1 DEF/RES vs Range per hit. Resets next Player Phase
Vulnerary |                                                      3 | |

[darkpaladin109]

Done editing in PF and PS'es :v

[Xanmyral]

-Troubadour Snip-

Hm. Normally I'm skeptical of "if using x subcat" triggers, since those are almost always on, but since they're melee range locked (except for the one oddity) and the effect is only additional damage, it's good.

You got your four stat points allocated (although I prefer them being placed along side the base as a plus, since its easier to tell if you have them all), and you indeed have 300%. Only issue I see is one that comes from the additional rules (which I realize now I dumbly forgot to place in the laconic, it was late, etc). For every 10% progression in both STR and MAG, you get an additional 5% free. Seeing as you have 40% in both STR and MAG, you got an extra 20% to play with as you please. So my bad there, you're sheet is perfect otherwise.

The above rule is largely to test to see if it really is needed/useful for split classes, as there's often complaints about them weaker due to the jack issue. It essentially hedges the gambled bet a bit. Add on an extra 20% progression due to the above house rule and you'll get my stamp of approval.

TEMPORARY HOLD: ADD 20% PROGRESSION DUE TO STR/MAG SPLIT

-Thief Snip-

Got your additional stats, progression checks out, got your item, class skill, and your second personal skill and fault check out. For your first though, I'd change the trigger to "if within 3 spaces of 3 allies" however for me to accept it, or to a different trigger. One ally within three squares is practically always on, since its so easy to nab. Other than that, checks out, so just fix that trigger and you get my stamp of approval.

You're base HP is 2 points lower than it actually is though, but I'll just fix that myself when I make the paste.

TEMPORARY HOLD: FIX AMBIDEXTROUS' TRIGGER

-Monk Snip-

Again, I'm skeptical of "if using subcat of x," but the effect will be minute on this map so its fine. In a campaign though, I wouldn't accept it normally, as a note. For you're other personal skill, same as with Tiruin, up it to being within 3 allies at a distance of 3 and it'll be good, or whatever other trigger you want. One ally within three squares is a touch too easy to accomplish.

You also only used 310%, you got 20% left you gotta spend as you wish. Or you could nick off 10% more and get a cost skill, you're choice. Once those are good, stamp of approval time.

TEMPORARY HOLD: ADD 20% OR REMOVE 10% AND NAB A COST SKILL, FIX ALL FOR ONE'S TRIGGER

[GiglameshDespair]

Spoiler: Xan's Map Tonk (click to show/hide)

Name: Ferrum
Class: Knight
Affinity: -
Character Specific Skill: Renewal
- Personal Fault: Pauldrons of Oversizedness: -2 dam vs archers and their promotions
- Personal Skill: Pauldrons of Deflection: When fighting at a range of two squares, +15 eva
-- Personal Skill: Pauldrons of Speed: When over 50% hp, +1 MOV
Weapon Proficiencies: Lance D, Spear C

Special: Armoured
Passive Effect
Knights have a damage threshold of 2 + 10% of their Defence or Resistance (rounded down),
depending on the enemy's attack. Any damage that deals less than the threshold is reduced to 0.
Hold The Line
Activated Effect
If the character with this skill hasn't used any of their MOV points this turn, they can choose to spend
all their MOV to remain in place, and prevent the enemy from entering melee range with the character
until the start of the character's next round.
 
Progression spent:
     
HP:  22(100%)
STR: 5 (50%)
MAG:  0(%)
SKL:  3(10%)
CON:  9(---)
AID:  8(---)
LCK:  1(10%)
DEF:  9(70%) (+2=11)
RES:  0(40%)
SPD:  2(50%) (+2=4)
MOV:  4(---)

Code: [Select]

Inventory:
Name            Type ( )     Rng   Wt Mt  Hit  Cr  Ql
Steel Javelin | Sper (D) | 1-2 | 12 | 8 | 65 | 0 | 30
Vulnerary 3/3


[Swordstar]

Never mind I'm a derp

[Xanmyral]

-Knight-

Hmmm. Stamp of approval, nothing wrong here. You're gonna be a moving fortress of iron, that's for sure.

APPROVED!