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[Imperial Guardsman]

((Well, considering some of the other things we have... But he'll have to take something to balance it out.

Yay! New punching bag friend for Lily!))

(( I have a frail trait, I can outright injure myself by being too physical and I will get bested in melee combat very easily ))

[Lyeos]

((Oh! Min/Maxing, the forum game! Make your character as powerful as possible while making it look like he has weaknesses!))

((Or add in a fake fluff stat, like my bonus to hugging. Hugging is powerful, you guys!))

[blazing glory]

((He has way to many skills to be balanced.))

[Imperial Guardsman]

((modified))

[Lyeos]

((Yep. Let's have this conversation here, yes?))

((Ninjas, they have appeared! Sort of.))

[~Neri]

((Not accepted, domination with any sort of psychic power doesn't work, they have to want to do something, also a coat wouldn't do anything for psychic abilities. Cut out the psi entirely, add a backstory, stealth cannot be mundane, make it a -5 for all melee weapons, not just bladed ones, we already have a pilot and two mechanics.. I could probably keep going... I honestly just suggest redoing the entire character. It doesn't seem complete.))

[WillowLuman]

((However, the personality is probably fine, and could lead to both good corrections and fun arguments.))

[Imperial Guardsman]

Character sheet :

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Jac Ra

Physical age: 17

Race: Human

Description: An extremely decisive, brooding character, who is quick to point out any flaws in the plans of his team. He believes in efficiency and likes things done quick, and will get snippy if someone unnecessarily lengthens a task. He is very thin, with a sunken face, and hazel eyes. His hair is black, messy and curly, and he wears a black band around his wrist.  He wears lightweight gear and minimal protection, and ridicules people who wear heavy armor, saying that you don't need armor if you have the agility and skill not to be hit.

Backstory because I dunno where to put
 A former silver spoon who never had to lift a finger in his life through inheritance of massive wealth, his luxurious living space was raided by armed men collecting "protection fees". Jac proceeded to run, but not before his face was recognized. The men wreak havoc, and before Jac can even take action, everything he knows is lost and he seeks revenge on those who wronged him. Forced into hiding, he trains his body vigorously to be a weapon and hunts down those who wronged him. With his birthright stolen and spent, he has only what he left on his account. He turns to the work of an assassin, killing across space for money, but forced to goon the run after a bystander witnessed him assassinating a major megacorp CEO and alerted authorities. His assets frozen and taken from him, and hunted across space, he seeks safety and a means of revenge. However, lack of interaction can take its toll. He believes in his way of doing things only and doesnt like to be ordered around, and looks at anyone with fear of betrayal.

Stat Sheet:

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Name: Jac Ra

Equipped Weapons: Silenced Pistol ( weak, but stealthy ), Balisong knife ( stealthy, good against unarmoured, no sell against armor )

Equipped Gear: Black tactical jumpsuit ( extremely weak protection, many pockets for storage, stealthy ), webbing vest ( meager protection, storage ), tight fitting padded shoes ( stealth ), gloves

Inventory: mini cameras and view screen ( watch ALL the things! )

Skills:
Cooking -9001
Piloting -2
Melee combat with claw weapons -2
Melee combat with bladed weapons +1
Stealth +3
Hacking + 1
Starship related mechanics -3
Persuasion -3
Abilities:
Efficiency ( the next stealth related action has higher success rate)
Paranoia ( permanent -3 to persuasion )
Defiant
Horrible cook (someone rolls a 1 every time he walks into the kitchen )

Other: none

(( Hows this? ))

[TamerVirus]

((Never. EVER. GO INTO THE KITCHEN))

[~Neri]

((Hacking mundane
Starship related mechanics mundane
Piloting mundane
Melee combat with claw weapons mundane
Efficiency ( the next stealth related action is a confirmed success )

No.

Horrible cook (someone rolls a 1 every time he walks into the kitchen )
Cooking -9001

Why?

Description: An extremely decisive, brooding character, who is quick to point out any flaws in the plans of his team. Wears lightweight gear and minimal protection.

Now the personality is less and the physical appearance is gone.

Backstory because I dunno where to put
An ex paid assassin killing across space for money, but forced to join this crew due to being on the run after a bystander witnessed him assassinating a major megacorp CEO and alerted authorities. His assets frozen and taken from him, and hunted across space, he finds limited safety amongst the crew. However, lack of interaction can take its toll. He believes in his way of doing things only and doesnt like to be ordered around, and looks at the crew with fear of betrayal.

How did he get on the ship? He didn't join the crew at the station. Also what was his life before the assassin stuff? Why did he become an assassin?))

[hops]

I can imagine an eldritch spaghetti overflowing from the kitchen and consuming everything.

[Imperial Guardsman]

((Hacking mundane
Starship related mechanics mundane
Piloting mundane
Melee combat with claw weapons mundane
Efficiency ( the next stealth related action is a confirmed success )

No.

Horrible cook (someone rolls a 1 every time he walks into the kitchen )
Cooking -9001

Why?

Description: An extremely decisive, brooding character, who is quick to point out any flaws in the plans of his team. Wears lightweight gear and minimal protection.

Now the personality is less and the physical appearance is gone.

Backstory because I dunno where to put
An ex paid assassin killing across space for money, but forced to join this crew due to being on the run after a bystander witnessed him assassinating a major megacorp CEO and alerted authorities. His assets frozen and taken from him, and hunted across space, he finds limited safety amongst the crew. However, lack of interaction can take its toll. He believes in his way of doing things only and doesnt like to be ordered around, and looks at the crew with fear of betrayal.

How did he get on the ship? He didn't join the crew at the station. Also what was his life before the assassin stuff? Why did he become an assassin?))

Then bring it to -2s, and replace Efficiency with slightly higher chance, instead of confirmed.
Horrible cook is joke, and you will see why cooking is so low.
I will edit personality and appearance.
Yes, he DIDNT join the crew on teh station, and I will edit the life and reason in.

[~Neri]

I can imagine an eldritch spaghetti overflowing from the kitchen and consuming everything.

((There already is an eldritch grade creature onboard, you peeps just haven't accidentally woken it up yet.))

[blazing glory]

I can imagine an eldritch spaghetti overflowing from the kitchen and consuming everything.

((There already is an eldritch grade creature onboard, you peeps just haven't accidentally woken it up yet.))

((*Start's getting anxious* How much time before we make port?))

((Maybe I can alter course to something not quite so far away....))

[Imperial Guardsman]

(( edit done ))