I think it's the subliminal messages constantly flashing in the background.
So THAT's where all those nightmares are coming from. For the past 4 days I've been waking up drenched in sweat, confused and unable to stop worrying about the difficulties/challenges of building a Robust, Genuine New-Left Eco-Friendly Pro-European Progressive Alternative Approach to Austerity... and then there's all the inexplicable mental images of Alex Salmond being fed grapes on a leopard skin rug wearing a crown that keep popping into my head.
Aaanyway - thus far we've got the following proposals:
The National1. Need to change the National's header/content ratio. It draws attention to the empty space on either side?
2. The blue is too bright. Maybe consider black again (as it used to have)?
3. Still too cheap-looking, perhaps as a result of looking "so clean". Maybe darken a bit, add a bit more texture to make it seem trustworthy?
Common Space 1. The pictures are too big for desktop PC's. Maybe that's alright for a mobile phone but on a monitor it's not good.
2. Same problems with cleanliness re: The National.
If anyone would like to see what the competition currently looks like, take a look at
The Glasgow Herald or
The Daily Record or even
The Scotsman. As far as longer established pro-independence websites go,
Bella Caledonia is one example, as is
Wings Over Scotland.
The other new webpage I wanted to run past you all (but sadly forgot) was the one belonging to
Newsnet Scotland, an old website that had a facelift earlier in the year. Again, I think it works better on a phone than it does on a laptop/desktop PC, and there's still something not quite right about it.