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[Nirur Torir]

I find that grid to be ugly and jarring. It would probably work better if you cut it down to 1 pixel per side (by only giving tiles a border on the right and bottom sides), and maybe having the border as a 50% opacity black over the tile underneath.

For tiles, I don't like how the gold striping on the walls look when placed adjacent horizontally. Also, you have the gold stripe only on one side for the end walls facing the viewer, and on both sides for the full walls.

The level design looks fine. I'd have probably broken the upper left room and a bit of the lower left room into tiny cubicle things, and it could use a few assorted objects to break up the 'large empty floors' aesthetic and for a bit of tactical difference. A statue here, a potted plant there ... Maybe something partially blocking one of the hallways.

[Haspen]

I need that grid for sprite placement ;v

As for emptiness, it's needed so people don't conga in one-wide lines (then again that would ramp up difficulty, hmm).

[Jopax]

So, uh, I kinda fell behind and had to catch up with inktober, so have the last five days :V

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

This one killed my brush pen btw

Tho it still had a bit of ink left in it


Which kinda ran dry by this point, gonna have to make do without it sadly

[Dorsidwarf]

D&D party. Guess the races and classes.

[NJW2000]

Penguin...?

D&D just went up by a lot in my estimation.

[Guardian G.I.]

Requesting assistance for this WIP figure - I need to fix anatomical mistakes before I set off drawing his clothes:

Spoiler: Sorry for the shitty photo, my scanner is off limits for me at the moment (click to show/hide)

The guy is supposed to be lanky and have a height of ~7.5 heads. I think I've messed up the head (it should be more to the left), and the arms are probably too skinny again. Any other things that I've overlooked?

[miauw62]

Is that samurai robot inspired on Samurai Jack? It reminds me of a particular episode.

[Guardian G.I.]

Is that samurai robot inspired on Samurai Jack? It reminds me of a particular episode.

Nah. I ripped off the guy's pose from this concept art for C&C Generals, because I suck at drawing poses myself.

[miauw62]

I was talking about one of Jopax's drawings

Quoting is annoying on mobile.

[Tawa]

-snip-
D&D party. Guess the races and classes.

1. Elf bard (player is one of those by-the-books Real Man-types)
2. Tall kobold? unarmed fighter (player is one of those loony guys who play for laughs)
3. Goblin ranger (player is one of those roleplayer-y sorts who do everything in character while the GM is present)
4. Dwarf druid (new guy)
5. Penguin erudite (player is a minmaxer who found some obscure properties of penguins is beneficial to erudites)
6. Halfling field cook (player read Portable Hole Full of Beer and never looked back)
7. Human sorceress (read: GM's girlfriend)

[Jopax]

Actually no, but I think I remember the episode you're talking about. This was mostly a random archer that kinda got turned robotic during the drawing process X)

@Comrade

It looks pretty ok I'd say, the arms might use a bit more bulk but I think it's going to be fine once you add clothes over them. Tho the legs seem slightly off, not sure if it's because of the weird angle of the floor but the right one seems slightly shorter.

[Dorsidwarf]

-snip-
D&D party. Guess the races and classes.

1. Elf bard (player is one of those by-the-books Real Man-types)
2. Tall kobold? unarmed fighter (player is one of those loony guys who play for laughs)
3. Goblin ranger (player is one of those roleplayer-y sorts who do everything in character while the GM is present)
4. Dwarf druid (new guy)
5. Penguin erudite (player is a minmaxer who found some obscure properties of penguins is beneficial to erudites)
6. Halfling field cook (player read Portable Hole Full of Beer and never looked back)
7. Human sorceress (read: GM's girlfriend)

1. Human Beserker (Backstory is basically Jamie Lannister but frothing from every orifice)
2. Dragonborn somethingorotherhehasnttoldusyes
3. Lizardfolk Paladin (somehow LN)(God of irritating hissing)
4. Dwarf druid (Yesssss)
5. It's a penguin alright, but no clue what class.
6. Gnome cleric waving a gold bar (DANGERDANGER THIS IS HARDO FERKIDS AVOID AVOID DANGERDANGER)
7. Human sorceress (Read: The guy whose house we're playing at)

[Tawa]

Semi-close! Yes!

[Comrade P.]

@Comrade

It looks pretty ok I'd say, the arms might use a bit more bulk but I think it's going to be fine once you add clothes over them. Tho the legs seem slightly off, not sure if it's because of the weird angle of the floor but the right one seems slightly shorter.

You must be confusing me with Guardian G.I.

[Arx]

Requesting assistance for this WIP figure - I need to fix anatomical mistakes before I set off drawing his clothes:

Spoiler: Sorry for the shitty photo, my scanner is off limits for me at the moment (click to show/hide)

The guy is supposed to be lanky and have a height of ~7.5 heads. I think I've messed up the head (it should be more to the left), and the arms are probably too skinny again. Any other things that I've overlooked?

The torso is very heavily built compared to the arms and legs (particularly legs), or the legs are rather skinny. The head isn't too badly off, though.