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Author Topic: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war  (Read 106495 times)

Jackrabbit

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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1410 on: October 30, 2009, 04:17:42 pm »
Stupid inverted commas. I'm writing in Arial from now on.

Not on the forum, but it should fix the problem.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1411 on: October 30, 2009, 06:31:37 pm »
 ;D

Awesome update. Very interesting, and hilarious at the end.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1412 on: October 30, 2009, 10:13:51 pm »
Yay, update!
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1413 on: October 31, 2009, 07:12:16 pm »
Woo! An update! ;D
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Jackrabbit

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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1414 on: October 31, 2009, 07:19:22 pm »
Oh man, you know you're doing badly when people are cheering the fact you updated.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1415 on: November 01, 2009, 05:09:17 am »
We could be booing the fact you havent?
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1416 on: November 01, 2009, 12:30:02 pm »
Good update.

Considering I rate updates on how many lines I get, I'm probably not the best gauge of actual quality, but hey.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1417 on: November 01, 2009, 06:25:51 pm »
Well, the writing in the beginning was much higher quality if you ask me, but i still read.
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Jackrabbit

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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1418 on: November 01, 2009, 09:27:22 pm »
Really? I look back on it with distaste. I never had paragraphs, my... I don't even know the word for it, which annoys me, but every time someone spoke it looked off. I still sort of do that, but not nearly as much.

Oh, and about a month ago, I went back and redid the first page and most of the second. Make of that what you will.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1419 on: November 02, 2009, 07:25:06 pm »
Well, for some reason it was more enjoying to watch, i think the suspense was done better.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1420 on: November 02, 2009, 07:32:45 pm »
Great update. Really enjoyed the last line, very Prachett-y(definitely a word).

Quote from: Jackrabbit on October 31, 2009, 07:19:22 pm
Oh man, you know you're doing badly when people are cheering the fact you updated.
What about if you updated and it was meet with...silence.

Really not sure where to go with Walter at the mo', especially as i'm doing the Nano Wrimo.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1421 on: November 04, 2009, 07:17:07 pm »
The 'problem', if anything, is that this story is written to include pictures. That was it's, well, I don't want to say GIMMICK but make of it what you will.

I can at least attest that I like the writing, but it needs more updates, I love how you didn't mind how meta we got half way through, though that died down, but I'm dissatisfied about the lack of imagery that displayed most of the story to go along with the writing.

Overall, the only barrier is time, I suppose.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1422 on: November 04, 2009, 07:23:02 pm »
This is true. I'm working to overcome it.

I WILL PREVAIL.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1423 on: November 04, 2009, 07:53:19 pm »
WE SHALL PREVAIL!
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GENERATION 9: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
I wish my grass was emo, then it would cut itself.
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Re: To venture north, into Hell: Othtar Noloc, world at war
« Reply #1424 on: November 04, 2009, 10:42:55 pm »
I forgot who i was in the story.Umm...can someone tell me?
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