That's some sick track there! A little hard to pick out some of the voices at times, but the lead carries it through well, it's more I'd have to listen to it a couple more times to get hold of all the instruments. Could do without the effects, but if that's the style of the day, sure. That's exaclty what you describe though - it has its own bells and whistles, but the fundament is sound, the underlying composition strong enough on its own. In my philosophy form is the dealbraker rather than color of the sound, for this very reason, a good composition you can "perform" in various ways, there's a reason why rock/metal covers of pre-existing songs are popular - it doesn't affect the original composition, the idea, but can magnify the package overall, point at the craftsmanship that was put in. It is hard to rank the appreciation of the whole package, that's where I feel the subjectivity enters and again, for most people that is all that matters, but the composition itself can definitely be evaluated and compared.
The problem I find with going on with which you as the composer like, if you're to carry on on the path, that likely won't last, and that's just how things are, but the better focus I find in what others not just can, but
will enjoy, because such a guarantee is achievable. It is a matter of how serious one is about the whole deal I suppose, but it is worth more pusuing something long-lasting and purposeful, rather than amusing yourself for a fleeting while.
I had changed my mind somewhat recently regarding what role the color/timbre/instrument plays in the composition, it is clear to me that is an immensely powerful asset in the overall idea. Sometime around last Christmas, I think, I've remade Man's Calling into a classical four-voice arrangement, yesterday I've finally gathered enough recordings to cover the song, it is spliced, has a bunch of errors,
for the thing has four pages and I am a pretty useless performer, so it took some time
Here it is, could've used better registration but does the job. Now this was highly experimental, by the standards I've set these few posts it has a lot of iffy spots, mostly caused by my at that time obsession to make each voice it's own thing, and while every single one does have a nice "melody" on its own, I am not quite good enough to put them together, at parts you can hear the tones clashing somewhat harder. I've tried to limit it to ninths at most, but it doesn't work as good here.
Now there was a way to weaponize such philosophy, however. I've bought me some orchestra samples, and did an arrangement for that. There, by choosing the right timbre, dividing the parts accordingly, I was able to draw most for that intention, ill-fitting for a single instrument, but fully realized here. Added some parts on top, and turned out much better, I am definitely to play around with this setup for some time now, have a few projects going on in a similar vein.
Here is the "final" orchestra version. Hope you enjoy.