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Re: Archcrystal: 243 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #45 on: February 28, 2016, 04:01:13 pm »

so that the sun will shine into hell through our glorious glass tower

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Re: Archcrystal: 243 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #46 on: February 28, 2016, 06:18:58 pm »

posting in epic thread. i like the narrative, keep it up Sethatos!
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Re: Archcrystal: 243 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #47 on: March 02, 2016, 05:16:54 pm »

Last time the dwarves of Archcrystal learned the King’s master plan for a great glass tower connecting hell to the surface. But as the walls in hell go up, Doren the sheriff turns his attention to matters on the surface…

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Doren the sheriff stepped outside the front gates into the haunted jungle and took in a deep breath. Unlike other dwarves he didn’t mind being outdoors, at least for a time. The first task he had was to inspect the recently cleaned entrance. A few months ago, a human caravan tried to leave while a thick cloud of wicked soot swiftly rolled past the entrance. The results were disastrous.

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The zombie husks quickly turned on eachother and the few Cave Dragons at the entrance became infected in the fighting. They turned into monstrous killing machines, tearing apart the remaining merchants and animals before being engaged by the militia. The resulting fight was brutal. Edem sustained a few injuries, and lost her nose.

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Fortunately, she wasn’t infected and was able to continue with her duties, not the least of which was birthing more children. But still it was a terrible loss of six cave dragons that were nearing 250 years old.

The clean up had taken months, and only just now was the entrance appearing normal again. Doren ran a gloved finger across the floor before inspecting it close to his face. Finally, nodding to himself, he walked over to a spot in the grass just outside and unfolded his portable chair and table underneath a guava tree. He gathered his parchments and signaled to his guard that he was ready. Several of them moved north into the jungle.

It was migrant day at Archcrystal. Every year refugees, fleeing goblin groups such as the Exalted Fly or The Feral Doom, would brave the treacherous journey through the haunted Jungle of Drying as they attempted to reach Archcrystal to find a safe home. And every year it was Doren’s job to turn them away. The royal family wanted to keep Archcrystal’s bloodline pure. They had become steeped in tradition, idolizing the fort’s great ancestors Bomrek Cradlecrafts the Waning Fence of Gales and Cerol Treatyrims the Dark Zeal. They now believed that anyone not descended from Archcrystal’s founders were not worthy of entrance, and developed a strict no immigrant policy. After 246 years, it was almost a religion now. But it was not something they revealed to the world. Instead, the sheriff would “screen” the refugees attempting entrance and find something – anything wrong with them. Too short, too fat, too tall, too skinny, hair not copper enough, eyes not emerald enough, too young, too old, too suspicious, too poor, too desperate, too many tears on their faces.

Doren the sheriff did his job with ruthless efficiency. It’s not to say he agreed with the policy, his analytical mind could see problems arising with a focus so narrow. But Doren committed to his tasks – it was just the kind of dwarf he was. So the guard would advance a short ways to the north to where a refugee camp had formed next to the river and bring forth the poor souls to be “screened”. One by one they were all turned away sobbing into the jungle. Archcrystal was in the center of the haunted jungle, far away from the rest of the settlements of the Dipped Spears.

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 Of course, they probably wouldn’t last long out there, especially so close to the goblin settlements of the Feral Doom.

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The Feral Doom had expanded rapidly in the last 246 years from their Fortress of Hatejoined. They began with 6 settlements and had ballooned unchecked to 50 as they pushed west into the humans and south into the elves. The fear was among the other nations was that they would connect forces with their brethren, the Exalted Fly in the west.

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The Exalted Fly had expanded even more rapidly, destroying fortress after fortress of The Dipped Spears, causing a flood of refugees to seek sanctuary somewhere to the east. Most would become slaves of the goblins. The rest were less fortunate.

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And all the while, Archcrystal, sat silent, tucked away within the dense jungle, seemingly hidden from the world’s troubles. Its royal family focused inward both within themselves and within the rocks.

Doren finished the last of the documents, sending the last migrant away. She couldn’t have been more than 7 years old and lost her family to the armies tearing the world apart. Doren felt a small hint of guilt creep into his chest. He took another long breath in of jungle air. It tasted foul now. Another horrifying cloud must be on its way, he thought. He rolled his eyes at himself.

“Lass!” he shouted.

The child turned towards him questioningly.

“That way,” he sighed and pointed to the caravan cresting the hill on its way out of the jungle.

Her eyes brightened and she blew him a kiss, and then ran towards the wagons. Doren grumbled before shuffling inside.

I’m getting old, he thought. Better watch out, or I’ll become human.

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Next time, the dwarves of Archcrystal complete the outer walls in hell and attack the remaining demons.
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Re: Archcrystal: 246 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #48 on: March 03, 2016, 01:03:00 pm »

Pure Epic!

Gotta watch this thread.
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Re: Archcrystal: 246 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #49 on: March 07, 2016, 05:00:36 pm »

Last time the dwarves of Archcrystal were nearing completion of the walls in hell to secure the fort site. Now, they look to set a trap for the remaining demons hiding in the hollow adamantine spire…

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Doren’s marksdwarves crouched silently along the rough adamantine rock face. They were tuned intently on the mark in the floor where Asob was going to dig the hole. Just below them was a pack of 20 or so demons laying in wait to ambush them. Opposite the marksdwarves, standing out in the complete open beside the mark in the floor, were Moldath and Iton. They were chatting loudly, oblivious to any tension in the air.

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“How many demons are there this time?” asked Moldath loudly.

“Shouldn’t you know? You’re older and know everything, remember?” replied Iton.

“That doesn’t mean I can count through walls.”

“Well, this is a floor.”

“A floor is just a wall that’s horizontal. It’s the same thing.”

“That’s the dumbest thing you’ve ever said.”

“You’re the dumbest thing I’ve ever said.”

“That doesn’t make any sense either.”

“Of course it does, I’ve said “Iton” before. There, dumbest thing I’ve ever said.”

It went on like this for some time and Doren the sheriff rolled his eyes. Maybe this time they would get eaten. Somehow, he knew he wouldn’t be so lucky. At last Asob was ready to make the final cut into the stone floor. With a pick in one hand, and a baby in the other, she looked to Doren, who paused briefly before nodding. The marksdwarves took aim and the final cut into the floor was made.

The stone crashed through the floor and bounced heavily off of a few large demonic bodies below. Asob quickly fled up the stairs with her baby to safety. A moment later several demons screamed through the opening and were met with a hail of well aimed crossbow bolts.

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Moldath and Iton had barely stopped talking before the sisters at heart began slashing their swords through the monstrous masses. They seemingly went into a trance like state while fighting.

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The two swordmasters acrobatically leapt over one another, twirling and flipping in a whirlwind of blades and strikes. More steel bolts rained down on ascending demons in rapid succession. But a marksdwarf, Zasit, advanced too quickly for a clean shot, and was grabbed and pulled below by a lightning fast salt phantom where he was overwhelmed quickly.

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Doren shouted angrily through gritted teeth, “Hold your line, you filth, or the next one gets thrown in.” Moldath and Iton continued their dance of destruction, until finally their spinning blades had no more moving parts to cut. They looked around at the carnage of severed limbs and demon body parts before smiling at one another.

“All done!” they announced simultaneously to the sheriff.

After a thorough search, it was determined that there were no more demons in the area. Shortly after the battle, the walls were completed. An artifact door was placed at the sole entrance to the fort just in time as more demons began to appear outside the glass barriers.

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The other dwarves began working quickly creating the entrance hall for the new fortress.

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Furniture that had been decorated for centuries was just now being put into place. The glass fort in hell began to spread outward from the center like an icy virus within an unsuspecting host.

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So far we’ve used over 6000 clear glass blocks, with about 5000 used on the outer walls alone which had to be 5 z levels high in some places. I’ve made the pit from the 3rd cavern layer into hell, and work has just begun on the tower. Interestingly, I didn’t know you could smooth rough slade walls, and I’ll be incorporating that into the design of the fort as you can see with the bedroom by the entrance. Thanks to everyone who has followed the story so far, and for all of your encouraging comments! I'll be aiming for updates at least once a week.
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Re: Archcrystal: 243 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #50 on: March 08, 2016, 06:32:50 am »

Next time, the dwarves of Archcrystal complete the outer walls in hell and attack the remaining demons.
Uhm... All the infinite number of them?
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Re: Archcrystal: 246 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #51 on: March 08, 2016, 01:39:13 pm »

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Re: Archcrystal: 246 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #52 on: March 08, 2016, 04:07:26 pm »

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Re: Archcrystal: 246 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #53 on: March 08, 2016, 05:35:58 pm »

Bastiongate also had pterosaur demons, what do yours look like?

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« Reply #54 on: March 08, 2016, 07:04:25 pm »

Bastiongate also had pterosaur demons, what do yours look like?

So far they're the only butcherable demons. Two wings and four legs with a poison bite. And two artifacts made from their bones which is cool: a buckler and a guantlet.
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Re: Archcrystal: 246 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #55 on: March 08, 2016, 08:36:41 pm »

Ah. Mine were skinless, sentient, fire-breathing killing machines.

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« Reply #56 on: March 08, 2016, 10:29:45 pm »

I seem to remember another Doren in a valiant hell-conquering effort involving checkers.
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Re: Archcrystal: 246 years in a fortress [SPOILERS]
« Reply #57 on: March 11, 2016, 05:27:07 pm »

So... I've been lurking these forums for... I dunno 8 years? I registered to PTW. Amazing.
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« Reply #58 on: March 14, 2016, 05:58:25 pm »

Last time the dwarves of Archcrystal slayed the remaining demons hiding within the adamantine spire. Now they continue work on the clear glass fort within hell, and the glass tower rising through the magma sea…

***

Avuz Girderwhip had a lot to do. She was the unofficial chief engineer of Archcrystal.

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She directed the construction of clear glass in the workshops, as well as their placement within the fortress below. She spent ages with pen and paper plotting things out only to realize she’d made a mistake here or a miscalculation there, and everything would have to be moved and replaced. But the fortress was progressing nonetheless. The bedrooms were now numerous enough to move the general population down into hell.

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There was a new dining hall constructed with future plans to host guests and rent rooms.

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Ornate windows were placed on the West and East sides that would eventually allow patrons to view the waterfalls that would come down through the chasm – magma on the west wall, and water on the east wall. Magma would be used for the forges while water would be for the wells and hospital. Above them were carefully holes in the glass tower that was now 5 levels high.

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5 levels down, 142 to go. Avuz narrowed her eyes. She did enjoy a challenge. She also knew that little by little , her persistence would prevail. She leaned on a clear glass statue in the new main hall. It was a beautiful depiction of Bomrek Cradlecrafts the Waning Fence of Gales made over 200 years ago. It, like all the others told wonderful stories to those that looked.

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Somehow, knowing that there was a long storied history to all of the pieces, it gave her the resolve to continue with her enormous puzzle.

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So, yeah, bit of a short update this week, as not much is happening, just slowly building, building, building. Soon I’ll tap the magma sea, and underground lake in the 3rd cavern and bring both liquids down into the fortress. Population is up, with lots of babies being born. I lifted the strict cap to 120, so we’re now at 50 dwarves, with the king electing himself mayor – how convenient.
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« Reply #59 on: March 16, 2016, 11:10:47 pm »

Ptw. How are you manufacturing clear glass in such quantities?
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