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[mixtrak]

The civilisation of the Lashes of Equity has need of new settlements. The goblin filth forget their place, and it is our glad task - the seven founding dwarves whom I supervise - to remind them. We must build a cliff of steel and granite against which the waves of vermin will break and recede. Seven stout dwarves have set out from the Mountainhome to a tropical forest which, our cartographers assure us, has abundant resources. We call ourselves the Mirror of Weakness.

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I find this fortress acceptable. You may continue.

You must continue. Armok protects.

[Dozebôm Lolumzalìs]

I thought you were going to laugh as the mercenaries all died.  Just after you described them in detail, increasing the reader's empathy for them.

Nah, of course you were! But they didn't, so you didn't. I like your style.