Tell me if anything is wrong, it's my first time filling one like this in.
Name: Ketari
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Affinity: ??
Character specific skill: Nullify
Character Class: Rider Trainee
Special: Horseback (+14 AID, +2 MOV, +14 WEIGHT)
Special: Dismount
Personal Fault: Bad Omens: If the character's equipped weapon goes to 0QL, -2 dam per round
Personal Skill: Untouchable: When over half HP, +15 evasion
Preferred stats: Speed, Skill
120
HP 16 (70%)
STR 4 (70%)
MAG 0
SKL 3 (40%)
CON 5 (+1)
AID (3+14=)17
LUK 2 (10%)
DEF 3 (40%)
RES 2 (30%) (+2)
SPD 4 (70%) (+1)
MOV (4+2=)6
Inventory
Name Type () RNG MT WT CR HIT QL
Slim Lance Pier E 1 4 5 10 85 50 <-- Trainee
Vulnerary (3)
Bio: A mercenary/brigand's brat, Ketari inherited her fiery temper, albinism, and natural speed from her father. She followed in his warband's camp for much of her younger life. When her father and his forces were eradicated by a force of knights, (though little love was lost between them) at twelve years of age she seized an axe and tried to take revenge. The captain spared her when he realised she could barely lift that axe: her took her in, and despite her resistance, she slowly let go her hatred and began to look upon him as a second father. Her taught her the ways of the cavalryman's lance, and she proved to have a natural gift with her steeds.
When the captain, Algarius, refused to let her fight alongside him - he was too fond of her to risk her harm - she angrily left and signed on for parts unknown. She's not one for much armour: a pauldron or two will do for her.
Hm, everything looks good, but that PF should be changed. Mostly the activation method of it rather than it's effects. And since Nullify is cost now, you have 30% less to spend on growths.
EDIT: Taking a look through everyone else's growths as well, Powder Miner's growths are wrong, since Adept is a Cost skill,, and even if it wasn't all the growths add up to about 320%.