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[Korbac]

Personally, I don't mind what you're doing hihi. Keep on writing! Just be prepared for everyone with a four - digit IQ (i.e. 99% of the forum) to tell you how to improve.

[hihi2463]

I look forward to it i would love too improve my righting

[freeformschooler]

I look forward to it i would love too improve my righting

Well, since you look forward to it: writing, not righting

[hihi2463]

ya i tend to do that alot

[hihi2463]

Hey guys I found my old draft now Icahn use that to help me right

[Lectorog]

Correct

[hihi2463]

Gerp I ment write

[Caz]

I love this thread.

Keep writing man, whatever people say.

[hihi2463]

thanks

It all started when we were five Rachel my twin Cocoa my best friend and i were playing on Cocoa's front lawn. It was quiet in our neighbourhood so our parents weren't to worried about us. They were inside Cocoa's house drinking coffee and tea

[Araph]

You could say you're righting in your writing.

Silly plays-on-words aside, try to take into account the advice you're being given! It's awesome that you're writing, and that you're brave enough to share it with the others; just remember that the vast majority of people posting in the Creative Projects board are offering constructive criticism, not trying to tear you down.

Following what inEquality said, do you want advice, people pointing out specific things to fix, or are you just sharing what you're writing? That's important for us to know if we're commenting on this.