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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #285 on: November 13, 2014, 08:31:10 pm »

The story will come to it's natural conclusion. I have everything plotted out. My schedule is a little chaotic and I'm incredibly irresponsible so I can't always set aside time to write. Even when I try to keep to a schedule I can't sit down and force myself to hammer something out. I tried it before and it just wasn't very good. The first fifty pages were written in a weekend and it was good because it was easy and it was natural. I'm working on getting back to the place where it's natural so I can make sure it's good and easy. Recently one of the big blocks is that I couldn't get into the story at it's current point because I was so focused on writing the rest of the story. I'm getting pretty close to where the story is now running into what I've already written and my muse is a little bit more in the moment so the writers block shouldn't be as bad.

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« Reply #286 on: November 15, 2014, 12:11:16 am »

The story will come to it's natural conclusion.

So Obok and Dumplin will die excruciating deaths then.
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« Reply #287 on: November 15, 2014, 02:34:10 pm »

It is sad, but not unexpected. Still looking forward to it.
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« Reply #288 on: November 19, 2014, 12:02:27 pm »

Dumplin looked up to see the Baboons trying to climb down the cliff and escape fiery death. It would seem that being as skilled at climbing as a group of garbage dwarves in armor one of them had fallen. There was a moment of terrifying apprehension before a hairy dwarven head broke the surface and Stodir's confused face spun around spitting out water.

   One would not need to be particularly generous to say that Stodir fared much better than Dumplin. He was exceptionally strong, had no baby to protect, and the fact his descent was pre-planned his meant his crossbow was strapped to his back before he fell not hastilly while he was drowning. In that same vein, Stodir seemed to be much better at not drowning. It seemed almost as though Stodir was aware that water existed and had decided understanding how to deal with it was a worthwhile endeavor. He did not however seem to have Dumplin's situational awareness and struggled to remain in place rather than finding a side and grabbing on. Just as she began to educate him the second body hit the water.

   In an instant Stodir disappeared and moments later he appeared again with the sputtering Degel tucked under his arm. He kicked over to Dumplin and deposited the Dwarf on the wall beside her. Without another moment he pushed off the wall and swam back to the middle of the water and was staring up at the cliff face.

   “Ah” she realized. “He isn't being foolish he's concerned about other people's survival.”
It was a foolish comparison of course. Dumplin couldn't swim and she had Obok to worry about but she wasn't thinking about Degel as she thought it. She could have gone with Okon and she could have told the Baboons to follow. They would have still faced the horrors of an undead platoon but they would have done it on their terms not Cerol's and she wouldn't have the sinking feeling that she did not deserve to come back alive.

   The third body hit the water. Inod had held on reasonably well considering he had one hand but swam about as well as a one handed dwarf. Stodir dipped beneath the water again and again he escorted the waterlogged baboon to the wall.

   “Degel!” He sputtered. “You were right! My head was too heavy to swim up the waterfall.”

   Stodir swam back to the center of the deep pool and prepared for yet another baboon to fall. Inod had begun formulating theories and devising potential methods of breathing with his head inside the waterfall and free from the influence of gravity. Degel was not paying attention to either of them and was instead struggling to count his fingers while gripping the cliff face. It took a moment for the horrifying implications and her eyes snapped to the wall. Vakun was never replaced, Okon died searching for his wife, Iral died on the hill. There were seven living Hairless Baboons. There were four in the water. There were three unaccounted for.

There were over a dozen figures climbing down the wall.

It was then that the cliff face shifted and the next fifteen bodies hit the water.

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« Reply #289 on: November 26, 2014, 05:42:42 pm »

   Dumplin quickly found herself trying to rise above the waves precipitated by the rockslide.  She incidentally missed much of the struggle that occurred. She did however catch a glimpse of the wild eyed Stodir dragging both Tath and Bim to the cliff face before disappearing again in an explosion of white water. She craned her neck to see the water bubble unnaturally as creatures with no fear of drowning began to teach themselves to swim. Almost as alarmingly Stodir was nowhere to be seen and neither was Angzak.

   The undead abominations began bobbing in the water like bits of rotten fruit, thrashing and writhing in monsterous fashions. Some of them made passable efforts to kick off the bottom and drift towards the baboons but generally came destabilized and fell back into helplessness. Some of them were nearly skeletal after the fire but some had the flesh necessary to gain some sort of buoyancy. Gradually the meatier among them began developing primitive rhythms and disturbing suggestions of intelligence. The creatures were becoming better and better at flailing and with nothing to lose they had plenty of room for trial and error. Neither Stodir nor Angzak had such good fortune.

   They were both (hopefully) very much living dwarves with (hopefully) very much functioning respiratory systems that should ideally not remain submerged underwater. She hadn't been counting the seconds since the rocks fell or since Stodir dropped off Tath and Bim but she understood that they needed to get back up very shortly. There was a brief scuffle as Degel passed over Dumplin and let out a loud yell.
“Get back!” He shouted driving his boot into a rotting face. The undead were refining their techniques and one of them had come within striking distance. This meant leaving behind Stodir and Angzak or rendering Iral's sacrifice pointless. This particular one seemed to be more lucky than skilled and successfully rebuked was not able to scramble back over to them. Degel's quick thinking meant they had a few more seconds to delay the inevitable. Angzak and Stodir were most likely swept downstream or ripped apart underwater and the survival of the squad demanded they be left behind.

   It was just as she decided on the necessity of abandoning a few more of the people depending on her trust that Stodir breached the surface with a mighty gasp. Angzak had an arm slung around his neck and helped very little with her own rescue.

“Take her!” He yelled sidling up to Degel. The dwarf changed hands and Dumplin came to notice a pale pink orange cloud eminating from Angzak. Her right greave was badly damaged and she looked incredibly pale. It occurred that the fall was quite impressive and while they were all armored, the odds of surviving it unscathed were in her estimation still only about 6/7.

   “No!” Her pensive state was interrupted by Stodir breaking off again to drive an armored fist into a nearly fleshless skull.
“Climb along the wall!” Stodir ordered.  “Go, Quickly!”

   The Baboons desperately began to work their way downstream. There was horrible trepidation at first, the water raged very near to them and stable handholds were few and far between. Pure necessity convinced them to pick up the pace. Stodir stayed at the rear lashing out with dwarven fury, stunning, incapacitating, and even bringing rest to a few of the undead legion. As more and more of their number developed a passable understanding of swimming he faced a growing threat. It wasn't like the hillside. There were no real barriers between him and them and not only did he have to push them back he and he alone had to ensure they couldn't drift past and imperil the escaping squad.

   Dumplin groped at bare stone grasping at rocks, roots, nooks, and crannies. It was a slow advance but trying to hurry It could mean slipping. Slipping would breaking from the wall and being at the mercy of the current. Even if she kept her head above water there was always the chance she would be battered by rocks or lose her hold on Obok. Of course slowing down might see Stodir's defense prove insufficient. She looked back at the spectacle and saw Stodir bent into an unnatural position with two undead tangled in each arm and another having it's path obstructed by each leg. They struggled to bend or break his limbs and pierce his armor with their teeth but the powerful dwarf was so far succesful in fighting them back. Even in his occupied state he was able to kick at a few more attackers.

   “Stodir!” Degel cried. “Leave it! Break off, we can fight them together!”

   The Dwarf either didn't hear him or didn't agree with him because the mass of deadly combat did not shift. Another cry of “Stodir!” was interrupted when the root Tath hung onto came dislodged and took her body along with it. Without warning the woman's body became a cudgel and knocked loose every dwarf downriver of her.

   “Stodir!” Degel cried again as the battling shapes disappeared in the mist of the waterfall.

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #290 on: December 05, 2014, 05:52:05 pm »

Welp, this is pretty much made of win. Glad to hear that you aren't giving up on it too Broseph.
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« Reply #291 on: December 14, 2014, 10:14:20 am »

Hooray! This isn't the end! This is still continuing!
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« Reply #292 on: December 19, 2014, 07:35:17 pm »

There were a horrifyingly long minutes as the baboons bounced along the river suffering concussing blows as they caught rocks or either side of the canyon. Though it seemed to last forever the walls of the canyon became shorter and shorter and soon they came to rest at a bend in the river.

Degel was for a period very insistent that they go back upstream Bim put forward and Dumplin agreed that seeking out the threat Stodir saved them from would render his sacrifice pointless. Dejectedly Degel sat down on the mucky bank and took stock of the situation. Their squad had been nine strong at the start of the day but Okon had run to his death, Iral died on the cliff, Stodir had just drowned. They had lost more in a few hours than in the rest of their brief history combined. To make matters worse Angzak had been injured in the fall and the amount of blood leaking from her greaves suggested the leg had been badly mangled.
 
   “Find the gate.” Degel said staring at the wet clay. “Even if it's still closed there will be other soldiers there. I can help Angzak walk.” This area had never been cut and the trees grew to dizzying size and blocked out the sun. It was hard going for all but it was impossible for Degel who had to support half Angzak's weight, and ultimately they decided to follow the river until they were directly across from the fortress so they could avoid spending the worst of the journey with Degel desperately trying and failing to step around roots. The longer they were in the field the more likely it was they were to encounter yet another group of undead.

   It was a chore to walk silently across soft clay in full armor and waterlogged clothes but like all chores in Arrowstockades it was also completely pointless. Their excess weight meant that they sank very deep, sometimes near to the knee, in the muddy river muck. Awful grains of sand, dirt clods, and small stones found their way into their socks and made short work of rubbing the skin off their ankles. Dumplin knew that it would be infinitely easier and infinitely less blistery to step around roots than trod through muck but bringing Angzak along meant staying out of the trees as much as possible. Of course there was no reason to bring Angzak. Even if by some wild stretch of the imagination they encountered no more undead the hospital would overflow with wounded. She needed desperate and immediate help that the fortress had no real interest in giving her.

   Dumplin recognized this part of her. It was the one that tried to escape before Stodir rescued Angzak and the one that said “no” when Okon begged for her help. This was the horrible, cowardly, selfish part of her that Arrowstockades had nourished even while it ate away at everything else. She steeled herself and silenced the horrible, grating, voice even as the trees began to stir with blasphemous life. She drew her crossbow and joined the Baboons in arms as the next wave of undead prepared to attack.

   There was an overwhelming sense of joy as Dumplin laid eyes on the first non decaying face in recent memory. Instead of an endless army of unimaginable horror from the trees there came a smallish, furry, creature with the head and tail of a monkey. It had an odd round head and a round dark face with a slightly bulging slightly sad mouth. It was covered completely save it's hands, feet, and face with light gray fur.  It carefully set down a few pieces of fruit and stared inquisitively at the newcomers with it's big brown eyes.
    Looking to the trees Dumplin saw she noticed a decidedly constructed look to a protrusion and deduced they had stumbled across a nest of Gray Langur men. A few furry faces previously content to adorn the trees quickly began descending and the Hairless Baboons were suddenly surrounded by primates of a more hirsute variety.
   They were all vaguely man shaped and covered in fur that was still slightly damp from the morning dew. Their furry bodies and furry arms were fairly thin and made their furry heads look rather large by comparison. The largest of their family were 2/3 the size of a dwarf and there was nothing particularly savage about them. They all seemed rather apprehensive and confused, it occurred to Dumplin that with the overwhelming danger of being away from the safety of the walls and how little there was of value this far off it was possible these creatures had never been so close to dwarves. In fact had they ever drawn near enough to be worth notice Ashmon certainly would have been dispatched to massacre them and anything they built would certainly be destroyed.
   One of the smaller Langur Men came forward and placed it's face very near Angzak and with an inquisitive  fuzzy hand reached out and grasped her gauntlet. The creature tugged a bit in a primitive facsimile of a handshake. The horrors of the day seemed a bit more distant as the Baboons and the Langurs all watched curiously as the two groups made peaceful contact for the first time.
   The mood was shaken somewhat as the handshake became protracted and Angzak quickly became put out. What had started as a gentle tugging quickly devolved into a blatant attempt to claim the silvery armor piece for itself. Angzak gave the beast a push and it responded by opening it's mouth in a defensive yawn bearing it's massive teeth. Angzak's retort was to very quickly throw a stiff punch and sending the creature sprawling.
   There was a sudden explosion of violence as the animal men lunged all at once in pursuit of the newcomers treasures. The baboons fought back without mercy and the first volley of crossbow bolts left four of the creatures writhing in agony on the ground.  The Langur men were undeterred and the uninjured ones fought without fear. Crossbow strikes, punches, kicks, and bites were all exchanged in a massive struggle.
   Dumplin had just knocked another bolt before one of the beasts had snatched up her quiver.  The creatures clearly bore something resembling intelligence as they moved immediately to deprive the dwarves of the ability to reload. Dumplin struggled fearsomely and drove her metal clad fist into the beasts head until blood flowed freely from it's nose. She succeeded in creating a bit of distance between herself and the enemy and succeeded again in filling that distance with a crossbow jabbed right up against it's chin. In another moment an iron bolt entered the monsters skull and cleanly passed through the top of it's head.
   The struggle continued with bashing, biting, grasping, and cursing until the Langur Men found reinforcements. Degel was the first to appreciate the hopelessness of the situation and sound the retreat. The baboons moved as a unit, retreating and firing and whacking in different measure but they were quickly surrounded again. With Angzak wounded there was no hope of outrunning the mob. The squabble broke suddenly as a silvery gauntlet sailed through the air and hit the ground with a clatter.  A pair of animal men broke off and greedily snatched up the piece of armor and after a brief squabble the winner gnawed at it curiously.
“Run!” ordered Angzak already stripping off her other gauntlet. “Get back to the fortress!”

   The baboons had come to recognize what defeat looked like and there was no hope of defeating so many langur men. They were exhausted and low on ammunition and they're numbers had already fallen to six. Very shortly that number would be five or zero. Dumplin suppressed the cries of “coward” echoing in her head and beat a speedy retreat while Angzak distracted the troop of Langur Men. Degel, Inod, Tath, Bim, and Dumplin fled into the forest as the five surviving members of the Hairless Baboons.
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« Reply #293 on: January 02, 2015, 08:31:48 am »

There was now a  miserable walk in the forest that gave Dumplin time to consider her life in Arrowstockades and what it meant to be a dwarf. Dwarves were mighty warriors and builders and while they weren't gnomes they were very impressive engineers. The two combined in dwarven warfare and the construction of the weapons that armed their conflict. Though nowhere near as intricate as gnomish machinery they were filled with infinitely more baleful creativity.

   Dwarven artillery is a fantastically varied type of armament. There's the ballista, it is in essences a massive crossbow that fires a large frightening bolt like projectile that with luck has an army assembled a fairly short distance in front of it.  Then there's the catapult, it launches bone crushingly huge rocks and with any luck there's an assembled army standing in front of it at a very specific distance. It can be improved with explosive ordinance which has the added bonus of burning everything and everyone regardless of how much the siege operator would like for that not to happen. There's also the Arbalest ,which fires multiple bolts with more accuracy than a common ballista  and the Trebuchet ,which launches pots of incendiary agents with deadly precision but both enjoy less widespread use. The undisputed king of Siege Engines was the Dwarven Shotgun.

    The weapon was not a precision tool, it was an instrument of indiscriminate slaughter that was unleashed when nobody important was likely to be in the way and meant that the garbage dwarves had the lovely duty of scooping up corpse fragments and blood stained binfuls of shot. It is said that the first victim of the Dwarven Shotgun was an unfortunate dwarven bystander who wandered onto the track, was launched into the air by the firing mechanism, and then perforated by it's payload of iron spears in midair. Upon witnessing the death of an innocent dwarf in a horrific cone of razor sharp hail it was immediately decided that the weapon had a severe flaw. The damn thing took a long time to reload. So came the Dwarven Automatic Shotgun. It was capable of launching the same devastating blast of dwarven shot but was loaded by purely mechanical means and as a result could launch another payload, if not immediately substantially quicker than anyone could possibly say “perhaps this display of utter barbarism is unnecessary.” Truly, for an invader on the ground there was nothing more frightening than a dwarven automatic shotgun peppering the land with deadly shrapnel with nightmarish speed and efficiency.

   Her thoughts on this fantastic weapon lasted a fraction of a second because as it turns out there is nothing as terrifying to a dwarven soldier returning home than a dwarven automatic shotgun peppering the land with deadly shrapnel with nightmarish speed and efficiency. Inod did however take a moment to ponder the fantastic engineering of the device as menacing spike sailed into his chest and punched through his armor like paper.

   “Stop firing!” Degel yelled vainly as he tried to drag the wounded dwarf to cover. Dumplin had lost her passion for the days events and rather than scrabble in a blind panic she mechanically positioned herself behind a tree. Bim was charging the fortress wall trying to get too close to be within effective range and Tath was lying face down in a murky pool whimpering or screaming something, it was just getting dull now. The first zombies in the forest had panicked her, the sight of the army shocked her, the defense of the hill invigorated her, the river tired her, the langur men bothered her, and now she was just waiting for what happened next. Eventually Degel devised some vaguely clever pattern to move in while carrying Inod but it was of course in vain as his heart had been pierced and a truly impressive amount of blood spread everywhere he was moved. When the tragedy was over they began walking around towards the entrance one dwarf fewer.

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« Reply #294 on: January 03, 2015, 10:43:31 pm »

Eventually Degel devised some vaguely clever pattern to move in while carrying Inod but it was of course in vain as his heart had been pierced and a truly impressive amount of blood spread everywhere he was moved. When the tragedy was over they began walking around towards the entrance one dwarf fewer.
Ooh exciting. Will everyone but Dumplin die? Or will this be the end for Dumplin as well?
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« Reply #295 on: January 04, 2015, 02:58:16 pm »

Tune in next [Redacted] to find out!
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« Reply #296 on: January 04, 2015, 09:59:55 pm »

If the story isn't over by the 31st I'll be very surprised.

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« Reply #297 on: January 09, 2015, 02:38:11 pm »

   It would seem that the overseer looked at the automatic weapon of indiscriminate death with a penchant for killing the soldiers intended to serve the same purpose and immediately noticed the obvious problem; he did not have eight of them. Unfortunately for the Baboons who had not kept up on the latest constructions they were taken by surprise when they were met by additional shotguns sabotaging their plans to follow the walls to the entrance.  Instead they found themselves backtracking and heading back into the forest to circle around without being skewered. It would seem that attempting to return to safety before the overseer saw fit to stop the omnidirectional barrage would be suicidal. Instead of seeking out the entrance the Baboons moved into position near the treeline where the entrance was visible but well out of the effective range of the weapons and found a decent place to wait. The very moment they were prepared to rest the shotguns finally stopped firing indicating either they had run out of ammunition or the Overseer was satisfied with the amount of carnage (which of course meant the shotguns were out of ammunition). Dumplin breathed a sigh of pained relief with the knowledge that the horror of her blackest day in Arrowstockades was coming to a close.
    Dumplin noted she was about to have her goals realized and instinctively readied herself for the next horrible thing to happen. Her expectations were fully met when she realized the tree trunk she'd deemed uninteresting exuded an overpowering aura of death. The concrete thought “Necromancer” had scarcely materialized by the time Dumplin had leveled her crossbow and silently indicated for the baboons to hold position. She was greeted by an unpleasantly cold voice sounding unusually natural.
   “Conserve your ammunition.” It said.

   Though he was still truly massive Cerol Sabershaft looked uncharacteristically small without his armor, though still fairly tall and strong he was not as singularly massive as he once appeared. Without his great helmet to give it resonance his terrible voice sounded peculiarly like a sound that a dwarf could understandably make. She could see now that a great mane of wild black, gray streaked hair joined seamlessly his great black gray streaked beard all horribly unkempt having been tucked neatly under a helmet day and night without end for many years. His great wide back was covered in scars of battles won only in name and pain and exhaustion were evident in his eyes. Where he had once seemed implacable he now seemed only broken, the voice that had once sounded cruel now seemed weak, in the light of the day Cerol Sabreshaft was indistinguishable from the rest of the broken, miserable, condemned dwarves that populated the fortress. He did not turn to acknowledge her or the rest of the squad and instead stared idly and thoughtlessly at the fortress in the distance.
   “Why-?”
   “The dark one is dead.” He preemptively replied. “His magic meant little to the Prowler of Rasps. Maintain your distance.”

   Dumplin stopped her approach as suddenly as she'd begun.

   “The necromancer was blighted. Cursed by the gods to bear the mark of the defiler for all time. It bore a terrible plague and as it's final act delivered that plague to me. I laid down my weapons and my armor, left my squad behind, and came here to wait for the end.”

   “What-”

“Nothing.” He spoke again. “Nothing to be done, nothing to be said, there is only waiting now. Leave Baboons, you have nothing worth hearing to say.”

If Dumplin could kill only one dwarf and for whatever reason the Overseer and Feb weren't options Cerol would be the easy choice. Still, though Dumplin had understood academically that Cerol was just a dwarf and felt no strong desire to see him live the idea of him being mortal was never something she understood in her gut and to see him in this state was disorienting. She considered that this was the perfect moment to crush one of her fiercest enemies either spiritually or physically and that perhaps that kind of victory may just cheer her up a bit but somehow it felt wrong. It also felt very likely that Cerol had just killed one of the most powerful and evil beings on the planet and was by extension one of the most powerful and evil beings on the planet. It was very likely, she realized, that Cerol Sabershaft unarmed and on deaths door could slaughter a dozen Baboons on their best day.
   There were an awkward few moments of silence before a helmet fell to the ground. Tath removed her armor and began walking towards Cerol. Before Dumplin could seek an explanation Tath had removed her mail and her left arm came into view. The limb was an odd shade of purple and when exposed to the open air the smell of death was overpowering. It seeped pus from open sores with black rims and had big cavities devoid of flesh. Dumplin remembered the fight with Bandrims.
“It tingled for a while,” she said. “Then it stopped. They cut the rotten bits out but it kept getting worse so they cut again. They keep cutting every few months and I don't think they can cut much more. I don't want to go back inside. Not after all this.”

Tath stepped forward and sat on a stump near Cerol. The two sat in silence staring at the fortress and Degel, Bim and Dumplin walked away.

It seemed strange at first to give up when victory was so close but Dumplin reminded herself that there was always more. When she was safely inside the fortress it did not mean the struggle was over it meant the next round was coming. No matter what was thrown at the Baboons there was always more. No matter how miserable or painful life became there was more. She thought of how Iral, Inod, and Stodir must have envied Vakun. She lost nothing they hadn't and didn't face the horrors they had. There was no real point in prolonging a foregone conclusion, the fortress killed everyone eventually. She no longer believed as she used to that it could somehow end and that eventually she would be respected as a loyal citizen, a craftsdwarf, or a warrior. The fortress demanded loyalty and punished those who were lacking in it but never rewarded those who exemplified it, the best craftsdwarves had a quasi-magical mix of personality traits and innate talent or were blessed by some divine spark of inspiration, the best warriors were unusually strong or fast or driven and hardened by brutal training that consumed every fiber of their being. Even these ones who were valuable were utterly hopeless, eventually they all died like the rest of the fortress.

The Nobles , the founders, still lived of course and they lived like mortal gods but even they were doomed to walk among the broken husks of the damned. Even they'd lost the spark that made dwarves. They looked at dwarves of their shared blood, their friends and neighbors born from the First Anvil just as they themselves were, their kin- their equals under the eyes of Armok and they felt nothing. They were no longer moved by those who were trapped in the corporeal nightmare whose walls they themselves raised. They'd been destroyed as much as anyone else and in the end they would be killed by an ambush or an accident or assassinated by the overseer for some slight that had likely been imagined.
   The dwarves, even the most important and most respected dwarves, were irrelevant. The Fortress mattered. Not the dwarves who lived in it, who worked to preserve it, who loved it as their only home. The Fortress must survive, if it's population was reduced to one dwarf whose days and nights were filled with horror, suffering and prayers for death this would be completely fine The Fortress, the literal walls, fortifications, and tunnels, that was what mattered. This was not a place of refuge it was a monument and any safety it provided to the drones conscripted to it's upkeep was wholly incidental. In the eyes of the Fortress the Fortress was all that mattered. 

She looked at her quiver "The Beauty of the Destination will Justify the Road." It was a lie, an awkwardly phrased lie told by an idealistic dwarfette who had never known true suffering. When you burned a corpse and mixed it's ashes with a handful of dirt you could call it “clear glass” and persuade yourself it's a gem but what you had was still just a dead body and handful of dirt and the death was no less senseless nor the dirt more meaningful when you were done. The climb to greatness was long and perilous, and the summit was a place unloved by the gods- it was blasted, wind battered, and bare and there was no returning from that place.  At the end of it all she was fighting tooth and nail to get one more moment to bask in the horrors of Arrowstockades, fighting towards a goal that was both unreachable and not worth reaching. She wondered why her body insisted on continuing. Why she lashed out on pure instinct to push away an attacking zombie or struggling to stay above the waterline. After a few more minutes of walking she didn't have an answer. She smiled placidly to no one in particular.

This was the day Dumplin Lakewanders decided to kill herself.
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« Reply #298 on: January 09, 2015, 02:52:33 pm »

... and then it got really, really dark in here.
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I'm new to succession forts in general, yes, but do all forts designed by multiple overseers inevitably degenerate into a body-filled labyrinth of chaos and despair like this? Or is this just a Battlefailed thing?

There isn't much middle ground between killed-by-dragon and never-seen-by-dragon.

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #299 on: January 09, 2015, 03:22:37 pm »

Well that was depressing.

Well written, certainly, but depressing. Out of curiosity, how close to actual events in the fortress was this story?
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