*Waves hand*
This is not the continuity error you are looking for.
Aw, great.
To sum up:
An elf shows up in the fortress. Mr Frog is suspicious because one of his weapon blueprints were stolen, and the pages of his paper journal shuffled. Instead of believing it to be Talvi, he believes it to be V/Vanya, 1. Because the only item of evidence left behind was her bracelet, and 2. because he found an elven spy in the records of Ballpoint (which he hacked) who coincidentally had the same initials (and more interestingly the same first name name (I was going to explain that, and still may)) as our little skulking maiden. It stands to reason that if Ballpoint intended to kill him originally, once they found out where he was (and by how they have troops stationed right outside Spearbreakers, I'd say it's a safe bet they have), they would send someone after him. Mr Frog would know this, and hey presto - continuity error solved.
Also, all that stuff happened late in Mitch's reign, and I assumed Mr Frog went to Joseph's place early in Stormtemplar's turn (now PBT's).
Haven't been on in a few days and I'm still reading through everything. I may end up editing this post (but let's be honest - I typically edit all my posts anyway
).
By the way, awesome update, Paintbrushturkey.
Loved the bets being placed. lol
EDIT: Llasram, I use img.ie/photobucket. Photobucket can have some issues if too many people look at your pic, though, so I'd suggest Img.ie over that if you're posting something here with (bracket)IMG(bracket). But really, which you use doesn't matter, so long as it works.
In other news, I'm working on continuing the V journals when I can, though I'm doing it mostly offline. As to story notes, my first thought is to have another tinychat session where we brainstorm story continuity... unfortunately I likely won't be around to participate.
But I
have been taking notes... V's story is more complex than any other I've written by... a lot. It's getting difficult for me to keep track of everything.
I've been using a notebook to write things down in to keep it all straight. But don't worry! It doesn't mess with anyone's plots... unless it's a bad thing to have Spearbreakers-bound Mr Frog decide to go to war on Joseph/Parasol/Ballpoint himself, possibly with the help of a little elven misfit.
Yay, fun! Also, second post re-updated. If I missed anything, let me know - preferably via PMs. Not that I'll be able to get to it any faster, but it'll be a little more glaringly obvious. And Hans, fixed the weird title. It was an obscure reference I wasn't sure if anyone would get.
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