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[a_dumb_dwarf]

This is an RP set in a fantasy world


Character sheet:-
Name:
Age:
Abilities:
Disadvantages:
Personality:
Appearance:

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Abilities:-
Robot face: grants super senses
Robot armour: grants resistance
Robot limb: grants good endurance
Robot brain: grants great intelect
Robot organs: grants disease imunity
gift: grants infinite usage of a random spell
gem heart: grants 3x spell storage
void body: grants extra storage space
entropy move: grants health regen
pre-animal: grants the ability to dissolve

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Disadvantages:-
Evil: YSK
Chaotic: YSK
Obsessed: YSK
Gilled: only breathe water
Tracked: people tracking you

If you have n  disadvantages, you can have 2n abilities
My character:-
Name: Xyz
Age: 147
Abilities: all
Disadvantages: guess
Personality: cunning, ruthless (spell is Abjuration of Call Unspeakable Sea Serpent)
Appearance: large 2-legged mecha with staff

[TankKit]

...I feel like this is WIP. Half the abillities don't have descriptions, and all the disadvantages say is 'You Should Know'... No rules either, annd you added the personality and appearance to your character, but not the actual character sheet. Plus, this has one of my pet peeves. Lack of capitals, not just in normal sentences, but in the the name to. Also, it looks like half the words are incomplete, what does n mean? I do see potential in something about being a raider, but maybe you should make sure it's finished. Attempt at constructive critisism cancelled because of lack of things to complement you about, and me not wanting to be an absoloute dick. Even though, what I just said was an insult... Well... ignore what I just said please.

[a_dumb_dwarf]

Fixed all the issues TankKit highlighted

[TankKit]

Thanks?