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Author Topic: A couple months ago, Hubris had an inspiration.  (Read 677 times)

Hubris Incalculable

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A couple months ago, Hubris had an inspiration.
« on: April 19, 2011, 04:09:56 pm »

Now he hopes to get more from being critiqued.

Spoiler: Prologue (click to show/hide)
And that's where i left off. Any critique?
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Hubris Incalculable

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Re: A couple months ago, Hubris had an inspiration.
« Reply #1 on: April 20, 2011, 08:00:23 pm »

Has no-one anything to say? :(
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