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And then I woke up [Ended]
« on: January 26, 2012, 01:29:06 pm »

This is a suggestion game inspired by every ending where people go "But was that the real world?", so there are some rules you must understand.

1)All actions are determined democratically.
2)The real world is behind 3 to 7 layers.(randomly determined)
3)When you die in the real world, you lose.
4)If you settle in the real world, you win. If you settle in a wrong layer, you lose.
5)When you die you go to the next layer.
6)There is a timer after which you will die, even if it is the real world. Remaining time will not be stated.
7)You will be given a hint by your subconcious every two turns.

And here are some rules for me, to keep things interesting. You dont need to understand these.
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Oh, and remember one thing, perhaps it is unwise to assume your subconcious always speaks the truth.


Turn 1: The first awakening, and the second.

"I have had a good life I suppose." He thinks to himself as he slowly walks with the help of a cane. "Certainly better than some other people have." He walks for a while. His age has certainly not made him any faster. Finally he arrives where he wished to go, a bridge that goes over the gap in the land known as a river. He props himself up on the cane and stares at the water below. It goes no faster than he does, as it gently flows downhill. "I have lived for long enough." It all looks very serene, if it were not for what he planned to do. He drops the cane into river below and climbs over the railing. He stands there, still gripping the bridge, but nothing notices him. The stream below still goes at its own pace, and a beautiful yellow butterfly circles a tree nearby. Nothing would change over this. He has lived for a while, and yet has accomplished nothing. Nobody will miss him. Nobody will even know his name.

He lets go and falls into the river below.

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And then I woke up. I woke up, strapped to a chair. A light shone on my face, but I could see the outlines of a man. I felt like something was in my head. Oh god it hurt so much. And then the pain suddenly stopped, as something retracted. I could hear a cold monotone voice: "We have taken all we could. We have all the intel we could need. She is now unneeded." Another, far less monotone and lifeless, voice answered: "Took you long enough, how long have we been forced to feed this traitor?" I started seeing more clearly now. The outline had taken shape, but all I could see was his face covered by a yellow mask with ornate drawings on it. I tried to focus more, but only saw the barrel of a gun staring down at me.

He pulled the trigger and the bullet flew in the direction of my brain.

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And then Andrew woke up. He hoped it would be the last time, heh, 3 lives for someone who didnt even want to finish one. This spree of deaths has stopped any desire to die another time. At least for a while.

Andrew looks around. He looks to be a hospital, everything is clean and shiny. He accidentally stares into a bright light, and blinds himself for a moment. He gets the feeling his eyes have not been open in a while. Andrew spends a couple of minutes stretching his limbs, until a nurse walks in to the room and stares at Andrew. "Maybe I should get a doctor." She hurries out, and Andrew could hear her shouting a few moments later.

A couple more moment later, a doctor hurries into the room. Andrew could hear him mumble: "I cant believe one of them woke up." And then walks next to him and stares at him intently. "Do you know what your name is?"
« Last Edit: January 28, 2012, 02:12:57 pm by cerapa »
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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2012, 01:48:21 pm »

"Um. Old Man Yurgen? No, wait, Traitor Sarah. No, sorry. Patient Andrew. Or was it- no, no. Patient Andrew. Patient Andrew is my name. For now."
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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2012, 01:55:02 pm »

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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2012, 02:15:17 pm »

"Um. Old Man Yurgen? No, wait, Traitor Sarah. No, sorry. Patient Andrew. Or was it- no, no. Patient Andrew. Patient Andrew is my name. For now."

Then

> "One of who?"
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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #4 on: January 26, 2012, 02:15:43 pm »

A dream in a dream, no, we must go deeper!

Name is Leonardo Decaprio. Our game is memes.
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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #5 on: January 26, 2012, 02:59:09 pm »

Turn 2: Questionnaire

Andrew answers the doctor: "Um. Old Man Yurgen? No, wait, Traitor Sarah. No, sorry. Patient Andrew. Or was it- no, no. Patient Andrew. Patient Andrew is my name. For now." The doctor gives Andrew an odd look. "You are Andrew, yes....you'll have to excuse me, I really havent dealt with anyone in quite this situation before...your confusion suggests brain damage, so we have to do some tests. Are you okay with that?" Andrew decides to leave that for later, he wants to know more. Its not like he has a different reason, other than curiosity, for living right now.

"What exactly is "this situation"? And I am one of who?" The doctor is stumped: "I...dont really know. You been in a coma for longer than I have worked here. You, together with a bunch of other men. As far as I have heard, it was a construction accident or something. There should be some paperwork somewhere about it. I could dig it up if you really want it." Andrew questions further: "How long have I been here then?" The doctor ponders for a bit, and after a while produces an answer: "Must have been...around 8 years."

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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #6 on: January 26, 2012, 03:34:47 pm »

Try to remember the accident eight years ago.
Ask the doctor if he can get someone who knows more about your case.

Be polite, but occasionally remind yourself of your name and situation: Patient Andrew. Not Traitor Sarah. Or Old Man Yurgen. You are none of those people. You are Soldier Rogers... Wait, nonononononono. You are Patient Andrew. For now.
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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #7 on: January 27, 2012, 01:39:25 pm »

Turn 3: Whence danger comes

Andrew thinks back. Eight years...eight years. Eight years ago he was a getting old, already on pension, and with nothing. No, that could not have been this one. Farther back, way farther, as far as back he can remember. Andrew grabs his head in a feeble attempt at jogging his memory. All he can remember is an endless war, an unchanging life and a building. Yes, thats the one.

A building in construction. A ludicrously large tower. The lower floors were already finished, but the upper ones were still in construction, and required a specialized crane to actually reach it. Quite an odd construction technique, there were already people living and working on the lower floors. After the setting of the walls and floors, another team came in and did the finishing touches and brought in the furniture, while Andrew and his crew would go construct the next floor.

From a distance the tower looked like a gleaming needle going up to the sky, in an attempt at piercing the sky. Its yellow sides were covered in detailed drawings that made the tower look as if it was moving. It was home, and the one last refuge in this broken world.

Andrew can remember no more, he will have to find the information. "Could you call someone who knows more? I really need to know more about this." The doctor is becoming more relaxed, once the shock of someone actually waking up goes away: "I could ask around a bit, but it might take some time." Andrew answers: "I would appreciate that." "Just hang tight then, and dont fall back into a coma."

The doctor goes away, leaving Andrew alone again. He takes advantage of the free moment, and looks around in the room. The walls are a pale white, there is a relative lack of furniture in the room and the only standout feature is a reinforced window that shows only an endless blue sky. Andrew ponders why a hospital would get an edge area, and then why he would ponder about that, as his differing sets of memories interact.

The doctor returns shortly after with an older looking nurse. The nurse looks at you an starts laughing. "Heh, never thought I'd see you awake again. So, memory loss, huh? I remember when you were first dragged here, not having fallen into a coma because of blood loss yet. You kept screaming about some kinda bird and flapped your arms. Apparently you had caused an air-leak and made your entire crew be affected. You really should have stayed in a coma, at least they wouldnt give you the death penalty like that." The doctor is exactly as suprised as Andrew is, and stays in the room even after the nurse runs off to call them to get you. The doctor takes a seat on the only chair in the room and starts nervously looking around. "I dont...they wont punish someone who has been in a coma for 8 years, surely?"

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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #8 on: January 27, 2012, 01:51:51 pm »

-Reassure the doctor. It's okay. You're used to dying. You've done it before, it isn't so bad.

-This is... this is not the real world. Robert is quite sure of this. Wait, sorry. Andrew. His name is still Andrew. Musn't forget that.

-Plead guilty in exchange for your last few (days? weeks?) being as comfortable and luxurious as possible. Dying is a bitch; you might as well get some quality time in before it happens.
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Re: And then I woke up
« Reply #9 on: January 28, 2012, 11:48:53 am »

Assuming lack of interest is due to lack of interesting choices.
Due to the above and a successful confirmation of fakeness, speeding up to next layer.
Resetting timer.
Rechecking all current patterns.
Generating next layer.
Adjusting hint frequency.


Turn 4: The third awakening

Andrew is certain that this does not matter. Its not like he intended to survive anyway. "Relax, I know how it feels to die, it aint so bad." The doctor looks at him: "But, you are alive!" Andrew only answers with: "Not exactly." No further words are exchanged until a couple of people in yellow suits come and drag Andrew away. "Dont worry about it." Are his last words to the doctor, who stays in the room and ponders about what just happened. A miracolous recovery, and then dragged away to his death. These things dont happen every day.

Andrew cant walk very well yet, so he is literally being dragged around, but he doesnt care much. He doesnt even bother to look at anything around him, but there is not much to see. Empty corridors leading to cramped living quarters, as everyone attempts to get as far from the burned and poisonous surface as they can. After a while they finally reach the elevator and start the ascent. The elevator moves fast, as it is designed to be. They go all the way up, to a height where you wont be poisoned anymore, but that is simply due to the relative lack of air at that height. Finally they reach it, and Andrew is dragged in front of a single man with a relatively bored expression.

"Your trial has taken place 6 years prior to this date. It was decided that you would be excecuted for your crimes in the case that you wake up. Do you have anything to say before you are executed?"
"Couldnt I get at least a couple of days before you kill me after I woke up from a coma?!"
"No."
Andrew is dragged away again, there will be no negotiating here. The foreboding yellow door he is being dragged towards is not the best of sights. The door opens, only to reveal another. The men dragging Andrew put on some kind of masks, as the door behind them closes. And the other door opens, revealing something that could only be described as a pirate style plank. It is made of metal, but it is for the same purpose. They drag him to its edge. The lack of air is already affecting him and he is attempting to stay alert. All he can see is the sheer height he is on, and hears one of the men say, although barely due to the lack of air carrying the sound. "We dont allow filth or traitors here."

He falls quite a distance, and the last thought in his head is "Could this have been the real world?"

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The answer is a no. Damn, and she even got her hopes up. Laura hadnt really woken up this time, more come out of a booze induced stupor. The hangover will surely come soon. Time to get busy then...

Laura listens for a second, lots of alarms, lots of yellow flashing lights. Apparently an air leak. Now that she thinks about it, she hadnt drunk any booze. The mechanics already fixed it presumably, or space is actually filled with clouds of oxygen, and you just need to sit in a vaccum for long enough to learn to breathe them. One or the other. She raises her head and notices that her face is covered in food. Apparently this is a cafeteria, and she was left here alone. Typical.

She wipes her face clean and rises from the rather comfy chair. She drags her still half-asleep body to the door and finds that it leads to the hallway. The are couple of helpful markers. The yellow denotes the path to the engineering bay, red leads to the medical bay, green is the garden, if you could call it that, purple leads to the personal quarters, even though they are smaller than a quarter of the space that a person would need, and brown leads to the cafeteria, which in this case means that there are a dozen lines of brown going from here to everywhere else, to show the path.

Laura ponders where to go, the medical bay might be a good place to start, or she could just sleep it out in her quarters. She doesnt feel like working, so engineering bay is out of the question, and the garden is so worthless you might as well as take a look at the mold on a pair of boots and see more green. She could flip a coin to see where to go, if they used coins these days. She knew she shoulda saved one of those.
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Re: And then I woke up [Layer 4]
« Reply #10 on: January 28, 2012, 02:12:40 pm »

Blargh, seems there is no interest. Meh, might as well as post what I had then.

5 Layers total

Patterns:
Yellow(Always true)
Doomed(Always true)
Wakes up after long time has passed(False in reality)(Solution)
Swapping gender(No reason)
Increasingly crappier world(follows timeline of reality)
Hints do not lie

1 layer: Modkilled
Good world, old man

2 layer: Modkilled
Endless war, woman

3 layer: Confirmed as fake
Poisonous atmosphere, Andrew

4 layer: False
Crappy space station, Laura, attempt at convincing players of being reality

5 layer: REAL WORLD
Doomed moon colony, seem unreal

So, yeah, victory would have been possible, but only if you confirmed reality in layer 5 and fought for survival. Might start up "You are in a Volcano" again, now that I have tried doing this.

May I ask if there was a particular reason for the lack of interest, or was it more of a general "dont know what to suggest" thing?
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Re: And then I woke up [Ended]
« Reply #11 on: January 28, 2012, 02:27:33 pm »

I'd say it was not knowing what to suggest, and being unsure of your surroundings.
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Re: And then I woke up [Ended]
« Reply #12 on: January 28, 2012, 02:30:42 pm »

Therefore, more information about the area and I need to give ideas to players.

Will keep that in mind for the future.
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Re: And then I woke up [Ended]
« Reply #13 on: January 28, 2012, 02:35:25 pm »

...wow. This seemed like a good concept. Interesting.

Too bad I was too late to play.
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Re: And then I woke up [Ended]
« Reply #14 on: January 28, 2012, 02:37:19 pm »

I'd say it was not knowing what to suggest, and being unsure of your surroundings.

Yeah, I'd say it was this. The concept was neat, though.
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