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Author Topic: The Tea Company (Should I continue?)  (Read 6970 times)

Riccto

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Re: The Tea Company (Should I continue the game?)
« Reply #105 on: January 29, 2012, 06:11:30 pm »

:l I'm feeling like there is a general lack of interest for this game So the thought has crossed my mind to shut it down for awhile and bring it back at a later date and instead switch it out for a different suggestion/strategy game, Idea's have been floating in my head for a 40k Chapter master-type game.

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Re: The Tea Company (Should I continue?)
« Reply #106 on: January 29, 2012, 06:14:55 pm »

A hiatus couldn't hurt, as long as it comes back >:D

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Re: The Tea Company (Should I continue?)
« Reply #107 on: January 29, 2012, 06:31:20 pm »

I like this game, please continue doing this game, plleaasse, the good doctor intrests me.
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Re: The Tea Company (Should I continue?)
« Reply #108 on: January 29, 2012, 07:48:52 pm »

Well, you can take a hiatus and use that time to flesh out the ideas you had, maybe put a little bit of structure in there, and think how to make it truly appealing.
I think the biggest hurdle to its success is the strange language used in the first few posts. There is punctuation missing in odd places, and the vagueness with which you describe the situation may be confused for poor writing by someone just glancing at this to see if it interests them.
A solid first post which sets the tone and structure of the game down in a (fairly) unambiguous way, reads easily, and looks pretty- that way, anyone checking in will be more likely to read on and realise: hey, this is pretty sweet.
I assume English is not your native language? Regardless, the best way to make the first post (or any post) look neater is to write it, and then read it as if you have no idea what the person is talking about. You may notice that you expect a line break where there isn't one, a comma where a sentence just drags on and on, or clearer wording regarding some issue or another.
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Re: The Tea Company (Should I continue?)
« Reply #109 on: January 29, 2012, 07:51:35 pm »

Well, you can take a hiatus and use that time to flesh out the ideas you had, maybe put a little bit of structure in there, and think how to make it truly appealing.
I think the biggest hurdle to its success is the strange language used in the first few posts. There is punctuation missing in odd places, and the vagueness with which you describe the situation may be confused for poor writing by someone just glancing at this to see if it interests them.
A solid first post which sets the tone and structure of the game down in a (fairly) unambiguous way, reads easily, and looks pretty- that way, anyone checking in will be more likely to read on and realise: hey, this is pretty sweet.
I assume English is not your native language? Regardless, the best way to make the first post (or any post) look neater is to write it, and then read it as if you have no idea what the person is talking about. You may notice that you expect a line break where there isn't one, a comma where a sentence just drags on and on, or clearer wording regarding some issue or another.
Heh. English is my first language but I understand your statement grammar had never been my strong suit and throughout the game I had been developing things as I went along but I will keep this in mind as this is in Hiatus and while I work on Chapter Master
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