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Author Topic: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___  (Read 313976 times)

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #945 on: September 25, 2014, 07:56:31 pm »

Is it cool if I run an SCP rough draft by you guys?

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #946 on: September 25, 2014, 10:07:31 pm »

^^Seems p straightforward. Looks like it follows all the rules for submission, and it'll prolly get dropped into the new series. If I'm perfectly honest don't see it getting crazy high ratings, but the writing is very solid so good on you! :p
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #947 on: September 25, 2014, 11:11:41 pm »

http://www.wordcounter.net/
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The overwhelming majority of word processors have that feature built in.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #948 on: September 25, 2014, 11:26:49 pm »

But Xantalos doesn't use a normal word processer, presumably rather using a phone or similar mobile device.
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« Reply #949 on: September 25, 2014, 11:42:56 pm »

Or rather I haven't used a computer in over a year. I will at some point though.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #950 on: September 26, 2014, 12:14:26 am »

Xantalos uses shoggoths.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #951 on: September 26, 2014, 08:46:40 am »

Xantalos uses shoggoths.
It explains everything.
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« Reply #952 on: September 27, 2014, 03:21:10 am »

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #953 on: September 27, 2014, 05:51:04 pm »

I've never posted anything in this thread before, but I reckon I'll enter.

Something short that I wrote in an similarly short amount of time;

PROMPT 2
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I apologise if it's a bit contrived.
One of those things that's always stuck in my memory was an old David Attenborough documentary. It's most memorable moment was a battle between two large male beetles that took place on a branch, over a mate. The two insects would "joust" and do their best to lob each other off the wooden platform
I'm not sure why I remember it so well, it's something I watched many, many years ago. Anyway, I really loved doing this, as it's (definitely!) not my usual writing style and the first thing I've written that doesn't have a humanoid narrator (Great prompt, btw!). I might have cocked up the tenses a little, (again, not my usual thing!), but still, very enjoyable. I may stick around :)
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #954 on: October 01, 2014, 04:14:24 pm »

Valley's eye, slanted fields of rye
Noon day sun makes all things equal
But watch it fall as morning's sequel
Valley's drenched in creeping dark
But outside, mountains bathe in the sun's mark
They look up at the rocky light
From their valley plagued by early blight
They move from the fields to earthen hovels
Made from sun-dried bricks their fathers cobbled
Back when the sun wasn't scarce
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« Reply #955 on: October 02, 2014, 07:38:45 pm »

Might as well post my own one.

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #956 on: October 03, 2014, 08:01:45 am »


Where were they then?
Flip back through the pages to earlier in the book
And let your weary eyes have a second, closer look
At the strong folk on horseback, home to no city
Burdened sacks strapped to labored backs, they know no pity
As the rode on against the blue skies and green lush
As nomads they roam, taking the time with no rush
They say to their children to be as strong as the bowstring
For they follow the herds, cross mountain and stream
'Till they met the mad man that lived in the valley.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #957 on: October 03, 2014, 10:56:34 am »

Dammit, Mastah. My poetry thread needs fresh blood. As in, any blood at all.

Give me your poetical blood, Mastah...

I don't post on it anymore myself, because it's just me posting  :(
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« Reply #958 on: October 03, 2014, 12:09:18 pm »

Dammit, Mastah. My poetry thread needs fresh blood. As in, any blood at all.

Give me your poetical blood, Mastah...
So be it.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #959 on: October 03, 2014, 01:44:07 pm »

Nahhhh, just post in both :P

This is where people will be able to actually look at the stuff.
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