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Author Topic: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___  (Read 314186 times)

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #645 on: January 15, 2014, 09:56:58 pm »

So Uni stuff caused me to be exponentially busy--will try to get that promised stuff soon. x_x
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #646 on: January 16, 2014, 12:58:13 am »

So Uni stuff caused me to be exponentially busy--will try to get that promised stuff soon. x_x

Do a something. I'll come out of hibernation and participate somehow.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #647 on: January 20, 2014, 07:54:31 am »

I've been working on a serialized "alternate history" story based on a popular HoI2 mod called "Kaiserreich". If you have any comments or feedback about how to improve that story, I would appreciate them, but I understand it's hard to make comments on serialized stuff.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #648 on: January 24, 2014, 09:28:16 am »

Since my last post in this thread, I've been plugging away at my writing; I think I may have finished a full story and started another since then. (The link's in my signature.)

Servant Corps, I'll have a look at that later—alt-history stuff is great, and I serialize everything I write these days.

Edit: if there's interest, I can look at providing a once- or twice-weekly writing prompt. I did those for a while, a bunch of years ago, and they were a handy tool for self-improvement.

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #649 on: January 24, 2014, 07:21:27 pm »

Would be nice to pick a winner for the flash fiction challenge. I like the idea, but it'd be nice to have a few more submissions :/
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #650 on: January 24, 2014, 07:47:35 pm »

It's less of a "winner" type thing in that we're all technically winners for having participated. Except for me. I haven't won because I done fucked up. (There are some mitigating circumstances, but THEY DON'T COUNT.)

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WRITER'S APPRENTICESHIP FLASH FICTION CHALLENGE 2014: JAN25-FEB1

This week's random prompt*: [28] - Floating

Write 300-1000 words, and post it to this thread under a spoiler. We'll not be competing for prizes, this is just for practice. Feel free to experiment.
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In the wells of livestock vans with shells and garden sands /
Iron mixed with oxygen as per the laws of chemistry and chance /
A shape was roughly human, it was only roughly human /
Apparition eyes / Apparition eyes / Knock, apparition, knock / Eyes, apparition eyes /

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« Reply #651 on: January 25, 2014, 05:24:31 am »

815 words of random world/character building. Couldn't think of a satisfactory way to wrap it off, so it cuts off at the end.
Spoiler: Floating (click to show/hide)
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #652 on: January 25, 2014, 09:16:26 am »

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #653 on: January 25, 2014, 04:16:04 pm »

Probably should not have participated until after I finished all my work...(This may or may not be used in an alternate-history timeline I'm writing.)
Spoiler: The Float (click to show/hide)
« Last Edit: January 25, 2014, 04:18:16 pm by Servant Corps »
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« Reply #654 on: January 30, 2014, 01:27:41 pm »

335 words.

Spoiler: Falling (click to show/hide)
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #655 on: January 31, 2014, 11:03:07 pm »

372 Words.

Spoiler: That's A Miss (click to show/hide)
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In the wells of livestock vans with shells and garden sands /
Iron mixed with oxygen as per the laws of chemistry and chance /
A shape was roughly human, it was only roughly human /
Apparition eyes / Apparition eyes / Knock, apparition, knock / Eyes, apparition eyes /

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« Reply #656 on: February 04, 2014, 02:48:57 am »

Man, whoever's updating this challenge thing really needs to get his act toge -- wait . . .

>___>

Have a table!:

Names#1 - (Hidden From Your Eyes)#2 - (Floating)
GiglameshDespairxx
Th4DwArfY1x
sjm9876xx
Servant Corpsx
Willforx


WRITER'S APPRENTICESHIP FLASH FICTION CHALLENGE 2014: FEB4-FEB11

This week's random prompt*: [136] - Red Lines

Write 300-1000 words, and post it to this thread under a spoiler. We'll not be competing for prizes, this is just for practice. Feel free to experiment.
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In the wells of livestock vans with shells and garden sands /
Iron mixed with oxygen as per the laws of chemistry and chance /
A shape was roughly human, it was only roughly human /
Apparition eyes / Apparition eyes / Knock, apparition, knock / Eyes, apparition eyes /

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« Reply #657 on: February 05, 2014, 02:59:54 pm »

Spoiler: Red lines (click to show/hide)
These seem to be resulting in a large amount of world building of various sorts on my part. (459 words apparently, though that may be google docs being a bit weird from the look of things)
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My dreams are not unlike yours - they long for the safety, and break like a glass chandelier.
But there's laughter and oh there is love, just past the edge of our fears.
And there's chaos when push comes to shove, but it's music to my ears.

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #658 on: February 06, 2014, 12:59:39 am »

Anyone mind if I run my own contest here? Nothing against Willfor, but I find contests with people selected (even if more or less arbitrarily) as winners with feedback on their entries tend to have more longevity. Plus, this way there's an outlet for things that aren't flash fiction.

I don't have as much time to write as I'd like, but I think I can slam out a couple critiques and declare a winner every weekend.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #659 on: February 06, 2014, 01:11:26 am »

Go for it. I'm mostly just trying to keep this place alive, and I'm not really doing a very good job of it either. I can't exactly object to, you know, life.
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In the wells of livestock vans with shells and garden sands /
Iron mixed with oxygen as per the laws of chemistry and chance /
A shape was roughly human, it was only roughly human /
Apparition eyes / Apparition eyes / Knock, apparition, knock / Eyes, apparition eyes /
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