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Onward to chapter IV?

Hell yes!
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Fuck no!
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I'm fine either way, honestly.
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Author Topic: You are Me, Chapter IV: Into Lands Unknown  (Read 129639 times)

King DZA

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #135 on: January 24, 2012, 10:19:20 pm »

Some where under the city: A hiss of steam flows from the tomb as a Necron Tomblord steps out. He shakes himself off before summoning his advisors."Where the bloody hell am I? And why do it has geas and stem coming out of me. Oh well, raise the army, we shall harvest the souls of the living. Make sure my personal Doomsday Monlith Phlanx is ready

High above the planet: A Hive Tryant turns to his Carnfiex generals. "Brethern" he spoke in a raspy voice " our enemies draw near, consume them for the glory of the Hivemind. Mcclay, you are to have the honor of going in first. Clear the lessers off this world." Mcclay grunted his assent and lead his squad into a wating drop shit and onto the planet. (( Trynids:http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Tyranid, Necrons (non steampunk variant) http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Necron))

Heh, thanks for the links, but they won't be needed. You think I'd add something that big into story without doing my homework first? ;)

The Steam-Flayer Guns should definitely be interesting...

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #136 on: January 24, 2012, 10:28:05 pm »

> "FOR THE EMPEROR!"

Steam orbital drop pods fall from the sky and crash into the ground. Clockpunk Space Marines emerge from the drop pods and fight against the steam-necrons and DZA.

Also:

DZA: Get the hell out of there.
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Phantom of The Library

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #137 on: January 24, 2012, 10:34:50 pm »

> "FOR THE EMPEROR!"

Steam orbital drop pods fall from the sky and crash into the ground. Clockpunk Space Marines emerge from the drop pods and fight against the steam-necrons and DZA.

Also:

DZA: Get the hell out of there.
Also they are My Little Space Marines
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This is what happens when we randomly murder people.

You get attacked by a Yandere triangle monster.

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #138 on: January 24, 2012, 10:35:25 pm »

The Necrons haven't even attacked yet and the Space Marines would have to get through a ficken Hive Fleet to even get close to the city.
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King DZA

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #139 on: January 24, 2012, 10:52:49 pm »

Hm, yep. Basic storyline for the next update figured out(which will be tomorrow if I manage to find the time). Still has be fleshed out, and any further suggestions taken into account, but shit gon' get dramatic. That's for sure.

Just unsure whether or not it should be musical as well...

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #140 on: January 24, 2012, 11:05:47 pm »

The miner has a cube of alabaster in his backpack.
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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #141 on: January 25, 2012, 12:09:24 am »

Attempt to kidnap one of your adoring fans, maybe they will come in handy as a shield, the meat shield before worked quite well. However much to your dismay they begin trying to lick your chest a bit too sensually.
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mcclay

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #142 on: January 25, 2012, 12:26:44 am »

Attempt to kidnap one of your adoring fans, maybe they will come in handy as a shield, the meat shield before worked quite well. However much to your dismay they begin trying to lick your chest a bit too sensually.
However it is a girl and you are pretty turned on by it and creeped out.
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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #143 on: January 25, 2012, 12:37:10 am »

Please don't get this thread locked.
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mcclay

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #144 on: January 25, 2012, 12:43:54 am »

Nah man, she'll prolly get shot within a minute. We're cool.
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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #145 on: January 25, 2012, 12:52:06 am »

I won't forbid suggestions, as that would ruin the spirit of the story. But no worries, I'm confident that my writing prowess can properly fulfill even the edgier suggestions without awakening the wrath of the toad man. Even if a suggestion is blatantly NSFW(which I'm not encouraging), it's just a matter of being vague and maybe having time skip ahead a bit(e.g., "AND THEN THEY FUCKED" becoming "after a night of intimacy...").

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #146 on: January 25, 2012, 10:07:06 am »

Attempt to kidnap one of your adoring fans, maybe they will come in handy as a shield, the meat shield before worked quite well. However much to your dismay they begin trying to lick your chest a bit too sensually.
However it is a girl and you are pretty turned on by it and creeped out.
The banhammer falls through the portal and crushes her pre-emptively.
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This is what happens when we randomly murder people.

You get attacked by a Yandere triangle monster.

Trapezohedron

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #147 on: January 25, 2012, 10:08:20 am »

Attempt to kidnap one of your adoring fans, maybe they will come in handy as a shield, the meat shield before worked quite well. However much to your dismay they begin trying to lick your chest a bit too sensually.
However it is a girl and you are pretty turned on by it and creeped out.
The banhammer falls through the portal and crushes her pre-emptively.
THIS OH SO MUCH.

...we need more fourth wall antics.
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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #148 on: January 25, 2012, 11:04:50 am »

>The hybrid takes out a banhammer and prepares to fight.

>Then, the right hand man of the toad-man appears.

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Re: You Are Me, Chapter II: Merriment Before the Massacre
« Reply #149 on: January 25, 2012, 11:15:43 am »

>suddenly one of the cats rise!

it is...
it is...

holy crap! it is scamps! he was watching all along!
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