Some characters for a webcomic that may or may not ever exist. Any thoughts, advices, and/or criticisms would be awesome!
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The girl is an experienced time explorer who doesn't really care about the Society's (the Time Changer's Society, that is) rules. The guy, a newbie, is uncomfortable with working in the field and just wants to go back to his lab. Through an unfortunate turn of events she ends up dead and he ends up thrown into the Neverspace between times, searching for a way to bring her back while fending off eldritch monstrosities and discovering strange forgotten places.
Hilarity ensues.
She looks a lot like Samus, is that what you were going for?
Say, I guess she does! I wasn't going for that, no, but it IS supposed to be a jumpsuit that she would wear under a space suit, so it makes sense that it would be a similar style of clothing. The hair and suit colour schemes matching Samus's is a total coincidence, though.
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If anyone has tips on how to make this look more like branches, I'd appreciate that. I know the thin twigs look too much like veins at the moment, and there are a couple of spots where the forks aren't proper branch forks, but otherwise I'm not quite sure what's up. A couple of them are probably too head-y at the ends, too.
Hey, those are nice and branchy indeed! One thing that might help improve their branchness is tossing in a few knots, but they're already quite good!