Well now, that is quite something! The working title in particular is fantastic. :v
If i were to offer a tiny bit of criticism (Shook doing that to Jopax? WHY I NEVER), it'd be that almost all of your (cross)hatching has the lines going in the same direction(s), as opposed to following the surfaces. I suspect that you just felt a bit lazy though, and i can totally relate to that. :U
also here have triceratopslady with bettered lines
... Well, clearer lines, i'm sure i fucked up a large number of them (in particular the eye, i feel like it's misplaced).
In any case, more details on the character: Her name is Trika Radne (CHEESETASTIC, also pronounced as "treeka radney"), she's a highly competent and intelligent military general, and she's not really a nice person. Cold, humorless and dismissive are three words that describe her very well, and she's generally not interested in making friends, although she isn't actively malicious. Keen eyes will notice that her right hand looks quite different from her left one, which is because it's actually an enchanted steel plate arm made to replace an amputated one, and her lower left leg is the same story (but you can't see that in this drawing hardihar). It's incredibly well made both physically and magically, and in terms of handling, the only major difference between it and her original arm is a very limited sense of touch, brought on by the fact that IT'S MADE OF STEEL (however the enchantment does give her a modicum of sensation in the arm).