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Author Topic: Random Things you drew/shopped/made/etc.  (Read 1357331 times)

Solifuge

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Re: Random Things you drew/shopped/made/etc.
« Reply #7950 on: October 31, 2016, 07:45:32 pm »

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« Reply #7951 on: October 31, 2016, 08:56:50 pm »

I wrote it

Edit:  I skimmed and didn't see a more obvious spot for written doodads so if there is one feel free to point it out
Ah, makes more sense.
The title and thread does quite apply for 'anything you've done'. :P
Also awesome work there Capn! That was really cool. :D
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« Reply #7952 on: November 01, 2016, 10:29:06 pm »

Some more ISG frames, always fun to learn new tricks in Illustrator.
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Also, Inktober finale
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Tiruin

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« Reply #7953 on: November 01, 2016, 10:56:43 pm »

Inktober snip
I do know you've a ton more drawings there :P (That you uploaded on a social media site)

Can you show all of them here? :3

I agree with what that one buddy of yours said there--you're talented \o/
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« Reply #7954 on: November 01, 2016, 11:10:31 pm »

Alright, Inktober dump:

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« Reply #7955 on: November 04, 2016, 03:29:08 pm »

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I seem to ruin pictures with background. Does this background clutter the scene and make it too dense, or is it alright?
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« Reply #7956 on: November 04, 2016, 03:30:56 pm »

It seems really low-contrast with the figures in the foreground. Like, maybe they need thicker outlines or something? I dunno, I don't wanna give you bad advice on how to deal with it, but my point is that they don't seem to stand out enough.
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Re: Random Things you drew/shopped/made/etc.
« Reply #7957 on: November 04, 2016, 03:45:46 pm »

The spider makes it hard to see the stuff going on in the middle easily. The lunging girl is a bit cluttered by it.

Also the dark background bit isn't in a good place for a dark bit, kinda makes the dark wing bits less powerful.

Not a real artist, just an intuitive feeling about the images.
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« Reply #7958 on: November 04, 2016, 03:46:46 pm »

I seem to ruin pictures with background. Does this background clutter the scene and make it too dense, or is it alright?
Look up some exercises for composition and for framing.
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« Reply #7959 on: November 04, 2016, 03:55:16 pm »

The spider

Uh oh

I think what you're looking at is meant to be a throne surrounded by tree branches, heh. The throne itself is a vertebra.
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« Reply #7960 on: November 04, 2016, 04:02:48 pm »

Makes a better tree-throne than a spider, now I see it.

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« Reply #7961 on: November 04, 2016, 06:04:34 pm »

There's a lot of ways you can make the foreground stand out.

Tone, level of detail, color contrast, things like that. Ideally you'd want the background to be more muted in one of those. Were you to color it, I'd suggest vibrant, saturated colors for the girl's wings and the guy's carapace, with more muted browns and grays for the background.

As it is, though, each individual element aside from staff guy's freaky hindleg looks good. Just think about contrast in tone or detail for the next one.
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« Reply #7962 on: November 04, 2016, 06:26:13 pm »

I've not attempted to colour any of the things I've drawn in. How would I go about it? Colouring pencils seem imprecise in my imagination, but I suppose I'm wrong to eschew them?
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« Reply #7963 on: November 04, 2016, 08:15:08 pm »

The reason the imagery looks jumbled is because lines are intersecting, which makes your brain want to connect them into one shape. Plus similar shapes and shades between the foreground and background can make them want to blend together.

You can try thickening the outlines of the characters who are in the foreground.
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« Reply #7964 on: November 05, 2016, 12:18:26 am »

I've not attempted to colour any of the things I've drawn in. How would I go about it? Colouring pencils seem imprecise in my imagination, but I suppose I'm wrong to eschew them?

I wish I could tell you. I'm rubbish with anything but ink in traditional media. There should, in theory, be a way to blend colors with them like anything else, but I've only done color digitally so far. Maybe when I have more disposable income.

I've heard Strathmore has a lot of videos about it on youtube if you can tolerate their bias towards their own brand of paper.
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And then, they will be weaponized. Like everything in this game, from kittens to babies, everything is a potential device of murder.
So if baseless speculation is all we have, we might as well treat it like fact.
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