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[Kot]

It's ok.

[heydude6]

Anyway, I decided to make a few improvements. Added an outline and ditched the viking concept in favor of a knights templar. Should look a bit better now, no matter which forum layout you use.

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Ironically, this time it looks better on the default background. It still looks good in darkling, but default is slightly better.

EDIT: Currently, I'm more interested in what people think of the zoomed in versions rather than the actual size. I'm pretty sure we can all agree that it isn't that great. I'm curious about whether that translates to the larger version though.

[nogoodnames]

Here's a model of a Mustang I've been working on and off throughout the week.

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Texturing it took the most time out of everything, and I'm not really happy with how the cockpit came out. I probably could have done it faster/better if I had laid out the UVs more appropriately. Still, I'd say it's pretty good for a first effort.

[Nirur Torir]

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Critique: Either make it at a larger resolution, or simplify and stylize. I should be able to glance briefly at it and instantly notice the major aspects, without zooming in or squinting for several seconds. Working that tiny adds an extra layer of difficulty.

[heydude6]

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Critique: Either make it at a larger resolution, or simplify and stylize. I should be able to glance briefly at it and instantly notice the major aspects, without zooming in or squinting for several seconds. Working that tiny adds an extra layer of difficulty.

Thank you, that's very helpful. What do you think of the zoomed in versions then?

[Nirur Torir]

It's anatomically mostly fine, but the flat box for a neck/torso connection looks a little odd to me. Also, his feet are pointed a bit too far away from the center. It's not comfortable to stand like that.
It could use more contrast in the colors, especially around the face and neck area, and where the plate meets the chain.
The pose is boring.
He needs armaments, unless he's going to try grappling in platemail.
The shield symbol being there looks odd to me.

[Darkmere]

I don't think I'll be able to do much in Inktober (as usual, NaNovember demands preparations), so have this early offering. Fine Sharpie + brush pen.

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Scanner still makes it look washed as hell for whatever reason and I CBA to toy with it digitally right now.

[Shook]

Ooo, very nice! I'm almost looking forward to Inktober, because then i'll have no excuse to not draw stupid things every day. :v

Here's a model of a Mustang I've been working on and off throughout the week.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Texturing it took the most time out of everything, and I'm not really happy with how the cockpit came out. I probably could have done it faster/better if I had laid out the UVs more appropriately. Still, I'd say it's pretty good for a first effort.

HMHM, i like it! As you say, the cockpit is a bit off, but otherwise it's actually pretty good. c:

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You mean you don't know how to use the three seashells?

Of course i do, i just...

don't have

the other two i guess??

there's one reference i wasn't expecting to see

also here have the ELDRITCH BOWL^TM

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Alas, the glazing fucked up a bit, but ELDRITCH BOWL.

[Arx]

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I have borrowed a Wacom Intuos 3 from my brother, and I am in love. Still getting used to it. Hence parts of it being messed up, also because I'm rusty.

This is a DnD character for an upcoming campaign my group is doing. Tess the Touched, a catfolk cleric (minmaxing? Oh no sorry, I'm allergic) of luck and magic.

[Nirur Torir]

Tess' legs are too far apart. It looks like you just drew the robe without sketching a body, and don't really know what's under there.
Horizontal and just below the ribs is a really strange way to wear a belt.
I think the tail should probably be visible.

The entire outfit just seems a bit too simple for a character named Tess the Touched.

[Shook]

That, and the spine is veeeeeeeeery stiff for a cat-like being. :v
All that said, cool to see you getting hold of a tablet, Arx! Considering that you're still getting used to it, that's a pretty damn good effort you've put forth there. My first tablet-y things were horseshit.

also speaking of pencil-like tools i finally got my shit together and drew a thing

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Less badass than it looked in my head, but hey, it's there. :U (... and now i realize i forgot to draw teeth on the far side of the mouth, fml)

[Parsely]

That's pretty freakin' sweet Shookheim.

[Arx]

Tess' legs are too far apart. It looks like you just drew the robe without sketching a body, and don't really know what's under there.

There is actually a skeleton under there. The problem is more likely my intermittent skill at perspective, especially where legs are concerned.

Horizontal and just below the ribs is a really strange way to wear a belt.
I think the tail should probably be visible.

The belt is a little high. I'm okay with the angle, personally, since the pouch isn't heavy, but I can see where you're coming from.
I may or may not have forgotten about the tail. >_>

The entire outfit just seems a bit too simple for a character named Tess the Touched.

She's a (possibly slightly cracked) mendicant. It's supposed to be on the simple and practical side.

That, and the spine is veeeeeeeeery stiff for a cat-like being. :v
All that said, cool to see you getting hold of a tablet, Arx! Considering that you're still getting used to it, that's a pretty damn good effort you've put forth there. My first tablet-y things were horseshit.

Mess up on the implementation. I knew you would say that, and planned a curved spine, but it ended up straight.

Boansurpint looks good. Might look more like you'd envisioned it if it had a bonier body?

Thank'y'kindly for your criticisms, both of you. I do appreciate it, even when I make excuses.

[Dorsidwarf]

HONK!

[WillowLuman]

HONK!

I see your clown and raise you an antag

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