Mega feedback post:
The completely hard horizon being so close to the bug's head is confusing - maybe if it wasn't a perfectly straight line. The cloud writing is kinda noisy and difficult to read, but I can't suggest a solution.
I, uh, have no idea what I'm looking at here.
Looks pretty knife though.Perspective snip.
You've used a significantly higher angle than Hugo did. I think his (lack of) perspective is acceptable in the style, since it doesn't detract from the appearance and its effect would be subtle the way it's set up.
Also, Hugo, I like the gradient. I think they liven it up really nicely.
Far from the worst! It's proportioned fairly decently, except that as noted the legs should probably be a bit longer. It catches most people - they're longer than they seem.
For practicing drawing people, I highly recommend posemaniacs.com and their 30 second sketches. It's incredibly good for learning how to sketch out a reasonably accurate figure quickly, and I find that doing a bunch of low-quality sketches is much more helpful than doing one sketch that takes far longer but looks better.
Don't be discouraged if you a) don't finish the sketch or b) think it looks nothing like the original. Just keep grinding and you will eventually git gud.
Not sure what you were going for, but within the constraints of a Paint-like medium it's decent! Presumably you are aware that faces aren't usually that flat.
Also difficult to tell if he/she/it has arms.
I like the clouds and background.
I drew green merc from way back
Also some expressions, my favourite is the middle one
I like the expressions. Expressive without being ridiculous.
Not generally super good at critiquing comic styles, but Merc's face would probably have benefited disproportionately (compared to the rest of the image) from some clean-up.
Super impressive stuff! Second from the left guardsperson seems to have an issue with their head sloping steeply backwards from their eyes, but it's otherwise very good.
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I like it. The accents on the gun are a bit conspicuously square, which looks kind of odd. Maybe angle them a bit or add some very slight curves or something? Otherwise it's pretty cool!
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