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[XhAPPYSLApX]

I think I might still have a touch of over specularity on the legs, but I redid everything else correctly I think, and I even added more animation to him

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[Rubidium]

I think I might still have a touch of over specularity on the legs, but I redid everything else correctly I think, and I even added more animation to him

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Nice animation!

[XhAPPYSLApX]

I think I might still have a touch of over specularity on the legs, but I redid everything else correctly I think, and I even added more animation to him

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Nice animation!

Thanks for the compliment

[Rubidium]

I think I might still have a touch of over specularity on the legs, but I redid everything else correctly I think, and I even added more animation to him

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Nice animation!

Thanks for the compliment

You're welcome!
Do you take animation classes?

[XhAPPYSLApX]

I think I might still have a touch of over specularity on the legs, but I redid everything else correctly I think, and I even added more animation to him

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Nice animation!

Thanks for the compliment

You're welcome!
Do you take animation classes?

Nope, trained myself, and will only get better with more and more practice everyday

[Rubidium]

I think I might still have a touch of over specularity on the legs, but I redid everything else correctly I think, and I even added more animation to him

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Nice animation!

Thanks for the compliment

You're welcome!
Do you take animation classes?

Nope, trained myself, and will only get better with more and more practice everyday

Nice, wish I can do that!

[Nirur Torir]

You should play around with frame speeds. It looks strange for the arms to raise/lower at the same speed, for the head to turn so slowly, and for him to spend so little time in an 'at rest' pose before being impatient again.

It looks really strange for all the moving parts to move one after another, instead of simultaneously. That's just not how people move.

That's a weird place to bend a metal boot. I'd probably have moved the entire leg.

I feel that your line weighting doesn't work. He mostly looks to be in bright daylight, which doesn't fit with super dark shadows everywhere.

Much better than your wizard.

[XhAPPYSLApX]

You should play around with frame speeds. It looks strange for the arms to raise/lower at the same speed, for the head to turn so slowly, and for him to spend so little time in an 'at rest' pose before being impatient again.

It looks really strange for all the moving parts to move one after another, instead of simultaneously. That's just not how people move.

That's a weird place to bend a metal boot. I'd probably have moved the entire leg.

I feel that your line weighting doesn't work. He mostly looks to be in bright daylight, which doesn't fit with super dark shadows everywhere.

Much better than your wizard.

Thank you for the info

Will fix it up a bit later, going to start working on another picture, plus finishing up that Fallout pic. But, again, any and all help is much appreciated, thank you

[Guardian G.I.]

Spoiler: An incomplete sketch - anatomy critique urgently needed (ignore the face, plz - I'll get to it later) (click to show/hide)

The arms and legs baffle me, plus I'm sure I've messed up proportions again.

[Comrade P.]

Spoiler: An incomplete sketch - anatomy critique urgently needed (ignore the face, plz - I'll get to it later) (click to show/hide)

The arms and legs baffle me, plus I'm sure I've messed up proportions again.

Dat crotch, man. I don't know, maybe it's just me, but it doesn't look right to me. Same with collar bones.

[Guardian G.I.]

Spoiler: An incomplete sketch - anatomy critique urgently needed (ignore the face, plz - I'll get to it later) (click to show/hide)

The arms and legs baffle me, plus I'm sure I've messed up proportions again.

Dat crotch, man. I don't know, maybe it's just me, but it doesn't look right to me. Same with collar bones.

Ok, I'll check it, thanks.

[kilakan]

His upper arms are a bit short, in general most peoples elbows, when at rest against their sides end up at about the same height as their belly buttons.  His upper leg muscles are also a bit oddly high.  As for the crotch I think the only strangeness is the fact it's an indentation where a bulge normally would be.  The other parts that might seem strange are all things that can be natural, like his strangely long neck.

[Guardian G.I.]

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His upper arms are a bit short, in general most peoples elbows, when at rest against their sides end up at about the same height as their belly buttons.  His upper leg muscles are also a bit oddly high.  As for the crotch I think the only strangeness is the fact it's an indentation where a bulge normally would be.  The other parts that might seem strange are all things that can be natural, like his strangely long neck.

...Ok, the upper arms are a bit too short, yes - I'll fix them. Gotta check my anatomy atlas as well for the upper legs.

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[Shook]

The shoulder mahscles on his left (our right) arm also seems a bit odd. The other shoulder is fine, but this one kind of... Extends too far outward, as if his shoulder joint has been yanked loose. If you moved it a bit up and left, it might help. Otherwise a nice and fluid pose. c:

also here's a toad

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I REALLY SHOULD have placed it on a barstool so i'd also have an english pun to go with it. :<
Also the lines are a bit wobbly because i was a liiiiiiittle bit on edge while drawing it, since i was sitting out in a park with my brother while drawing it. It was also rather quickly done, so there's that. :v

[DoctorMcTaalik]

I assume that's Toady, reimagined as a plump helmet man? I like it.