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[Haspen]

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Done with changes. Better now?

[FArgHalfnr]

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Done with changes. Better now?

It's great. Can't find anything that need improvement. The health/stamina/magic bars are awesome, I really like style.

[Guardian G.I.]

So, I tried to draw my mouse in Photoshop:

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[Parsely]

So, I tried to draw my mouse in Photoshop:

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Hey that's not half bad!

[flabort]

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Done with changes. Better now?

Hmm... I think I liked the old one better. I know I'm being contrary, but it's hard to tell that the "spells" and "learned" words are associated, and the underlines on "current" and "Learned" are distracting (especially the curl by "current" that looks like a letter "r"). Also distracting is the "t" in "CURRENt" being lowercase. The "T" in "INVENTORy" is capitalized, but then that leads me to noticing the now-distracting lowercase "y" in that word (move the bottom pixel to fix that one).

[BadLemonsXI]

Here's some video's I made for my class.
https://youtu.be/z2CNskEmYGM
https://youtu.be/ovCSzaGuW3o
Please tell me what you think o3o

[FArgHalfnr]

Here's some video's I made for my class.
https://youtu.be/z2CNskEmYGM
https://youtu.be/ovCSzaGuW3o
Please tell me what you think o3o

The first one is beautiful O.o. I have no idea how things like that are made.
The second one made me laugh a bit at the end.

And here's a quick doodle I did of my favorite character from don't starve (which is not the thing I mentioned working on earlier):

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[BadLemonsXI]

The first one is beautiful O.o. I have no idea how things like that are made.
The second one made me laugh a bit at the end.

Thank you for the feedback.

And here's a quick doodle I did of my favorite character from don't starve (which is not the thing I mentioned working on earlier):

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Nice image Its webber right.

[Haspen]

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Oh yeah, I was supposed to use capital T for smallcase everywhere. That 't' is gonna go v:

[Arx]

So, I tried to draw my mouse in Photoshop:

Spoiler: Note to self - choose an easier object next time (click to show/hide)

Hey that's not half bad!

In fact, I'd go so far as to say that's pretty good!

[Kadzar]

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Done with changes. Better now?

Hmm... I think I liked the old one better. I know I'm being contrary, but it's hard to tell that the "spells" and "learned" words are associated, and the underlines on "current" and "Learned" are distracting (especially the curl by "current" that looks like a letter "r"). Also distracting is the "t" in "CURRENt" being lowercase. The "T" in "INVENTORy" is capitalized, but then that leads me to noticing the now-distracting lowercase "y" in that word (move the bottom pixel to fix that one).

Maybe try putting "CURRENt" underneath "LEARNED" and both of them underneath "SPELLS"?

[Shook]

AHA, now i finally have an answer as to why i always draw things in a 3/4th view instead of a direct front view!

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that's why

Profile (AKA side) view is a lot easier than front view, but comes with the disadvantage of obscuring half the face for the viewer, which isn't nice for a style like mine that depends heavily on expression. Therefore, 3/4th view. :v (another reason being that constantly changing between front and profile in comics looks very stiff)

edit: ninja ability supremacy

[Urist McScoopbeard]

Do that. Why not just have Current spells & Learned Spells? Or like, active spells and spellbook? or memorized spells and spellbook? etc.

[DragonDePlatino]

Profile (AKA side) view is a lot easier than front view, but comes with the disadvantage of obscuring half the face for the viewer, which isn't nice for a style like mine that depends heavily on expression. Therefore, 3/4th view. :v (another reason being that constantly changing between front and profile in comics looks very stiff)

I swear I feel the same way sometimes. Personally, I think it has to do with the design of the character. If it's a character with a long snout, it's difficult to make them look good while facing the viewer because you need so much foreshortening. The opposite goes for humanoid faces...It's a lot easier to make them face the viewer, like Urist McScoopbeard's avatar up there.

[Shook]

Oh man, it's always the foreshortening, isn't it? :v
But yeah, human faces are a LOT easier to draw frontally than "long snout" faces (even though i rarely draw actual human faces). I still find 3/4th view to be more comfortable though, partly out of habit, and partly because i don't like being soul stared by my own drawings. (the front view up there being a surprisingly mild case of soul stare)