I oughta make the drawabox deal too, but on the other hand, i could also keep being a pretentious fool who thinks he's doing better on his own.
HMMMMMMMMMMM
The latter sounds much more reasonable to me, i lack the patience to go through what is essentially a training regimen that undoubtably works. :v
In my own defense though, i don't draw for improvement as much as i draw to have fun, and/or to prove that learning to draw doesn't have to be hard work. As long as i don't consider my drawings perfect, i'm pretty sure improvement will happen on its own.
Tablet experiments continue. This hollow is not happy about that 1200 damage riposte you just hit him with.
Feedback is appreciated even more than usual while I find my feet with this thing.
Aha, i see you're starting to draw heads more evenly! Das goot, i like it. Bro-tip though: Flip your drawing horizontally from time to time. You'll likely see that it's lopsided/skewed. My drawings tends to be MASSIVELY lopsided/skewed, and i have no fucking idea why it happens, though it might be related to the inherent difficulty of drawing an even circle on a tablet. :I
Anyways, a few things: Teeth are too unevenly sized, and you've put too thick a line in between them. Either make it a complete gap, or a subtly hinted line. I was actually surprised to learn that you only barely need to draw a line between close-set teeth. Also note that they start curving inwards quite a bit at the canines, so they'll appear much more narrow towards the sides of the mouth. The way you've set them up, they basically look like they're set along a line. Also, the lips are probably too clearly defined; for a shriveled up hollow, they'd probably be as prune-like as the rest of the face, and would likely be hard to pinpoint exactly beyond "around mouth hole".
... apparently only mouth related things but oh well
I am slightly bothered by the helmet not being set completely straight on the head, but this being a mindless hollow... Well, wouldn't put it past them. :v
edit: Oh yeah also thanks for your kind words re: boan snek guise! I decided to give it some shading and apply that nifty pencil rubby thing i have, and well...
Better than expected. I need a scanner. :U