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[DoctorMcTaalik]

I thought he was quivering, not bending his knees.

[XhAPPYSLApX]

All good points, will probably modify it later tonight, thanks for the help

[Urist McScoopbeard]

I thought he was quivering, not bending his knees.

If you know someone who quivers vertically instead of horizontally, i'm gonna need to see some picture, sir.

[Arx]

Now returning to your regularly scheduled Inktober...

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Manly bearded warrior is not sure how he feels about this turn of events.

[miauw62]

I think you should define the top of the helmet a bit more, on my small phone screen it looked like two missiles before I scrolled down

[XhAPPYSLApX]

Oh and happy inktober too

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It's not perfect(but what is?) And it is obviously not finished (running out of ink does that) but I kinda wanted to post it as a progressive thinga-ma-jig.

And sorry about the blurryness, tablet camera is not the best :/

[BlackFlyme]

Poorly drawn Hobgoblins. Had the day off of work. Had to fill my time with something other than videogames.

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[Shook]

Ooo, nice spiral on that vine/root arrow. Those tend to be a pain in the arse to nail. :I

Oh and happy inktober too

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It's not perfect(but what is?) And it is obviously not finished (running out of ink does that) but I kinda wanted to post it as a progressive thinga-ma-jig.

And sorry about the blurryness, tablet camera is not the best :/

Oh shiet, that's really nice! Looking forward to seeing how it'll look in the future.

I think you should define the top of the helmet a bit more, on my small phone screen it looked like two missiles before I scrolled down

oh dear god i CANNOT UNSEE THE ROCKETHEEEEEEEEAD

Also Arx, you nailed the eye-nose proportions nicely this time, although now it strikes me that his eyes are rather large. Also, if i am to be extra pernickety, it's a bit hard to distinguish between shadinglines and beard, but in all fairness, there's not that many different kinds of lines to work with here. I'd just like for a manly beard to be more visible. :v
Also also super pernickety bonus: lips are actually quite faintly outlined in meatspace, it's only the colour difference and possibly lighting that makes them stand out. This is probably also why i can get away with making mouths as a single line.

also bonus beardfacedoodle because you inspired me

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COARSEBEARD. And now i will post this before i get ninja'd again, so i can get going on my Inktober thing.

edit: [inktober intensifies]

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NARF

i messed up that background shoulder so bad but otherwise i'm surprisingly happy with this, stiff pose besides

[Arx]

Lines are nice and clean there, shook!

This is gonna sound like a cop-out but I did actually know most of the issues with that drawing were there, I just either couldn't be bothered to fix it (the helmet definition) (I wasn't having a lot of fun yesterday) or couldn't fix it because ink (the eyes) (also he looks like that because he's concussed (totally)).

The problem with lips is that the lighting (and colour) does make them stand out. Leaving them out is symbol-drawing as badly as outlining them! This is why I like charcoal and pencil better than I like pen.

[XhAPPYSLApX]

Hype mode double engaged:

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Progress report #2
Still not finished, but shaping up rather nicely if I do say so myself

[The Fool]

Did a character portrait for a forum game in my free time. Need to branch out and try doing expressive works to get better at faces in motion.

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[Shook]

Hoh, berry gut! I know i'm going to seem like a very nose-centric guy now, but her nose seems a bit too long and... Small. As in, a bit too narrow and doesn't stick out enough, even for a pretty lady nose. Also, if i am to be SUPER NITPICKY, her gaze seems kind of unfocused; although it tends to be exaggerated in cartoons, eyes are usually slightly crossed, since they're both focusing on the same spot from different positions. Beyond that though, excellent work on the hair and lips.

Lines are nice and clean there, shook!

This is gonna sound like a cop-out but I did actually know most of the issues with that drawing were there, I just either couldn't be bothered to fix it (the helmet definition) (I wasn't having a lot of fun yesterday) or couldn't fix it because ink (the eyes) (also he looks like that because he's concussed (totally)).

The problem with lips is that the lighting (and colour) does make them stand out. Leaving them out is symbol-drawing as badly as outlining them! This is why I like charcoal and pencil better than I like pen.

Thanks bro! Also don't worry, i can confirm that there's at least one other person (me) who gets caught by the "eh, can't be bothered to fix it" mojo. The most important part is that you know about those little bothersome things so that you can work on it at your behest. c:

also since i've drawn Pinky i think it's fairly given that the next subject is

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Once again, not a perfect depiction, but i'm reasonably happy with it.

[The Fool]

Hoh, berry gut! I know i'm going to seem like a very nose-centric guy now, but her nose seems a bit too long and... Small. As in, a bit too narrow and doesn't stick out enough, even for a pretty lady nose. Also, if i am to be SUPER NITPICKY, her gaze seems kind of unfocused; although it tends to be exaggerated in cartoons, eyes are usually slightly crossed, since they're both focusing on the same spot from different positions. Beyond that though, excellent work on the hair and lips.

What's funny is that the nose used to be shorter, but I second guessed myself. Also widened out the bridge, which is likely why the nose wasn't sticking out far enough proportionally. Meh. Live and learn.

[Darkmere]

I... I guess this counts as Inktober? Iunno.

Organic perspective boxes homework. Freehand (except the border), no pencil sketch, in pen - Final Destination. I screwed up a few but overall it turned out decent enough for starters. I hope.

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[Cheesecake]

I didn't even know there was an Inktober. :/ Well, I guess this counts? So, what are the rules? I'm guessing: ink, and no pencil guidelines?

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