Well, since it's pretty slow over here I guess I'll re-post my Thob drawings:
I'm quite pleased with this one.
Her proportions are off because I ran out of room at the bottom of the paper...
Comments and critiques welcome.
I like your style, its rather distinctive, reminds me of old cartoons or comics i used to read as a kid.
You want some critique? ask and ye' shall recieve, just dont blame me if you dont like what i have to say
The tree leaves in the first image stick out, and im pretty sure they're just a bunch of the same image stamped repeatedly... how close am i? Theres a trick to making that less obvious: Rotate and scale the image, its the same trick games use for large forests, many have just a few tree models(trees are hard), but they rotate and scale them so that they appear different.
Shading is a pain, but its a great way to show structure and form of things, though its okay if your style intentionally omits it for well... style reasons.
My brain is having a bit of difficulty seperating the foreground from the background in the last image. I know its supposed to be a window, but it looks like a painting. Some deal in the first image, i know Thob is supposed to be in the background with his tree, but i cant shake the feeling that he's floating. A good trick here would have been to have a part of the foreground in front of the background, like the monster's wing for example, even a small part of the wing.
Also Thob needs some new poses, lol.
(Take everything i say with a grain of salt, i dont draw or paint, but i am a 3D modeler who does some (rather well recieved) renders.)