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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3210 on: May 18, 2012, 06:03:15 pm »



(( Shortly after Jaxler's arrest : Indigo's testimony. ))
(( Looks like I'll have to write this after all. ))

I was temporarily drafted by Partisan into the guard to help with Jaxler's arrest. Since I'm his squad captain, it was my responsibility to be there. I put on my armour and took my shield and axe in case things got out of hoof. For the record, they are not mine, they are only borrowed to me, but I've been using them for a while now. Shortly after Partisan told me about the arrest, Kat came along. She wasn't wearing any armour, but she had a crossbow with her. I asked Partisan if he had somepony watching Jaxler's window, so he sent Kat to do that.

When I was getting ready, Falcata came along in her full combat gear. This was her time to take the watch in front of the keep, but she volunteered to help with the arrest. She stood in front of me, to the east of Jaxler's door and Partisan knocked on it. He told Jaxler to come out and surrender. Jaxler agreed, provided that we let him go peacefully and that he could keep his crossbow. Partisan told him that we were just there to escort him to a cell, but he couldn't keep his crossbow. Now, I just can't see how a prisoner could be allowed to keep a weapon, so Partisan was perfectly reasonable.

Jaxler agreed to go peacefully, but when he came out of his room, he started yelling, that he won't go anywhere without his crossbow, which he didn't have with him at the time. At this moment Sarissa came out of her room with an axe, so me and Falcata explained, that we want to take Jaxler alive and Sarissa said, she wouldn't kill a fellow Dawnpicker. I thought that settled it, but more on that later.

While me and Falcata were talking to Sarissa, Partisan was trying to reason with Jaxler, search him and disarm him of any weapons. Now, I know Jaxler and he can be quite deadly with any blunt or sharp object, so Partisan's request was perfectly reasonable. Yet Jaxler mocked him, by calling his brass horseshoes, obviously meant as weapons, "fashion accessories".

Jaxler argued about keeping his crossbow and said, he would rather die, than part with it. Partisan answered that the crossbow would be locked in the Keep until Jaxler gets out of prison. Jaxler answered that he would rather die than trust Partisan with his crossbow and knocked him out in one hit.

Sarissa was the quickest to react and tried to knock Jaxler out with the blunt side of her axe, but Falcata tackled her, saying something about not letting Sarissa kill Jaxler and the axe hit his wing instead, breaking it. Now, some might say that Sarissa was using too much force, but there is no telling how exactly Falcata altered the force of the blow and Jaxler is tough and dangerous. It was prudent to use too much rather than too little force on him in any case. On the other hoof, well... Falcata is impulsive and Sarissa has a reputation for going violent, so I can see why Falcata assumed Sarissa was going for a kill. But it was all a misunderstanding and Falcata did more harm than good by interfering. 

I yelled for backup and tried to hold down Jaxler with my telekinesis, while the two mares were wrestling and arguing and Jaxler was yelling about "not getting slaughtered, like an animal". I managed to more or less hold him at the threshold of his door, but not to disable him completely. You normally need about three unicorns for something like that, and I'm going to recommend that tactics to the guard.

Meanwhile Granite, Friesden's coltfriend and Jaxler's follower, got out of his room. I think he heard all the yelling. Just to put things into perspective: From what I know about him, he did nothing, but drink, steal and idolise Jaxler for years. He also somehow got into possession of a golden chain at about the time of the Rainbow Pony massacre, which is above his ability to own. He even somehow managed to train using it as a weapon, without authorisation, as far as I know. When Granite got out of his room, he saw Jaxler and run next to him in a misguided attempt to interrupt the arrest. I was too busy with Jaxler to do anything about it, Falcata was still wrestling with Sarissa and Partisan was unconscious, so I yelled for backup again.

Meanwhile, Jaxler got a hold of a knife and Falcata finally left Sarissa alone, grabbed an axe and told Jaxler to put his knife away and surrender. Granite run into Jaxler's room, screamed and it made Jaxler go berserk. I haven't seen, what happened inside the room, but from what I pieced together, Kat has flown close to the window, tried to shoot Jaxler, but shot Granite instead. Now, while she might have hurt Jaxler seriously, I wouldn't hold that against her. Jaxler resisted arrest, had a weapon, and Partisan was in Kat's sight, lying unconscious. The way I see it, she was defending Partisan's life, but Granite accidentally got in her way.

Hearing a scream, I yelled "Get out of there, you idiot! We're trying to arrest a criminal!", but it was too late for that. Seeing his wounded drinking buddy, made Jaxler go berserk. He simply lost it. He yelled, he was going to kill Kat and threw his knife at her, which I was unable to stop. I later learned that she got seriously wounded, but at the time I continued to limit his movement, hoping that somepony else finally helps me with it.

Fortunately Sarissa helped me hold him still and Falcata first slammed him to the ground, then knocked him out with the blunt side of her axe. Jaxler's last words were "Let me the buck go, so I can kill that monster!" I assume, he was speaking about Kat.

When Jaxler was knocked out, Sarissa took him to prison, Falcata flew out the window to help wounded Kat and I checked up on Partisan. I woke him up, put all the scattered weapons in my room, took a piece of cloth to stop the bleeding and we both took the wounded Granite to the hospital. After that I stayed with Partisan for a while and we bumped into Virtue and Sarissa. We talked, and then I went to sleep and that was the end of it.

Jaxler wasn't just defending himself. He resisted arrest, struck first and wounded some guards. All we did was telling him to surrender, then knocked him out. This should be perfectly clear.

NOTE: Granite tried to interrupt the arrest and got in the way. I'd say a little taste of what it means to be on the bad side of the law will do the stupid colt a lot of good, before he turns into another Jaxler. This warrants a criminal charge against Granite.

(( Omicega: I give you my blessing for Jury to use Indigo as she sees fit concerning this case. ))

(( Scripting Indigo's behaviour: Indigo actually calls on all the horseshit that Glaive is trying to pull in Jaxler's defence, when he learns about it. He helps Jury to get things done in any reasonable way he can. ))
(( It may be possible to sway Indigo a bit in Jaxler's favour, but not much. If he is ever assigned to guard Jaxler's cell, he wont leave it, unless told so by Virtue, Partisan or Halberd. Glaive won't get rid of him. If Indigo sees Glaive giving Jaxler alcohol, he will interrupt it and argue. Glaive MAY persuade Indigo into not reporting it, but Indigo will insist that it repays all his debts to Glaive for training with the reserves and disapprove on top of that. Other ponies smuggling booze get reported. Indigo is a big believer in duty. ))
« Last Edit: May 22, 2012, 03:51:13 pm by Maklak »
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3211 on: May 18, 2012, 10:29:44 pm »



Jaxler woke up. He had another nightmare, and only was able to get about 30 minutes of sleep in the last two days. Jaxler tried to look around, he couldn't find his crossbow anywhere. Then the stallion shut his eyes tightly, the walls seemed like they were about to crush him again. The little pony tried backing away before remembering that he had fallen asleep in the corner of the cell. The pegasus really couldn't handle any of this. even with his crossbow Jaxler probably couldn't handle this. He had almost killed a pony, broke his wing, ruined his chances of getting back in the guard, Granite almost died because of him and probably hates him, he lost the only item that gave him any comfort in this world and in doing so he had lost 99% of his net worth. But most of all, the one thing that was eating at him the most was the fact that the only pony who was willing to help him escape the hell he built for himself might hate him now. No... that was impossible. It had to be impossible... it had too be... The pony started to shake, maybe he was beyond salvation... but nopony could blame Flux if he abandoned Jaxler. The pony really didn't deserve such a wretched mess.
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3212 on: May 18, 2012, 10:43:23 pm »



I had put off visiting Jaxler... I had to know Kat would be alright.  And I had to have time to cool off.  Jaxler had messed up.  He had messed up worse than I had ever imagined he could.  All he had to do was go along quietly!  But no...  I shake my head to clear it before heading down the stairs to the cell.  Kindness hadn't gotten through to him before he made this mistake... so maybe it was time for a new approach: Blunt Honestly.

I see Jaxler huddled in the corner of his cell, eyes clenched closed... he looks bad.  I quietly approach and tap the bars, trying to get his attention.


"Jaxler?"
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3213 on: May 18, 2012, 10:50:38 pm »



Jaxler opened his eyes, seeing the pony on the other side of the bars. When he saw his friend in front of him, he honestly wondered if he had gone insane.
"F-flux..."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3214 on: May 18, 2012, 10:54:02 pm »



I have no smile for my fr... for Jaxler, just a small frown of disappointment.

"Jaxler... how are you doing?"
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3215 on: May 18, 2012, 10:56:27 pm »



"I-I..." Jaxler closed his eyes again, the demonic walls were shifting once more. "P-please don't h-hate me..."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3216 on: May 18, 2012, 11:01:24 pm »



"I... don't hate you, Jaxler.  I'm just... disappointed."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3217 on: May 18, 2012, 11:06:33 pm »



"You may not hate me." Jaxler tried not crack as he spoke. "T-that doesn't mean... that doesn't mean you won't c-cut your losses... N-nopony would blame you... N-not even... not even me..."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3218 on: May 18, 2012, 11:16:13 pm »



"I'd be lying if I said I hadn't considered that, Jaxler.  You almost killed Kat.  Granite got shot.  You knocked out Partisan!  You could have been out in a month or two if you had simply cooperated, Jaxler.  But you did, and two ponies are in the hospital and you are probably going to be in here for a long time.  I've even heard rumors about banishment."

I sigh and take a step back from the cell, starting to pace.  My voice starts to crack as I keep talking.

"Why?  Why couldn't you cooperate?  Why did you try to kill Kat?!  Why can't you be sober?!  Why can't you stop trying to kill yourself by handing the weapon to somepony else to use?!!"

I stop in front of him, tears streaming as I whisper:  "Why?"
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3219 on: May 18, 2012, 11:36:52 pm »



"BECAUSE I DAMNED MYSELF!" The pony was about to break. He had never in is life heard Flux yell at him. not ever... "I don't know how... but I offended some god somewhere somehow some time ago. I cursed myself somehow. Everything I try ends badly and those who dare help me end up harmed. And somehow, They die in my place... whenever I'm about to die and escape this hell, I dodge the bolt and it hits somepony else and I walk out somehow with less then I started with. I'm a demon bringing others with me to hell. I try to do good, I try to fix myself and in the end, the mundane circle of existence that is Jaxler manages to recycle. I'm tired of this. Hurting those I care about, causing everything to burn around me. I just want it all to end and now I don't even have my crossbow to smite myself with." Jaxler's eye's started to water up "I don't know why I'm a monster. I just want to be a good pony." At his final confession, the pony broke, and for the first time in more then half a century, the creature cried.
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3220 on: May 18, 2012, 11:47:20 pm »



"Damnation and Salvation are not the purview of mortals such as we, Jaxler.  Stop trying to die for the ones you care about... and start trying to live for them.  Seeing you drink... it hurts.  Seeing you fight when you shouldn't... it hurts.  Seeing you brutalize yourself with guilt... that really hurts.  You say everything you try ends badly?  Nothing is over while you live.  You want it to end well?  Live, and make sure it does."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3221 on: May 19, 2012, 12:03:09 am »



"E-even t-then I d-don't have much t-time left..." Jaxler made a mistake years ago. He had not right to have had been dragged out of the caves. He didn't have the right to make such a kind pony suffer because of him. Granite didn't deserve such a horrid role model, he should have reminded the foal that Falcata was the one who beheaded to the snatcher. Amor didn't even deserve this mess. She had lost ponies before and didn't deserve to be friends with someone who was going to die. Even Partisan didn't deserve him. The pony tried to help Jaxler when he could, he tried to protect him like a good guard, and now all Jaxler was going to do was harm him. He then glanced at his cutie mark, mocking him. and then he glanced at the second cutie mark streaking over his kidney... His special talent was strife. "P-p-p-please t-tell the g-guards I tried to a-attack you... T-t-they should S-s-s-strike me... me d-d-d-d-d-own."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3222 on: May 19, 2012, 12:23:58 am »



My eyes narrow at that.  I walk over to the guard's table, glad they left a +stone mug+ behind, and hurl it at Jaxler's face.

"Don't betray your principles, Jaxler! You hate when ponies lie! How do you think your loved ones would feel about that?  If you don't have much time left, then stop wasting it!  Shape up, clean up, and remember you are not alone, Jaxler!  You actions have consequences, Jaxler.  Consequences for more ponies than just you."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3223 on: May 19, 2012, 12:26:51 am »



strangely enough the mug actually hurt a little when it hit Jaxler. he even flinched as it struck him "A-and t-t-that's why I h-hate when ponies worry a-about me..."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #3224 on: May 19, 2012, 12:31:53 am »



I walk back to the cell bars, still scowling slightly.

"Then think about us before you do something that might make us worry."
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