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Author Topic: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)  (Read 236184 times)

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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1500 on: March 07, 2012, 12:57:21 am »

Carmine had raised her, that's right, he was raising her... He was raising somepony ells' foal

"She, she, belongs to somepony! not me though! SOME BUCKING ZEBRA!"

He turned away chewing on his cheek. He had been betrayed.
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1501 on: March 07, 2012, 01:01:15 am »

Ocean Breeze is nearly in hysterics by this point.  "Carmine, please... y-y-you're her father!  I-I made a mistake... b-but..."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1502 on: March 07, 2012, 01:02:28 am »

Friesden is lying on the floor, her sobs continuing.
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1503 on: March 07, 2012, 01:06:14 am »

Carmine was so mad he could hardly speak, and he was so sad he just wanted to run away. run away from this pony he didn't even know any more

"H-her or us? Y-you got to chose *sniff* Ocean, h-her or us?!"
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1504 on: March 07, 2012, 01:10:56 am »

Friesden stops the sobbing for a second. "P-p-p-please d-d-d-d-dad, d-d-d-d-d-d-don't, p-p-p-p-p-please..."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1505 on: March 07, 2012, 01:11:20 am »

Her mouth hangs agape for a few moments before she collapses to the ground, face in hooves as she begins to sob.  What had she done?  She had to choose between her daughter and the rest of her family.  How could anypony do that?  She is unable to vocalize at all for some moments, daring not to look up to her husband or child.  Finally she croaks, "You..."

What had she done?
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1506 on: March 07, 2012, 01:12:42 am »

Friesden wraps her forelegs around her father's leg, as tight as she can. "P-p-p-p-p-p-please...."
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1507 on: March 07, 2012, 01:18:17 am »

Carmine looks at friesdizzy his eyes quiver for a moment, and then pushes her away. He needed to help his wife, It was just one thing... wasn't it?

"I..I... lets' go home, Ocean, we, need to, to...."

He tries to get Ocean Breeze to her hooves again, and he was trying even harder to forget this ZEBRA that was not! his! daughter!
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1508 on: March 07, 2012, 01:21:38 am »

Carmine has to all but drag his stricken wife from the scene, who fixes her eyes on her daughter as the filly slowly disappears into the distance.
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1509 on: March 07, 2012, 01:23:42 am »

Friesden just sits there sobbing.
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1510 on: March 07, 2012, 01:27:37 am »



I was out walking when I heard loud yelling by the well. I ran over, just in time to see Ocean breeze and Carmine leaving, and young Friesden sitting on the ground sobbing. Slowly I approach her, noticing the odd stripes, which I'm sure I've never seen on her before, and carefully reach put a hoof to touch her withers. "Little one? What's wrong? Why are you crying?"
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1511 on: March 07, 2012, 01:28:53 am »

Friesden doesn't answer, just sobbing her eyes out.
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1512 on: March 07, 2012, 01:31:49 am »



Deciding that caution wasn't going to help in this situation, I wrap my forehooves around Friesden and hug her close. "Hush now little one... just let it out... can.. can you tell me what happened? Where did these stripes come from?"
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1513 on: March 07, 2012, 01:34:46 am »

Friesden just continues sobbing onto Glyph.
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Re: Dawnpick (My Little Fortress)
« Reply #1514 on: March 07, 2012, 01:38:36 am »



"Come on... it's okay..." I brush Friesden's mane, letting her cry. "Maybe we should find your parents..."
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