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Author Topic: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)  (Read 6502 times)

Sean Mirrsen

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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #45 on: October 30, 2011, 01:07:21 pm »

Last version for today, I think:



I'll start on properly sketching backgrounds tomorrow.
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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #46 on: October 30, 2011, 02:39:03 pm »

Fluttershy's eyes are a bit heavy, tone down the lines just a bit.

Other than that, excellent work. I wish I could draw that well (well, I almost can, but I'm so obsessive-compulsive I assume anything I draw is imperfect and end up throwing it out).
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« Reply #47 on: October 30, 2011, 07:47:01 pm »

Probably a bit late, considering the drawing is basically done, but:

Spoiler: Starkey the Markspony (click to show/hide)
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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #48 on: October 30, 2011, 09:07:16 pm »

Probably a bit late, considering the drawing is basically done, but:

Spoiler: Starkey the Markspony (click to show/hide)
Never too late, I keep them all in layers anyway. I just needed a pony-shaped obstruction to keep the line going, so I threw together a placeholder. Which, now that I look at it, isn't that far off. Mostly hairstyle, head shape, and lack of helmet. Plus, tasteful accessory. I'll redraw 'im once I wake up proper and have some free time on my hands.
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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #49 on: October 31, 2011, 06:43:38 pm »

All done. Everyone check your PMs.
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« Reply #50 on: October 31, 2011, 06:49:06 pm »

I'll edit the doc now. Synchronise watches. I'll submit cutefic now, unless we have an objection?
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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #51 on: October 31, 2011, 07:03:11 pm »

I think we ought to at least wait 'till the rest of the gang is on. Where are we going to submit it first?
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« Reply #52 on: October 31, 2011, 07:04:44 pm »

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2133/Friends-In-Need is the story. The actual part will be uploaded but unpublished until we get a majority agreement.
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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #53 on: October 31, 2011, 07:41:46 pm »

Fine by me. Shoot!

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« Reply #54 on: October 31, 2011, 07:56:36 pm »

Story is a GO for launch!
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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #55 on: November 01, 2011, 12:13:27 am »

Eh, should've waited for me to give it a proofread again. But oh well. I christen thee, fic, Friends In Need, and may thou havest a safe journey through the Internetz!

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And let all who see thee in thine full glory go blind, for it doth protect them from the madness. Somewhat.
« Last Edit: November 01, 2011, 12:16:56 am by Sean Mirrsen »
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« Reply #56 on: November 01, 2011, 05:06:37 am »

Out of sheer curiosity, how many of the current 6 5-star ratings for the fic are "ours"? Also, 126 reads and no comments from non-Bay12ers.

I would link to the fic on GitP forums, which would get us a bundle of new readers, but I'm a little wary of any negative reaction it might induce once we go to Phase 3.
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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #57 on: November 01, 2011, 05:12:53 am »

1. Get new account (name it Goblin's Friend)
2. Advertise on the forum (Maybe get a couple of posts before/say that you've lurked because of ponies)
3. ???
4. PROFIT!!!
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« Reply #58 on: November 01, 2011, 05:13:40 am »

Or, hell, say that you've found it and don't mention the help you gave it.
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Re: The Goblin's Friend (Collaborative Writing Group)
« Reply #59 on: November 01, 2011, 05:23:22 am »

...I've got the same name, avatar and signature there as I do here. And I never used alt-characters even in noncompetitive MMO play.

They'll recognize my drawing style anyway when/if they see the title image though. Speaking of which, better get on that. Do we have a deadline for Phase 2?
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