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[Jimmy]

So what is the motivation for shipping anyway?

Personally I see there being two distinct forms of shipping fanfics.

First there's the romantic relationship, an exploration of the emotions and uncertainties of affection between friends that could potentially turn into more. Usually no more explicit than a typical Hollywood romantic comedy movie.

Then there's the clopfic, or lemon fic to use a generic ficwriter term that doesn't apply to just MLP. Usually explicit and focused on the physical sexual act rather than emotion or relationship building and character development, it's more an opportunity to express and visualize a sexual fantasy with one or more characters in a series.

Generally speaking it takes more talent to write good romance than lemon, and you'll receive more recognition for your work too.

Also kaenneth, while I respect your right to freedom of expression I'd suggest your fic violates the forum rules and you'd be better off linking it to an offsite location instead. Pastebin's an easy alternative.

[Zaerosz]

This is totally gay, and I wrote it to be as shocking as possible

Seriously, it's very gay.

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Snips lowered his head, "Come on Snails, you do me, then I'll do you."

"I dunno, it seems kinda weird."

"Come on, just try it once, I promise you'll like it."

"Well, OK...", Snails gingerly placed his mouth around Snips' horn, carefully avoiding touching it.

"Come on man, you have to close your mouth and suck it, I'll do you next, I promise!" said Snips.

Snails pulled back gagging, "Ugh, when was the last time you washed it?"

"I took a shower a couple hours ago, come on man, it feels really good!", Snips replied, "I'll do you first if you promise to do me after?"

"Well, OK", said Snails, lowering his head. Snips suddenly clamped his mouth around Snails' horn and began sucking incredibly hard! "Ow! Ow! Stop!" Jerking away.

"Sorry, I did it too hard, Big Mac... I mean, I've only had it done to me, the other pony didn't have a horn. But he was pretty strong, and muscle... and... he did it pretty hard and it ended up feeling good, don't wuss out now bro."

"Will you stop if I say so?", "You bet bro, just do me afterwards, right?", "OK"

Snails slowly lowered his head again, and Snips once again enveloped his horn, a bit more gently this time, and started bobbing his head up and down.

He had never thought a lot about his Horn, he knew that not all ponys had them, and that it could be use to manipulate objects, and other magic, but he hadn't realized how sensitive it was, and how good, how... amazingly good it could feel.

His mind both wandered, and focused onto his horn, it was the center of his being, the focus of his power, his growing, rising power, building up in a great wave surging into his horn... ...

"Gah, warn me before you surge magic next time Snails! It got all over my face!"

There will DEFINITELY be a next time, thought Snails, as he greedly clomped down onto Snips' horn.

I've seen gayer, though not quite as... uncomfortable as that one.

[Dsarker]

I must say, the only romance I've read/watched is Faramir and Eöwyn in book 6 of the Lord of the Rings.

[Dsarker]

Go ahead.


Anyway, latest WIP for my continuation of the fic.

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Rarity kept her vigil. The cyan pegasus slept under her watch. She doubted that the guardspony even knew she was there. Rarity watched her like a hawk. Ever since the incident, she ha-

She knew she was there. What had told her, she couldn't say, but she knew she was there. Rarity was already moving, already yelling for backup. But she knew it was futile. Before the Eversor would have gotten this close, the guards would be long dead.

Dash woke at the sound, and tried to get up. But she was still groggy.

The singsong voice came.

"Heya fillies! Pinkie is here for you!"

Dash was clear thinking now, and the terror in her face was evident. The echoing of the hoofsteps ....

So, this is a continuation of this part?

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Pinkie squinted as she looked outside. It had been almost a year, and she still hadn't adapted to the light of day. It had been endless night for too long. The Go- No. She didn't like that title. It reminded her of Luna. The princess had said that it was possible she'd never see properly in the light again. Pinkie didn't mind.

What she did mind were the straps and restraints holding her in. She chafed at them, as she had her whole life. Ever since her initiation into the Eversor Clade as an itty bitty twinkie Pinkie, she had chafed. She longed to move, to act, to do. To kill.

But she knew why they didn't want her out. She was an Eversor. And she smiled as she thought of the myriad ways she planned to kill everypony who had kept her bound, and those who hadn't known, and those who hadn't cared. Everypony, in fact. Maybe a knife through their eyes while they slept. That was one she wanted to try on Twilight. That was what she'd always call her, despite her name being Mica. It felt right. And she longed to kill Twilight. The bitch had kept her restrained. Hadn't even let her out to slaughter a town or two.

Next was Dashie. A guardspony, and she would be a challenge. She could just fly out of range. But even then, Pinkie had plans. She had been enhanced. Not even a pegasus would get away from her. She could just taste the feeling of a sword disembowelling her. She would be the second hardest, because she was protected by the hardest.

The hardest was Rarity. Pinkie didn't know what had happened to cause her to feel protective of Dashie, but somehow she knew. And it disgusted her. Giving in to base biological desires. She was an assassin too! She was supposed to have had those trained out of her. But she would hopefully still be a challenge. She would fight. Pinkie liked it when they fought.

The third hardest would be the other pegasus. Fluttershy. The telepath. But without Rarity, Pinkie would drive her crazy. Maybe she'd be more fun if she was crazy. That was a thought to keep you warm on a winter night.

Then there was Applejack. The other earth pony was an Arbitrator. She would be fun. Much more fun than Dashie. Mmmm. Pinkie almost felt content at the thought of killing Applejack a thousand ways from Princess' Day. It would be the best fun she'd ever have had.

Of course, the other two...Markon, and Spike. That was them. They'd be fun. But they were both psykers. Weaklings in real fighting. They'd only be good for the screams of terror.

Pinkie continued to rub at the straps.

One of them broke.

I'm sorry, but I really have too many of your fanfics to go through to reliably guess where to put that part.

Edit: Also, I'd like at least a WIP name.
Edit2: Scratch that, just read it for the first time, I'm just gonna call it "Some fucked up Pinkie Pie shit".

I think you could call it My Little Warhammer: Friendship was HERESY!

[Sean Mirrsen]

Are you going to get RD killed by Pinkie again? I believe by this point it's pretty much the most cliche thing in MLP fanfiction.

Also, why is it that Pinkie is always the deranged murderer, anyway?

[Dsarker]

Because it doesn't work with the others. Applejack is a classic Arbitrator, Twilight Sparkle is a powerful psyker, but that doesn't work with the eversor. Rarity had to be the Culexus/Callidus. Rainbow Dash doesn't fit the type, nor does Fluttershy, and I was pairing up Rainbow Dash with the same views as Applejack, which means she couldn't be the Eversor either. Fluttershy I was using for the half-insane psyker who was unusual in type.

So it had to be Pinkie.

[Sean Mirrsen]

It only "had to be" inasmuch as you're determined to have one of the M6 killing the others. *glances around quickly for the definition of "eversor"* Hm. Well, you still could use a background character or an OC for the purpose.

[Dsarker]

http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Eversor_Temple#.TsI6IfFhiSM try this for a better answer.


Anyway, this is just a hypothetical side story I came up with because someone wanted to know what would happen after the death of Luna. Celestia, being the merciful fool she is, was trying to 'uncondition' Pinkie, who escaped.

Anyway, third part.


Rarity kept her vigil. The cyan pegasus slept under her watch. She doubted that the guardspony even knew she was there. Rarity watched her like a hawk. Ever since the incident, she ha-

She knew she was there. What had told her, she couldn't say, but she knew she was there. Rarity was already moving, already yelling for backup. But she knew it was futile. Before the Eversor would have gotten this close, the guards would be long dead. 

Dash woke at the sound, and tried to get up. But she was still groggy. 

The singsong voice came. 

"Heya fillies! Pinkie is here for you!"

Dash was clear thinking now, and the terror in her face was evident. The hoofsteps resounded through the building.  Rarity drew a pair of swords and tossed one to Dash. In a daze still, Dash caught it expertly and prepared to fight. 

The attack came without warning. Two knives were tossed through the air. Dash saw her doom approaching and tried to pray, but before she could even let a 'Please, Celestia, forgive me, and remember I am just a pony', Rarity's sword flashed and knocked them from the air. 

"I'm an assassin too, traitor. You'll not get us so easily," called Rarity. 

"Oh, that's good! Mica was only a bit of fun. You'll be a whole bundle!" came the reply. Rarity and Dash lifted their swords into the guard position. 

Pinkie came hurtling from above. Rarity lifted her sword up just in time and parried the attack, sending her to the ground. But Pinkie was quickly up again and attacking. Almost absent-mindedly, she sent two daggers flying Dash's way, just as her sword clashed with Rarity's. Dash tried to dodge them, but she missed one and it grazed her left foreleg. She winced, but moved to join Rarity in the fight. 

Rarity moved in a classic example of the art of the Culexus temple. Moving faster than could be thought possible, she swung her sword in a devastating series of attacks. 

All to no avail. Pinkie blocked them as deftly as if from an infant, and moved into her attacks. Rarity was just as quick as she was, and blocked them all.

All except one. She was grazed on the leg and fell down. She tried to lift herself up, but she couldn't move. She looked helplessly on as Pinkie grinned in childlike joy. Dash moved to try and protect her rapist from her enemy. But Pinkie had already killed her, disemboweling her so quickly she hadn't noticed.

Dash collapsed over her entrails, and the light of life left her eyes. Rarity watched helplessly as Pinkie left the room. She tried to speak, but even her mouth refused to obey her. She tried to cry, to weep, but her eyes were no longer hers.

She tried to breath.

[Sean Mirrsen]

Ugh. Can you keep these things in spoilers? Please? I barely got my barriers up in time.
(good thing I tend to keep them charged, at least...)

[Dsarker]

Hey. It's a post from me. That should be more than enough warning.

[MC Dirty]

Oh, so this is a WIP on your second MLP/Warhammer 40k crossover? Alright, I think I get it. But I think you should choose another name because it's too similar to the name of your first one.
I probably won't get around to doing anything related to the GREAT BAY12 ANTHOLOGY OF PONY STUFF today because I'm only home at about midnight or later, but I should probably be done with the second thread tomorrow evening or on Thursday.

[Dsarker]

Well, it's a sequel to the first one.

[MC Dirty]

Well, I guess.
Also, what the hell, third part? The second part is a part of the third part, as it seems because the second part is

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Rarity kept her vigil. The cyan pegasus slept under her watch. She doubted that the guardspony even knew she was there. Rarity watched her like a hawk. Ever since the incident, she ha-

She knew she was there. What had told her, she couldn't say, but she knew she was there. Rarity was already moving, already yelling for backup. But she knew it was futile. Before the Eversor would have gotten this close, the guards would be long dead.

Dash woke at the sound, and tried to get up. But she was still groggy.

The singsong voice came.

"Heya fillies! Pinkie is here for you!"

Dash was clear thinking now, and the terror in her face was evident. The echoing of the hoofsteps ....

which is repeated at the beginning of the "third" part.
Or did I miss a part?

Why can't I get any clear answers in this thread? >_<

[Dsarker]

Second part was Pinkie killing Mica (Twilight Sparkle). First bit was Pinkie breaking loose.

[MC Dirty]

How about reposting that stuff or something? The Bay12Forums search is kind of derping around, so it's pretty useless for finding stuff.

Anyway, after going through the last 5 or so pages again, I've got it now.
Seriously, I don't really want to read your long posts because I want to be able to concentrate on stuff other than blood and gore for the rest of the day, so if you post story parts without any context or introductory text (like "Hey, second part of my Friendship is Heresy sequel" or even "2nd part of my WIP crossover") whatsoever, it's kind of hard to put all of it together.