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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #90 on: November 03, 2011, 01:58:37 pm »

Looks like someone
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #91 on: November 03, 2011, 09:41:23 pm »

Meanwhile, at the other end of the fort...


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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #92 on: November 04, 2011, 08:20:20 pm »

I trotted on forward, towards Sepsi. Flashbang was behind me, looking altogether dejected. I tried comforting her, but Strongbeard gave me a questioning glance. It felt like an eternity, but the cavern walls gave way towards Sepsi Crimsontails area. I took a deep breath, and went inside.
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #93 on: November 04, 2011, 08:25:43 pm »

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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #94 on: November 05, 2011, 07:56:20 am »

As the doctor neared the door, Chatter Mouth said "Sorry old chap, but you are going in alone. How quaint!"

"What! I can't just leave her!" Solstice said. Then, under his breath,"Not with you at least."

The fez-wearing pony did not seem to hear him, only saying "Quite sorry old chum, but that's the way Miss Sepsi asked for it. Nudge-nudge, wink-wink, eh?

"What?"

The pony rolled his eyes and said "Nothing. God save the Princess and all that jazz eh?"

The doctor gave a comforting smile to the darkbolt, and entered the throne room, mostly to get the meeting over with, but also to get away from this over sterotyped pony.


The throne room was not that impressive. Mostly because of scarce resources, but also because of the crying princess sitting in the throne.

As Solstice entered the room, he was met by the angry glare of the aformentioned princess. Even though the tears running down her eyes might have removed some of the strength of the glare, they only seemed to add to hers.

The two pony's stood in silence for a while, until the princess broke it.

"Why?"

"Why what?"

 The princess seemed to have a massive change in attitude. She jumped up, and snarled.

"Why did you betray me?"

"I would never!"

"Oh no? Then why does it say in your journals that you read his! Why didn't you tell me?

"An insane pony like that could never be a threat to you!"

"Not to me, no, but to other ponies, yes! In fact, it says right here he was planing to kill not only me, but you, Strongbeard, Langgud and Loudwhisper! This is an unacceptable  lack of information on your part! What possible excuse could you have?"



"Mobius."

(No response.)

"Mobius."

(No response.)

"Mobius, as much as I would like to see bash your head in from repeatedly walking into that wall, it is getting very boring. So I will tell you this. You cannot walk through walls. Attempting so will injure you.

(No response.)

*Sigh*






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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #95 on: November 05, 2011, 09:38:44 am »

Unwritten No. 3

Mobius, using the last ounce of strength he had, felled the wall with his pickaxe, and behold! The creature was there! It was vaguely humanoid in shape, and it had grotesque teeth. It proceeded to devour Langgud, and there, Mobius cackled like there was no tomorrow. To him, one of his adversaries was finally defeated, and he moved onto the next one. To his horror and dismay, he couldn't get out of the hidden cave room, even though it was wide open with no obstacles. It also never occured to him that there was no wall in front of the entrance, no guards chasing him, and the beast ignored him.

He was already apprehended by Loudwhisper herself, who knocked him out and searched the area for evidence, or more specifically, the sack with stolen tools, solid journal pages, blueprint scraps and misapproprated food and drink, which were now containers and flasks, specifically.

The irrefutable proof was shown to Sepsi herself, who in a fit of rage, sent Mobius down a specially created chute just for him. It had no way out, the walls were smoothed, removing any chance of escape, and the chute was covered by a trapdoor to prevent his fecal matter from defiling the atmosphere above. He was occasionally sent food and drink, and was forced to run a water pump down there, to actually serve the ponies instead of being a useless idiot bumbling around the fortress.

And he was none the wiser, for his life ended when he first woke up in a spacious pitch-black chamber of nothing, except sounds coming from above and the rushing water below the pump. He became utterly and irredeemably insane when he heard the words "Give up your plans, Mobius. Your days of terror have come to an end." from no one but Sepsi Crimsontail herself.

Since then, he's been stuck, babbling about his anger against everyone. Two months after his imprisonment, the inhabitant in the chute seemed to have kept silent, and as such, no food and drinks were sent down the chute anymore, assuming him to be dead.

But the people working near the chute reported back to Sepsi to have heard sad whimpering and crying, as well as painful groans deep down the dark chute.

((Why did I choose a Creepypasta ending?))

((To be more specific, Mobius was apprehended by Loudwhisper, and sent to a typical jail. There, someone (Langgud?) watched him bash his head over and over in an idiotic attempt to escape, but when Sepsi received the solid evidence that implicated Mobius in the crime, she sent him down the chute to keep him from terrorizing the ponies. He was knocked out in prison, sent down the chute, and when he woke up, Sepsi said something. The chute contains a water pump from a water source (cavern? aquifer?) that leads upwards into the main fortress.))

((Yes, this concludes Mobius' life story, but I could take over another character if anyone wishes.))
« Last Edit: November 05, 2011, 09:50:20 am by New Guy »
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #96 on: November 05, 2011, 03:18:24 pm »

Memoirs of Sir Chatter Mouth: The Aftermath
I say, this most assuredly was the jolliest day of my life! I was ordered by the great Mistress Sepsi to bring the peasant, Mobius, into her presence. I enjoyed ever last moment of the act; Mobius sure was happy, I could hear the lad screaming as he fell down "the chute"! I better get back to work, I'll deface more..."artwork" with my memoirs later...
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #97 on: November 05, 2011, 10:56:31 pm »

((Tremble mortal foals, for Fwoosh has returned!))

Definitely Not Flashbang's Diary, Since Everyone Seems To Be Reading Them These Days

Broken. I think that's how I feel right now. Just broken. First that fiasco with Mobius, then Solstice of all ponies had to show up, and now here I am standing outside Sepsi's office, alone and forgotten while Slepnir knows what tortures are inflicted upon my beloved. I can't hear any screams, but that doesn't mean there aren't any. Those doors look pretty sound proof, and as one of the nobility I'm sure Sepsi knows more than a few ways to break a pony. At least that's what the diomedian nobility were like. Probably not much of a difference really.

Unfortunately, I am reminded of the fact that I am not alone by the unceasing chatter of the pony next to me. Not only will he not shut up, but he keeps tapping his hoof on the ground. Tap-tap-tap-tap, tap-tap-tap-tap, tap-tap-tap-tap, it's enough to drive a pony mad! Having finished some ridiculous tale involving an inflatable chair and some odd bipedal species that I'm sure doesn't really exist, he finally stopped to take a breath. I took this rare opportunity to give him a grin. While this doesn't sound like a particularly threatening action to most ponies, when your teeth have been filed down to points it really has a rather impressive effect. Combined with a death glare and flaring wings I achieved the impossible and drove the be-fezzed imbecile into silence.

"Chatter Mouth?" I asked sweetly, keeping my teeth bared, "would you kindly shut up now?" The pegasus slowly nodded, seemingly transfixed by my actions. He may have been an idiot, but he was obviously bright enough to recognize a pony on the edge. I've been through a lot today, and I have questions enough on my mind without his horrible blabbering interrupting my thoughts. After I glared at him for another minute, the idiot finally gave in and went over to talk to Strongbeard who was guarding the other end of the corridor. I finally had some peace and quiet.

"OPEN UP IN THE NAME OF THE PRINCESS!!" boomed a voice, echoing from behind the door Strongbeard was guarding. He immediately opened it, and two ponies entered the corridor. The owner of the booming voice was Loudwhisper, who was very obviously enraged. She was fully armed and armored, her bow ready to fire at the slightest provocation. Behind her was Laggud, bearing on his back a filthy cloth sack filled with who knows what. They paused to speak with Strongbeard, and I took the opportunity to melt into the shadows behind me. I may be a trained killer, but I know when its best to avoid a confrontation. I heard them mention something about a prisoner being secure, and that the evidence had been found. They then proceeded into the throne room, not giving the shadow I was lurking in a second glance.

So once again I was alone, surrounded by the darkness that I've dwelt in so long. All at once the emotions that overcame me before arose once again, forcing me to the ground. All the doubts and fears that I'd held in came back in full force, filling my head with questions. What is wrong with me? Why does nopony understand me? How can a pony like me ever be with a pony like Solstice? Will I ever even see him again? I was alone in the darkness, and in the shadows I began once again to cry.

((And back to sadness. Will the angst never end?))
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #98 on: November 05, 2011, 11:08:33 pm »

((Tremble mortal foals, for Fwoosh has returned!))

Definitely Not Flashbang's Diary, Since Everyone Seems To Be Reading Them These Days

Broken. I think that's how I feel right now. Just broken. First that fiasco with Mobius, then Solstice of all ponies had to show up, and now here I am standing outside Sepsi's office, alone and forgotten while Slepnir knows what tortures are inflicted upon my beloved. I can't hear any screams, but that doesn't mean there aren't any. Those doors look pretty sound proof, and as one of the nobility I'm sure Sepsi knows more than a few ways to break a pony. At least that's what the diomedian nobility were like. Probably not much of a difference really.

Unfortunately, I am reminded of the fact that I am not alone by the unceasing chatter of the pony next to me. Not only will he not shut up, but he keeps tapping his hoof on the ground. Tap-tap-tap-tap, tap-tap-tap-tap, tap-tap-tap-tap, it's enough to drive a pony mad! Having finished some ridiculous tale involving an inflatable chair and some odd bipedal species that I'm sure doesn't really exist, he finally stopped to take a breath. I took this rare opportunity to give him a grin. While this doesn't sound like a particularly threatening action to most ponies, when your teeth have been filed down to points it really has a rather impressive effect. Combined with a death glare and flaring wings I achieved the impossible and drove the be-fezzed imbecile into silence.

"Chatter Mouth?" I asked sweetly, keeping my teeth bared, "would you kindly shut up now?" The pegasus slowly nodded, seemingly transfixed by my actions. He may have been an idiot, but he was obviously bright enough to recognize a pony on the edge. I've been through a lot today, and I have questions enough on my mind without his horrible blabbering interrupting my thoughts. After I glared at him for another minute, the idiot finally gave in and went over to talk to Strongbeard who was guarding the other end of the corridor. I finally had some peace and quiet.

"OPEN UP IN THE NAME OF THE PRINCESS!!" boomed a voice, echoing from behind the door Strongbeard was guarding. He immediately opened it, and two ponies entered the corridor. The owner of the booming voice was Loudwhisper, who was very obviously enraged. She was fully armed and armored, her bow ready to fire at the slightest provocation. Behind her was Laggud, bearing on his back a filthy cloth sack filled with who knows what. They paused to speak with Strongbeard, and I took the opportunity to melt into the shadows behind me. I may be a trained killer, but I know when its best to avoid a confrontation. I heard them mention something about a prisoner being secure, and that the evidence had been found. They then proceeded into the throne room, not giving the shadow I was lurking in a second glance.

So once again I was alone, surrounded by the darkness that I've dwelt in so long. All at once the emotions that overcame me before arose once again, forcing me to the ground. All the doubts and fears that I'd held in came back in full force, filling my head with questions. What is wrong with me? Why does nopony understand me? How can a pony like me ever be with a pony like Solstice? Will I ever even see him again? I was alone in the darkness, and in the shadows I began once again to cry.

((And back to sadness. Will the angst never end?))
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #99 on: November 05, 2011, 11:22:16 pm »

((Hey Fwoosh, you might get penalized because you tortured me without the princess' consent.))
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #100 on: November 05, 2011, 11:44:50 pm »

Unwritten No. 2.5, The capture, and the event prior to Mobius being sent down the chute.

When Mobius came to, he saw that he wasn't in the comfort of his barely-furnished home. He was, in fact in the dungeon, awaiting punishment.

There was nopony there, other than himself. In fact, there were even no wardens in the dungeon itself; it was just him and only him. The room was only lit by a small, flickering torch.

"How dare she! SEALING A GOD HERE IN THIS DAMP DUNGEON! She will know her place very soon..."

Being trapped in a small room was Mobius' greatest fear, and with him already teetering on the edge of insanity, he tried to "phase through" the walls to escape. He didn't exactly know it didn't work; he was catatonic at that time. He was desperate to escape, and because of his repeated banging in the walls, the wooden horn strapped on his head was nearly no more.

Suddenly, somepony actually came to visit, and while that pony was amused by his actions, he wanted Mobius to keep himself alive, out of gruding respect, or hate, or under the orders of the princess. Whatever the reason, the pony attempted to catch a conversation with the mad-pony bashing his head on the wall.

"Mobius."

(No response.)

"Mobius."

(No response.)

"Mobius, as much as I would like to see bash your head in from repeatedly walking into that wall, it is getting very boring. So I will tell you this. You cannot walk through walls. Attempting so will injure you.

(No response.)

*Sigh*

Whoever that pony was, he didn't notice, since he blacked out moments ago. His hate, fear, and want to stay alive as a Madgod took over his mind and made him catatonic, repeating his futile actions of escape.

A few moments longer and the guards entered the dungeon cells, taking Mobius with them to who knows where.

"You're the first severe law offender here, Mobius. It's time we made an example capable of making scum like you fear the law!"

(No response.)

As he was dragged, he still kept bumping his head on the floor, thinking that it was a wall. Little did he know he was dragged to his doom.
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #101 on: November 06, 2011, 07:33:27 am »

((Thanks Master, I made sure to stick in a couple little DW references as well. See if you can spot them all. And New Guy, technically I never got around to actually torturing you. And anyway, its not like anyone is exactly going to listen to a word that comes out of Mobius's mouth at this point. I think it is clear who the victor is here.  :) ))
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #102 on: November 06, 2011, 07:56:03 am »

((But didn't you write the torture event in a journal? And somehow, the princess acquired the journals, and Solstice knows what you did, but yeah, I've already lost the game. :P))
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #103 on: November 06, 2011, 08:07:02 am »

((the four-note tapping is from The Sound of Dums/Last of The Timelords http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iGQooQeNvbs , and the bipedal species is likely the cyber men.))
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Re: A Pony's Hell (Community Fort)
« Reply #104 on: November 06, 2011, 12:25:33 pm »

((First of all I haven't actually written that journal yet as all of the continued bits show. I haven't exactly had the time with all the craziness going on. She may have my previous entries, but not the fourth one. And Master, you got the tapping right, but the inflatable chair and bipedal species is actually from a much older episode. It's from Terror of the Autons, the first episode the Master even showed up in, where he killed a man with an inflatable plastic chair. Here's the clip on youtube.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vXrAK6sUZ_0 ))
((Edit: Arg, curse you New Guy. Now I've lost The Game as well.))
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