I just realised that my little note about Lurrei was in an awkward place in the chapter. you don't mind if i move it so that the whole thing will be more coherent? Thusly (changes italic):
The vast black void split, and rushed forth a deluge of earth which formed what is the Earth. When the Earth itself formed, it gained sentience and found its self lonesome, so it divided itself into 12 different worlds, each with a different people. The first of these worlds was called Alendara, and was the home of the children of Bor. It was the world of fire. Second came Pira, world of water. Pira was the home of the Galtorites. Next was Imoha; a desert planet with few resources but two sentient races constantly at war: The Spider-race known as Kuttara, and the Ant-race known as Klaxxori. The fourth world was the land of eternal peace, where all things were good and well, and where all wish to go in their next life. And it was called Tak, which means peace, and from it's soil rose the Gulms, guardians of the gates of eternity. The fifth was Grekim, a planet of winged men and forests with trees as tall as mountains.The sixth world is known as Dragdim, a world in constant blizzard and populated by a race of ice giants called the Nnutoj. The seventh world, called Rahim, was a world of of crystalline landscapes and mirrors of the mind; no living creature walks it's earth, but certain spirits often end up here. The eighth was called Sphexi, a swamp planet populated by lizardmen and giant snakes. The ninth was Getim Huax, the mountain place, which was inhabited by the Toron Togosh. The Toron Togosh were creatures of rock and flesh; bone and skin were metal and rock, while blood and organs were hardy flesh. The tenth was Lujim, a barren rocky world inhabited by strange creatures. The eleventh was unnamed, for no creature had known it's surface, and it was dark in the night sky. The last world was the realm of change; evolution and natural mechanics ruled supreme; although magic was present as well as several sentient races, including humans, dwarves, elves, and many others. This last world was Earth itself, no longer lonely.
Once again the void opened, and from thence came the gods, to rule over these fully formed worlds. There were only five; some held to planets, others to domains. And so the gods were Altham; high one, Lurrei; balancer, Uruit; recorder, Gemest; life-giver, and Terros; death-bringer. Altham's love was given to the planet Tak, and all that was within it.Terros made her home within the confines of the 11th planet, but she visited each of the others regularly - for all men must die. Lurrei created her own domain; a remnant of the Splitting, a place of balance and equity, always half light, half dark; not large, but not small.
In the secret of her realm, Lurrei created the k'Ron, who will one day bring balance at the end of time. Although Gemest had certain duties on most of the planets, he preferred to live and bless where the weather was most temperate; Pira, Tak, Grekim, Sphexi, and Earth. Uruit gave birth to the first humans, elves, and dwarves by Altham and reigned over Tak alongside her husband. Terros and Gemest also mated; in their union of opposites, Grensal; the outsider was born. Grensal did not have the powers of the gods, but none-the-less he was destined to live forever and could travel between the realms. The fires of Alendara were forsaken by the gods as cursed, so the children of Bor thought of their own false deities as true. Those of Imoha respected the gods for their power, but did not worship them; their only gods were Brood, Thought, and Action. The Galtorites of Pira knew of Gemest and Terros, but called them by different names. And as for the rest of the mortal races, they worship false and true deities; not knowing which ones were truly real.