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Author Topic: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.  (Read 281499 times)

Dsarker

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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2985 on: November 25, 2011, 11:40:51 pm »

Friesden's wings move from over her eyes. Where there used to be a thick pupil, her eyes are now empty, pure white. She surges up and over Khenal, heading to the leader. She grabs his head by her back legs and twists. First the neck breaks, but she doesn't stop. She continues twisting, and before the astonished Diomedians or Khenal can do anything, she tears his head clean off.
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Khenal

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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2986 on: November 25, 2011, 11:42:21 pm »

'Is it bad that I wish my check had bounced?'

I stand as tall as I can manage with my horn aglow, hoping to intimidate the diomedians into simply leaving.  Captain Otik loading her crossbow certainly doesn't hurt, either.


"Leave now, Diomedians, or you may never get the chance to."

I glare steel and ice at them, daring them to even attempt to follow their leader's order.

Then Friesden goes berserk.


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I know, but Khenal is still worried about Cockroach messing with him.  Just like I know intimidating them won't work, but Khenal tries it anyway, heh.  Also, transcribing more of this for FiMFiction.  Getting close to where the rping explodes and I'm unsure how to transcribe that part.  Should I have it first person from Khenal's point of view, and change to other ponies when it becomes appropriate, or go for third person?

Stop with the ninjas! :P
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2987 on: November 25, 2011, 11:45:26 pm »

((I recommend having it first person, it would make it more interesting and more story-like.))

The diomedians, rather than flee for their life, cheer, much to astonishment of the others.
"Thank you so much, you have no idea how annoying that bastard was! Now, give us your stuff and we'll let you live."
« Last Edit: November 25, 2011, 11:48:17 pm by The Master »
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2988 on: November 25, 2011, 11:54:46 pm »

I hardly register what the diomedians say.  My mouth hangs open with shock as I try to process what just happened.

"...Friesden?"
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2989 on: November 26, 2011, 12:02:13 am »

Friesden is silent as she launches the head at another of the Diomedians and launches right back into the attack. She lifts up another of the Diomedians into the air and drops him, pummelling him throughout the drop. Her legs are covered in blood, and she turns to a third Diomedian. She flies straight at him, hooves held in front of her. Where she hits the head it ceases to exist, turning into a cloud of red, white and grey. Her face is covered in the remains. She turns to the last, the one she had hit with the head of the slain leader.


"You think very loudly, Khenal. Now, I know what's happening. She's an empty eyes berserker, for some reason. Now, what I want you to do is to pick up Carrot and Otik, and get us the hells away from her. She won't stop killing until she falls asleep. Once she wakes up...."

The Keeper scratches his head. "How did you deal with her memories, anyway? You never did tell."
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2990 on: November 26, 2011, 12:06:24 am »

"SWEET MOTHER'A DISCORD, IT'S A NO-EYE-KILLER! I'M OUTA-"
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2991 on: November 26, 2011, 12:09:37 am »

Keeper's words break me from my stupor, and I decide to follow his advice.  Horn glowing, I grab Carrot and Captain Otik and hurry towards the gates of Glitterglen.

'I used another mental construct, like the one I used on myself to forget about the experiments.  I didn't expect it to start slipping up so soon, though.  It took over a year for it to start to fail on me.  Now I think about it, though, it took life-or-death stuff for me to start bypassing it.'
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2992 on: November 26, 2011, 12:10:18 am »

Friesden swoops down, still silent, and tackles the Diomedian, before taking off again. He tries to get up, only to be knocked over by her as she comes speeding back. She does so again, and again, and again, breaking his will. She continues to do so until he eventually dies.


((and I have to go now, so....))

Friesden turns to Khenal, charges, and falls unconscious a metre away, landing at his feet.
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2993 on: November 26, 2011, 12:12:53 am »

"Khenal..." Splutters the suddenly conscious Psycho, "I told you so..." he says with a weak triumphant smile.
As Khenal and the gang near the gates, they hear the dying shrieks of the last diomedian, then silence.
« Last Edit: November 26, 2011, 12:14:27 am by The Master »
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2994 on: November 26, 2011, 12:18:57 am »

*Bubbles is standing on the tower, enjoying the view, when suddenly Khenal drags in Otik and Carrot.*
"Wha..... GET THEM TO THE HOSPITAL NOW!"-calls down Bubbles.
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2995 on: November 26, 2011, 12:22:04 am »

I give Carrot a glare, which quickly softens to a smirk.

"Please.  If all it took for me to abandon somepony was a psychotic outburst, I'd be a very lonely pony indeed."

I lower Captain Otik (who had been in the middle of a barrage of fiery epithets, and showed no signs of slowing) so I can pick up my beloved.

"How are you feeling, by the way?"

I start walking towards the hospital.
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2996 on: November 26, 2011, 12:23:24 am »

*Bubbles gallops down the tower, and talks to Khenal*
"Khenal.... What happened?"
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2997 on: November 26, 2011, 12:24:11 am »

((PLOT TWIST!))
"Strange, actually. Why was I in the jungle anyway...?" Asks Psycho, confused.
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2998 on: November 26, 2011, 12:32:33 am »

"You tried to run away."

I then address Bubbles' question.

"We found Carrot and, uh... dealt with a Diomedian ambush. Everypony is alright.  Well, apart from Carrot maybe not having a pulse again.  And Friesden should probably be put in a cell until she wakes up, just in case."

I give the doctor an awkward smile, realizing how messed up my definition of 'alright' sounds.
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Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
« Reply #2999 on: November 26, 2011, 12:44:10 am »

((aaaaaaaaaand there goes bubbles... ::)))
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