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[Draignean]

actualy my keyboard hates me and sometimes misses letters

And it also causes you to disregard capitalization and punctuation, and make run-on sentences?

The main cause of Sue-ism in newbie writers is the desire to have a "special" and "perfect" character. You're going about it the wrong way; you're just going to end up with a big sparkly empty shell of a character that no-one can stand. Make the character's personality individual, not their appearance.

Do not make me come over there and recite poetry on your ass.

[Krath]

Did somebody say Mary Sue!?

Player: Krath
Name: Gary Stu
Description: An ordinary guy of ordinary height and weight, with medium length brown hair and eyes.
Bio: An average Joe with no particular aspirations.
Job: Works at the post office.
Year of Origin: 2011
Weapon: His own mediocrity bludgeons anyone with special powers like a sledgehammer.
Abilities: Ordinary Boring Dude Really Ordinary

[NoahTophatz]

Start first posts now
You all wake up in a tall room,
New info gained

So, when are we going to be told exactly what we just signed up for?

As the game goes along also
“I find your lack of faith disturbing.”

Spoiler: NRDL (click to show/hide)

Player:NRDL
Name:J. Jonah Jameson
Description:Middle aged, cranky, white lines in his hair, awesome mustache
Bio:You know who I'm talking about if you know even a little bit about Spider man
Job:Editor in chief of the Daily Bugle
Year of Origin: Around 1963
Weapon:Massive cigar (+1 against non smokers|-1 against smokers} can throw to destract smokers)
Optional:Optional!!!!( you get a free random perk on start, this selection locked)
Abilities:Good managerial skills (+1 to Managing)| extremely argumentative and confrontational ( as a result wins arguments often ) (+2 to covincing -1 to social skills)| Single minded determination (chance of doing the same thing again on different action)|[5] Reporters (+1 to gaining knowledge +1 to blackmail)

[wolfchild]

If you have a problem with my character I have literaly NO investment in it as I said, I just coppied it from a novel I enjoyed, that said if you don't I will do my best to make the character enjoyable

Since you say tall i will assume there is at least enough light to see shapes

After the initial reaction of panic to just awakening in a small room subside, sorrow reminded herself that He was dead and could not use her again. She decided to furthur explore the room, she did not trust her mouth after that panic to talk to the other people she could see

P.S. that took almost as much time editing to deal with all the typos and missed letters, as writing it in the first place did I realy need a new keyboard

[NoahTophatz]

If you have a problem with my character I have literaly NO investment in it as I said, I just coppied it from a novel I enjoyed, that said if you don't I will do my best to make the character enjoyable

Since you say tall i will assume there is at least enough light to see shapes

After the initial reaction of panic to just awakening in a small room subside, sorrow reminded herself that He was dead and could not use her again. She decided to furthur explore the room, she did not trust her mouth after that panic to talk to the other people she could see

P.S. that took almost as much time editing to deal with all the typos and missed letters, as writing it in the first place did I realy need a new keyboard

if you want to change you can and i will keep you in the game just edit your last post to show your new character sheet
also as this is the first roll to dodge as GM please try to put your characters name in your post
Notes on Optional stat:
in every game that i make the character sheet it will include optional
using Optional could get you a perk but when a option is taken it cannot be used again.

[DinosaurusRex_x]

Mew cutely and try to get somebody to pick her up.

[NoahTophatz]

Mew cutely and try to get somebody to pick her up.

/pick up Mittens and put her in a cat cage for failing to mention the characters name. Events are not canon here

[NoahTophatz]

i picked up my cat just then

[DinosaurusRex_x]

Mittens mews a few more times then curls up into a ball to take a nap in the cage - dreaming cat dreams about sitting on warm laps while being pet.

[NoahTophatz]

Mittens mews a few more times then curls up into a ball to take a nap in the cage - dreaming cat dreams about sitting on warm laps while being pet.

can't resist must not pat cat "sigh"
i open the cage and pat the cat after putting her on my lap

[hachnslay]

((instead of replying after looking up a link i have now closed this tab about 3 times, let me try again ... ))

Skizzia makes sure the walls are not made out of metal or contain dangerous amounts of Narrativum. If they don't"Whoever you guys are, stand aside." - She blasts a hole in the wall with a concentrated bolt of Lightning.

PS: currently at work, back in 4 hours

[Schilcote]

Suddenly, I know how Dermonster feels.

LIBERTY PRIME stands up and says,
"DESIGNATION: LIBERTY PRIME. MISSION: PROTECT UNITED STATES MILITARY INTRESTS. WEAPONS SYSTEMS: FUNCTIONAL.
...
OBSTACLE DETECTED. ANALYZING STRUCTURE."

[wolfchild]

Snip

if you want to change you can and i will keep you in the game just edit your last post to show your new character sheet
also as this is the first roll to dodge as GM please try to put your characters name in your post
Notes on Optional stat:
in every game that i make the character sheet it will include optional
using Optional could get you a perk but when a option is taken it cannot be used again.

i dont want to change as making a character still takes effort but i wont mind it if everyone else hates my character just sayin

[NoahTophatz]

based on the rolls i have been getting so far fun happens to you, no changing what you want to do now,  two more peoples moves needed
i need
Player:NRDL
Name:J. Jonah Jameson
and
Player: Draignean
Name: Grutty Peen

[hachnslay]

Snip

if you want to change you can and i will keep you in the game just edit your last post to show your new character sheet
also as this is the first roll to dodge as GM please try to put your characters name in your post
Notes on Optional stat:
in every game that i make the character sheet it will include optional
using Optional could get you a perk but when a option is taken it cannot be used again.

i dont want to change as making a character still takes effort but i wont mind it if everyone else hates my character just sayin

let me give you a quote:
Effort is only effort when it begins to hurt.  ~José Ortega y Gassett

also: you will mind. "just sayin"