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« Reply #45 on: August 13, 2011, 12:39:15 am »

I don't mind. If you enjoy my story then it is vindicated.

Anyway, as promised, a new chapter.
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« Reply #46 on: August 13, 2011, 12:40:05 am »

Chapter 3.2
The Fields of the East

The elf crawled down from the treetop, his long claw like fingers allowed him to shift his tiny frame down with great skill. His elongated skull scarcely cleared the top of his back as he looked down. His stocky, bony frame had very little weight. All of these factors allowed life within the forest to be successful. As he crawled onto the ground he rose to full height, barely the shoulder height of a dwarf. He checked his gear, a small leather tunic made from a gazelle in some foreign land, a wooden shortsword, a small buckler made from elm strapped to his back. He was only a scout; his equipment was designed to be light and easily abandoned.

He moved quickly across the ground, his long arms working together with his legs to propel him much like an ape. As he passed a small banner into the main camp, he paused to salute the guards. There were cultural traits from the dwarfs that they had picked up as they traded. The guards waved him through.

The camp was like most elven camps in that it was based around the small, underground command burrow. From this command burrow paths led to the defensive points facing out toward the plains to the the far east. These were hastily constructed out of empty crates and bins, their design wasn’t for longevity but rather of rapid abandonment. Directly opposite the command bunker was the supply station, small bands of elves were helping themselves to the collected armor and weapons. The bountiful supply was greatly welcomed. Around the flanks of the camp and rear edge were small banners, these were manned by elven guards ensuring the general security and obedience within camp. Overall it was designed to be of little value for an advancing army and easily abandoned by the elves at any given moment.

A chunk of wood composed the door to the commander’s burrow. The elf opened the door, its hinge was merely rope tied to a branch. The small burrow was dank and cramped; they had only just set up camp. A small alcove on the elf’s right contained a crate with another elf frantically writing correspondence to any and all. The small elf pushed deeper, his keen natural night vision eliminating any need for lights. The small burrow opened out into a cavern of sorts. Still small by dwarf standards, the cavern was tall enough to allow the elf to stand and move freely. The centre was occupied by a table with several crates marked with a variety of trade markings lining the room. The commander’s guard were equipping themselves with scraps of wooden armor; small chunks of timber lashed together with bits of rope reed several layers thick. The dwarfs called it chain mail for lack of a better word. The recent rise of society amongst the relatively primitive elves had not yet bestowed metal working or other, more sophisticated techniques. The preference towards bows and arrows had been useful for hunting in the era where tribes would merely war amongst themselves, now that the warlord Khanil had united the tribes, the desperate need for better arms and armor was apparent. They had become shrewd negotiators and traders with an eye for the future. Brokering deals to keep the trees in other territories alive for use in what Khanil called “the great purge”. For now however, they relied on bought metals from the dwarves and scrapping techniques from the goblins.

The commander stood over a large stone, carved on its surface was a to-scale representation of the surrounding geography. It had cost the commander a pittance to have it made by a passing dwarven stone crafter. He pointed to several points of the map whilst chittering to the small war-band leaders nearby. Across his body were hanging bones, his helmet was made from a badger’s skull, a necklace fron the finger bones of dwarves. The shrunken head of a goblin hero sat on a rope reed belt at his waist. His loin cloth was a stretched piece of reptile leather from a forgotten beast. Overall he had managed hundreds of kills. His personal trophy however was an adamantine knife stolen from a trade convoy from a fortress called CryptIron. The knife was different to the standard elven knife. It was a straight blade with a simple handle. Most elven blades featured spines the thickness of herringbone that are designed to break off inside the belly of an enemy as the blade was withdrawn. It was a technique used to hunt boar, after stabbing it once with a knife and scuttling up a tree, all an elf needed to do was track the boar; the spines shifting and moving with the boar, causing massive amounts of internal damage.

The elf stopped and saluted the commander. The commander grunted and waited for the initial report from the scout.
“Humans, from the north. They’re here!”
His voice was low for an elf, the language was poorly suited for one of the commanders size, as a result he slurred words and mangled the pronunciation of others.
“Were the forward scouts correct? Did they bring the abomination?”
”There was a brass beetle, it covered the horizon. You could barely see it through the cloud.”
“And what of the humans strength? How any are they?”
”Thousands, maybe hundreds of thousands. I don’t know, there were long skirmish lines, men clad in long coats with crow faces. Everything else was within the cloud.”
“The crow faces are plague helmets. They stop the men from dying. Them and the metal lungs.”
“What should we do? What would you like me to do?”
“Take your war-band and prepare to draw them into the forest, we would be beaten out on the plains. They will not survive.”
“And the beetle? What about it?”
“It will not be able to advance. We will be safe.”
”The cloud?”
”I have yet to see proof that it is dangerous to us.”
”I shall do as you request.”
“Good, see to it that you aim for the head. I want one of their lungs as a trophy.”
”It shall be done”

The commander waved off the small elf. He lacked a name, any name. The elves had little use for names. Their culture was based around small tribes, everybody knew each other on sight, individual markings were burnt and scarred across the face at birth. The elf’s own markings were that of a short cross. He moved back through the tunnel and back up to the surface. Above ground there was plenty of movement as elves grabbed and shifted crates into covered positions, mounted crossbows adorned these defensive positions. In other areas, the elves quickly dug up lengths of the moss ground and then lashed it to themselves and others. They would move back into the forest and prepare a second line of defense.

Short-cross moved back past the banner, the guard didn’t notice him. He was too busy organizing his war-band to assist in building the defenses. Short-cross scurried back up into the tree and pointed toward the others keeping watch. They followed after him silently. Short-cross moved out of the edge of the forest, the open rolling fields allowed an excellent line for sight for miles. Together the war-band of five moved toward a thick patch of bramble. The long thick tendrils of the scrub would cover the three armed with bows and arrows as they fired upon one of the skirmish lines and drew back into the woods. The idea was to draw a group past, then the two armed with knives would strike at the rear and move past them again, increasing the pace at which they smashed into the first defensive line. From there the lines would collapse in on each other, sacrificing ground for defensive capacity. The elves knew exactly what they were supposed to do. It was something they had been doing all their lives, the creatures that were frequently hunted were much more powerful then they were.

As they approached the line Small-Cross got a closer look at one of the humans. Their tall thin frames were draped in a long matte black coat; the collar was closed and sat just under the jaw line. Each one wore a blood red leather plague mask, all of them looking like ravens. Two wide glass circles were housed in brass casing as the eyepieces allowing them vision. A leather harness sat around their chest, strapped to it was a pair of cylinders. A hose ran from this to a long metal pipe with two handles. A bandolier of iron spikes was draped over each of the men. They marched across the fields slowly, just slightly behind an unarmed banner carrier. The banner carrier used his harness as a mount for the banner, it’s red and black cloth waved just behind his head. In his right hand was a brass baton directing the movements of the skirmishing line. Behind all of them sat a grey-green cloud. It rolled across the field; occasionally small tendrils reached out from this cloud and dispersed.

Small-cross took his position inside the bramble and waited silently with the rest. He was excited to be defending the great forest. Never had the forest fallen, its great length spanning back across a quarter of the continent. Inside the centre sat a small mountain, carved out from the inside by an old dwarven contingent. This was the centre of the new government, it having been taken by the warlord Khanil, now they hoped to defend it as one people against the threat of the humans from the north. Their reliance on steam, pressure and gas was abhorrent to a group that had never managed to smelt iron. The skirmish line grew closer. Small-cross noticed an eerie silence. None of the humans spoke. Only the loud noise of Tal Tanoth the forgotten beast’s footsteps could be heard from miles away.

He briefly considered Tal Tanoth, the humans had captured it and had manipulated the great beast to serve their will. They had erected a mobile command camp upon its back and produced the pressurized cylinders of the gas they so loved. Small-cross wasn’t sure what the weapons were capable of. He was curious to see them in action.

The skirmish line ahead closed its distance, the dark figures moving within range of the arrows of his ambush. He nodded to the elves next to him and they selected a target and opened fire. The arrows sailed out from the brambles and into a man, he took two steps before falling to his knees and collapsing. The line stopped dead without a word, they waited for commands. Small-Cross smiled, he could get a second volley in before the archers had to retreat.

The banner carrier watched the bramble bush for a moment before bringing his baton down in line. The men around him raised their weapons and opened fire. With a crack each fired in unison at the bush, iron spikes drove their way through, tearing plant life and forcing a full retreat. The elves scrambled back, ignoring their plan. Small-cross scampered across the ground, his war-band inline beside him. Another crack and a whoosh of air as the iron spikes sailed over them, one collided with the elf running next to Small-cross, the power of the shot sending his small body tumbling. Small-cross ignored him. As he pounded his way back toward the forest he couldn’t think. Terror had paralyzed his mind, taking control.

Another volley sailed past them, this one was more accurate than the last. Striking down a pair of the elves and tearing off the thin leg of a third. Screams of pain sailed across the killing field as the skirmish line moved forward again, the gas from Tal Tanoth trailing from their weapons. The small cloud drifted with the men as they moved closer to the edge of the forest. Small-cross looked back in time to see them pass the brambles, the cloud hitting his fallen comrade. The one legged elf gasped for breath, his flesh necrotizing and melting off the bone. The small feeble creature wretched and vomited large chunks of his lungs before expiring.

Small-cross passed through the edges of the forest. Iron spikes followed him, crashing and tearing chunks of wood from the trees around him. His mind had handed control over to terror, in this terror he wanted to hide. He scrambled past the encampment, elves prepared themselves for combat. Some had buried themselves just below the surface. Others manned the crossbows not mounted to solid cover, more still sat in the trees with bows and arrows.

The human wave of skirmishers moved forward. Their speed was constant, reloading as they advanced forward. Volley after volley crashed through the trees in front. As they pushed closer and closer into the forest they risked running into the encampment. The elves prepared themselves as Small-cross flittered past. The men crashed through into the range of the mounted crossbows. Several of them fell but more took their places. In the shadows of the forest these men loomed great, their numbers were uncountable in the heat of battle. Very quickly order was lost amongst the elves as the men raised their weapons and fired, demolishing the defensive positions and triggering the retreat of the others. They moved with fear as the cloud caused by the fired shots drifted down into the command burrow. The commander hurled himself through the light wood of the door, the flesh on his long skull had begun to melt. In a moment he lept to strike down one of the men but was cut down with another volley.

The men moved forth over the meager defenses. Only a small number had fallen to the elven bolts and arrows. Those elves armed with melee weapons couldn’t close in without falling prey to the gas. Each man was un-emotional and perfectly composed with the rest of the skirmish line, the psychological effect of this dark wall of death was extreme amongst the fleeing elves. Those that were buried died were they lay, small pools of blood and chunks of frothed forth from the mossy patches on the ground, some tried to drag themselves away to no avail.

The elves fell into disarray as they retreated. Small-cross had hidden himself away in a dead hollow log, unaware that the rolling gas from each fired shot was approached. The men marched forward with no concern for their fallen. They seemed almost unaware of the growing death toll that their mere presence was creating. Their fired shots were striking down and pinning the elves to trees and tearing the thin bony limbs off their bodies.

The cloud moved inexorably closer. The stench filled the small whimpering elf’s nostrils before he felt his flesh begin to burn. He heaved and vomited, his last breath upon this earth was that of pain. Marching soldiers advanced forward, firing blindly into the scrub. In the distance the great beetle Tal Tanoth moved indefatigably closer to the dwarven mountainhome. The human army never flinched, they never paused. Death and destruction is what they planned to bring. The expansion of the human empire into the lands of the lesser species had begun.
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« Reply #47 on: August 13, 2011, 10:31:35 am »

HORRAY! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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« Reply #48 on: August 13, 2011, 01:01:23 pm »

War, intrigue, decadent governments, and fantasy all mixed in. Mmmm...This is like literary cake with all the layers and frostings!
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« Reply #49 on: August 13, 2011, 01:17:08 pm »

I like cake. :)
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« Reply #50 on: September 02, 2011, 07:01:16 pm »

What a shame. This was a great story while it lasted.
R.I.P. CryptIron
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« Reply #51 on: September 05, 2011, 09:14:57 am »

What a shame. This was a great story while it lasted.
R.I.P. CryptIron

I'll have you know that I'm still working on this!
Sorry about the remarkably, glacial slow updates. Seriously. I've had some family sick, then a bunch of lectures, job searching, house finding, etc etc. On top of that, new kittens, one is even called Solon!

I think it's safer to say that I'll be updating this as I get to it. Sorry guys.

Also, feel free to add or do whatever you want with it.
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« Reply #52 on: September 05, 2011, 10:41:48 am »

Chapter 5
The reports of my death were greatly exaggerated


Solon continued his slow pace toward the gates, his lambskin shoes pressing familiar footprints into the mud. A thought occurred to him; what happened to all of the adamantine? Surely Bal in his madness wouldn’t have abandoned the mines? Would he?

Solon kept moving toward parts unknown. He looked around at the shacks, slatted timber with holes. There was very little in the way of furniture, a couple of chairs and a few mats for beds. It was a distinct change from the surface, which in turn was a far cry from the mountainhome. Solon sighed and ruminated on how far he had come. He wished desperately to return to his queen, return to her service. Sadly it was unlikely at this point.

In the distance, Halberd sat talking to a number of bloated dwarfs in rags. A couple of the were carrying picks. Solon began to jog over to them. They watched him bound over and slow, breathlessly he interrogated the first dwarf.
”You’re a miner, yes?”
“…yes?”
“What do you mine?”
“Iron, marble, rock. Why?”
”Do you mine adamantine?”
The dwarf looked at Halberd through puffy and bloated eyes. Halberd nodded and motioned for him to keep going.
“Yeah, the blue stuff. We get it from a separate shaft, deeper shaft.”
“Can you show me?”
“I ‘spose”
“Excellent!”

Solon trailed the dwarf; the pair weaved in and out of the shacks, avoiding the guards. The mud grew damper and thicker, small piles of rock began appearing here and there. Soon they were almost on top of the working pit. A small rope boundary was tied off, a vast pit sat in front of them, much like the one cut from the surface to the cavern. Un-mined gems glinted in the lights of hundreds of torches, small side tunnels sat here and there leading to sounding tunnels, a working platform linked them together. A central timber tower rose up from the darkness. Small work groups darted in and out, one almost falling off the platform.

“Do you think you could lead me down?”
The miner looked around sheepishly, Solon knew he would be risking life and limb going down there, guards were patrolling the edges and the platforms to make sure that only those on mining duty got in. Solon waited for a reaction before pulling out the plump helmet from his cast. He held it in front of the miner for a few moments before asking again.
”So? What do you say?”
”Hmmm, I guess. You’ll have to stay close, I’ll deny helping you if you’re caught.
”Perfectly fine.”

Solons mind ticked and whirred with ideas on what he should be doing. He had decided to collect a chunk of adamantine ore and take it to the queen with a runner requesting aide. The queen would be able to devote her attention to sending some of the guard and then they’ll take over. It wasn’t what Solon wanted, but without the help of somebody like the surgeon, it was the best he could rig up.

The miner proceeded forward carefully, they moved under the rope and onto the platforms, they groaned with the weight of the two of them. Solon reached for a handrail and grasped at air. There was nothing. He fell forward, the miner grabbing him quickly and pulling him back in. They moved wordlessly down the path until they reached a tunnel. The miner motioned him to go inside, Solon nodded and led the way. The pair walked for a bit through the meandering path, wind howled up through the main shaft. They kept moving until they reached the face of the tunnel. Solon turned round to see the miner heading back, clutching the plump helmet. The miner kicked a beam out from the wall and allowed a minor cave in. Solon swore and threw up his arms as a cloud of dust dropped down. He held against a number of rocks and finally a beam knocked him down, breaking one of his casts.

Solon lay on the ground, surprised and angry by the miner’s betrayal. He looked around, a torch on the wall had gone out in the cave in but light seeped through a small hole toward the top of the rubble. Solon considered how much air he had. Assuming the hole wasn’t adequate to bring in enough oxygen, he would only have about an hour before his lungs gave out. He worked quickly, shifting the various rocks. Even with two broken, but healing arms and immense pain he found the work easy, the stone he was shifting was light and fibrous. Small splinters stuck into the leather like hide that covered his hands. He held one chunk up to the small light and examined it, light blue. Bal wasn’t mining the tunnel for the adamantine. If he had, he wouldn’t have simply ignored these sounding tunnels, no, Bal was after something else.

Solon pocketed a couple of chunks and kept digging. He had soon made enough of a hole to crawl through. On the other side he breathed a sigh of relief, he lay back against the side of the tunnel. His arms hurt less and less as time passed. The skeletal structure of the dwarf was hinged and designed to take quite a large amount of impact. Those hinged sections rebuilt themselves quickly and efficiently. Solon suspected that he had damaged a couple of these hinges in the fall. What would take a month for a human to heal took only days or hours for a dwarf. It was very similar to a goblin.

Solon picked himself up and brushed himself off. He now considered what he should do next. He could go after the traitor, he could find somebody willing to go to the surface or he could explore the lower areas and figure out what Bal was up to. He concluded on the first option. If he allowed the traitor to get away, the traitor could get word to Bal that Solon was snooping in places where he wasn’t supposed to.

Solon nodded to himself and made his way back up the shaft, avoiding a guard a one point by jumping into a sounding tunnel. As he reached the top, he saw the miner in the shadows, attempting to avoid a guard. Solon moved quickly after him but was spotted by the bloated dwarf. The traitor made a quick maneuver through a shack and down an alley. Solon made progress quickly behind him. Solon chased him through the small fortress but the cast on his arm slowed him right down. He paused to claw at it and break it upon a window sill. He proceeded to chase after the traitor again. This time catching up to him briefly. He had moved toward Halberd. Halberd looked up to see the two and decided to side with Solon, pouncing on the traitor and pushing him to the ground. He looked up to see Solon once again puffed and out of breath. The two had ended up on a street perpendicular to the main street. Halberd watched Solon and began to talk, his elbow dug into the traitors back.
“So? Why do you wan’ ‘im dead?”
“The bastard tried to kill me, he kicked out a support and caused a cave-in.”
Halberd growled and pulled out a copper dagger. He pulled the traitors hair and pushed the knife up to his throat. He whispered into his ear.
”Give me a good reason not to kill you here.”
The traitor whimpered and squirmed, Halberd smashed his face into the ground and pulled it back up. The traitor whined a response.
”Because I wanted a reward for stopping his thieving. He gave me a plump helmet. I’ll split the reward with you 50/50 if you stop him!”
Halberd looked up at Solon, the offer was tempting. He could weasel quite a bit out of the situation. Both halves if he killed the both of them. Solon quickly took control of the situation by kicking Halberd’s hand. The knife pressed forward into the Traitor’s throat, blood poured onto the ground a the small miner gasped for breath. Halberd rose and watched Solon.
”There be no need to struggle, I coul’ use the reward and I will gut you if you fight back.”
Solon remained calm. His cool intellect winning out over Halberd’s bloodlust.
”I can offer you so much more than Bal can, if you help me, I can get you out of this hellhole.”
Halberd lowered his knife and considered the proposition.
”How?”
“We get you up through that shaft. Then you see the queen, deliver her a message and a couple of chunks of adamantine as proof that were worth the effort. Then your done. Your free and at the mountainhome.”
”How do we get past the fact that they’ll notice I’m gone?”
”Our good friend down here will volunteer as your corpse.”
Solon kicked the miner, his hands were wrapped around his own throat as he gurgled and spluttered blood and froth.
”Not bad. But we will need to move him now, and do it before his shift.”
“Good plan.”
“Mmmm, help me roll him under the shack ‘ere.”
The two pushed the spluttering traitor under a raised portion of the shack. The communal bedrooms of the shacks were usually raised to avoid the mud, perfect place to hide things. Halberd stabbed the traitor a few more times to stop him from making any noise.

“Pleasure to be working with you.”
Halberd smiled at this remark and considered his next move carefully.
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« Reply #53 on: September 07, 2011, 06:26:18 pm »

I love it! Sorry for assuming the thread had died!
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« Reply #54 on: September 07, 2011, 09:56:10 pm »

Eh, don't blame you. I would've thought it was dead too :P
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« Reply #55 on: December 09, 2011, 08:40:28 pm »

Is it dead now?
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« Reply #56 on: December 17, 2011, 01:46:02 am »

Nope, still working on it. :P Promise, I love the way the story is shaping and the ideas I have and I'd hate to just kill it.
I've just picked up a number of post graduate studies and I'm helping a guy with his doctoral program (A psychological study of perceived hero worship and the idea of a necessary hierarchy), I'll do more during the Christmas holidays.
It may be best to assume that the posting schedule is whenever I get to it until I get everything ticking away nicely.
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« Reply #57 on: December 17, 2011, 06:01:17 am »

great to know, once again, it's not dead!
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« Reply #58 on: December 17, 2011, 08:46:06 am »

As comically slow at updating as it may be.
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« Reply #59 on: December 29, 2011, 10:35:08 am »

Chapter 6

The corpulent form of the demon sat on top of a raised platform in the centre of the obsidian room. His long slug like form sat twisting a small set of interlocking gears in his flabby arms. The green flesh and tan underbelly contrasted heavily against the black spheres that sat in the eye sockets upon its face. His body groaned as it shifted his weight from one of the massive legs that extended up his side to the other. The mass of body hanging between the legs slid across the ground throughout the process. His movements were precise and calculated; despite this his dexterity was high, shifting the gears with precision and speed. He brought the device up to his face, his long jowls draped over his chest and the fat lipless mouth shifted without aim. Long interlocking teeth extended above and below the mouth. He was one of the few demons on the surface.

The doors to the room opened. A tall goblin clad in a tight fitting iron breastplate with a set of light plate iron greaves and a red sash covered in gold piping. He was an auxiliary, a member of the elite corps assigned to deal with the administration, logistics and oversight of the goblin forces. They were frequently called upon to deal with everything from law to collecting troops and leading the defense of a valuable location. A set of tattoos on his forehead demonstrated his rank, achievements, name, identifying number and background. An exact replica was found gilded in gold upon the helmet he carried under his right arm. In his left hand he carried a satchel containing charcoal ink and vellum, the tools of his trade.

He walked up to the demon without hesitation and waited for the creature to rise. The demon toyed with the device a little longer before setting it aside and rose to full height, almost triple that of the goblin. In no way was the goblin auxiliary small, he was the size of a human. The major differences were that of scale. The goblin’s arms and legs were longer in comparison to its body. Alongside this was the matter of castes. The goblins were separated into three major castes upon birth. Those whose proportions gave the greatest advantage to the swinging of an axe or the wielding of a sword were born into the warrior caste. Those whose proportions were more inline to those of humans were born into the supportive caste, the backbone to the entire goblin civilization. Finally, those goblins who suffered defects and obvious mental illness were referred to as the unclean. The castes were not binding; there had been many kings from the unclean caste and many great administrators from the warrior caste. But they were set to give the goblin at hand the greatest chance to do well in order to compete with the remarkably short goblin lifespan of only a couple of decades.

The goblin spoke in a short and complicated language. It sounded guttural and abrupt but elegant in its efficiency.
”I have your monthly report, would you care to read it?”
The demon eyed him cautiously. He spoke in two voices that swerved and altered pitch frequently but never coming to one note unless he was giving a direct instruction. The great creature’s voice was low but smooth. He frequently shifted weight from one great haunch to another, his arms resting at his sides.
”You are new. Recently assigned. I expect you will have questions. You will summerise, your written language annoys me.”
The Auxiliary nodded and withdrew an elegant sheet of velum from the satchel, he unfurled it in a swift and practiced motion and read. The written language of the goblins encompassed diagram, word and mathematics as one. Long lines connected paragraphs and relevant statements were written in red. It was constructed with the intention to be swift to read. An entire history of the goblin race took only a few small books. A hundred years of history slathered in ink upon a single page. Most goblins were educated and knew a lot about the world around them.
”Our assault upon CryptIron drove the dwarves underground. We have expended almost twelve hundred of the unclean legions in the effort. The number was swiftly made up for by the new recruits.”
”Your species does have a propensity for damaged, the sick and mentally ill.”
”Why didn’t we expend the warrior caste? We would have lost fewer of their caste and we might have routed them entirely. It seems a waste.”
”No, what is a waste is the number of dwarves killed.”
”Were you expecting prisoners?”
”I had planned to drive them underground sooner with greater number so they may dig faster.”
”You are aware that they have struck adamantine?”
”Recently, yes, but it is irrelevant. They seek not to carve it out.”
”Then what are they doing?”
”They are digging to my brethren.”
”Why?”
”Because the dwarven race is peculiar. There is a certain type of dwarf that, when introduced to an idea, latches onto it like a leeks and uses it to sustain his madness. My corrupting influence comes not in dreams or vision but in simple machination. This combined with the dwarves propensity for construction allows creates many loopholes to be abused. A queen seeks to build an addiction. A general seeks to build an empire. A mayor seeks to build a great gate. A surgeon seeks to build his knowledge. They are fundamentally flawed and will be swept aside, for they are Armok’s own damned creatures. Maggots within the rotting fruits of his labors. Do you know why I had this tower constructed?” 
“No, why?”
”Because Armok is dim. He has all of two ways of dealing with problems. Direct intervention or the manipulation of his creations. Do you recall the bronze colossus we captured last week?”
”I just read it then. How did you know about it?”
The demon sighed. The world around it was trite and predictable. It yearned for the day its brethren were released.
”Because it is the only thing capable of toppling this tower but now it is trapped behind the great iron gates I had built, protected by the outpost that has existed for hundreds of years. Yet it is only now that Armok awakens the creature, there is something stirring to challenge both us and the dwarves. The elves are too weak, which means the humans are moving. They are moving with great strength and speed in order to challenge us for his amusement. He toys with the world as if it is his plaything, but he is clumsy and it will break and burn and be naught but ash and obsidian.”
”How will we survive on ash?”
”You will be dead, expended in our efforts.”
The goblin auxiliary looked shocked. His hand reached for his blade.
”I talk eons into the future. You will be sustained long after the other races have died, but in turn you will perish. You can stay you blade, I do not blame you for your pathetic excuse for a lifespan or any scope beyond your tiny lives, that was Armok’s doing; to curse you with death and oblivion. You would have perished long ago if it were not for my guidance.”
The beast shifted it’s weight before walking toward the door. It continued to speak as it made it’s way slowly.
“Continue the summary, what of the humans?”
”The humans continue to arch forward through the forests. The appear to be cutting a great swath through the trees, you can see the smoke from the top of the tower as the burn the logs.”
”My frame and form does not permit me sight beyond that which is necessary.”
”My apologies.”
”Continue.”
”There was a small group seen entering CryptIron. We sent in an investigative team and found only a few corpses.”
”More workers. This is of no concern.”

The demon and the auxiliary moved at a slow pace down the corridor. The large obsidian tower stood in the centre of a great pit, at the bottom of which sat magma forges and large marble homes and buildings, this was the pinnacle of goblin civilization. Arguably the strongest civilization on the face of the planet. The demon continued walking, his weight continuing to shift between the two great and powerful legs. Large, wide feet continued to move forward. The goblin had wondered how the creature supported it’s own weight. There appeared to be no bones within its frame and no rigid structure, this was thoroughly demonstrated as the legs bent backward as he lifted the next leg upward. The goblin watched in silence at this great bulk. The greatest mind on the planet and the most grotesque creature to carry it. This beast did not sleep nor did it eat. It existed as a single entity to manipulate and control the events of the world. The demon stopped walked and asked without moving it’s head.
“I expect you have questions?”
The goblin stammered before getting its thoughts into order.
”Yes, you mentioned direct intervention?”
”Yes, direct intervention. Long have my kind seen fit to walk the earth. We emerge through the cracks of time and the earth itself and frequently seek to establish ourselves in order to bring forth the rest of our brethren. A single lightning bolt is generally able to kill us off. This tower, however, protects us from any sort of lightning and is strong enough to avoid any meteor that Armok sees fit to throw at us. He dares not throw anything to large, the cloud of earth and the heat alone would do much of our work for us. Regardless, I had this tower built before I began plotting and it has suited me.”
”But why obsidian?”
”Because the steel rods that mitigate the electrical output are easily mounted into the great blocks that are formed in the magma forges. Simple and efficient.”

The auxiliary considered this before nodding, he had wondered about the obsidian tower for a long time and it had only just made sense.
”So what about your plan? How is it going to play out?”
”It already has. We are nearing the end of almost two centuries of development. A mere effort by myself rose the goblin in this region up, we provided competition for the dwarves who in turn suppressed the flawed elves. The humans developed with no competition from the elves and now all three species seek to rule. The humans are moving with their beast, an empire building faction has seized control of the dwarven moutainhome and has seen fit to conquer the lands and we will march upon a single location.”
”Where is that?”
”That would be CryptIron. The suppressed city.”
”Why? Certainly we have already won?”
”Correct, but do you notice that there has been no effort to crawl back out of the hole they dug?”
”Yes, and?”
“And, the simple fact is, they are digging a shaft I told them to. It is true that CryptIron was almost lost when a forgotten beast was sent out from it’s depths to stop me. Luckily it failed. Armok is clumsy in his attempts.”
“So if digging out the gateway to your brethren is so important, why are you trying to drag everybody halfway across the planet?”
”No, your poor intellect fails to grasp the obvious. I am trying to draw them to CryptIron. There I can wipe out a considerable number of the armies of the world and provide a locale for my brethren to work from.”
”I see.”

The demon kept walking, swaying from side to side. His eyes focused into the distance. The auxiliary plodded behind him. The pair continued in silence, past a number of guards and out onto a covered balcony. The balcony looked out over a number of mountains. The demon pointed to a dark spot in the distance.
”That is the cave of the colossus. I want you to send the simple message that the door is to be reinforced. I also plan to make a road from here to the outpost nearby. Correspond with the people in charge of the overarching logistics and get the details of the paths to the outpost. They’ll need the supplies.”
The goblin nodded and produced a sheet of velum, scribbling down the details of what needed to be done.

He rushed off at full pace toward one of the larger buildings. The demon looked out over his city and mused on the fragility of life before turning and returning to his device.

The Old Guard scout bounded over the cold foothills of the frozen mountain peak. His mind was blinded by a single image of a goblin totem. He had to build it, no matter the circumstances. It was gnawing at him, day in and day out. He needed this, as he had for the past five days. There hadn’t been a single goblin seen in the mountain for almost two months, yet the dwarf remained determined. As he crested over the next foothill, the sight of the basin below showed movement. A single goblin messenger floundered through the snow. The dwarf screamed in a combination of pleasure and contempt before raising his crossbow, lining up the goblin in the rough iron sights and letting fly with a bolt. The goblin stopped in his tracks and looked up at this maddened dwarf. The dwarf charged forward, falling and tumbling down the hill, the goblin ran, his long legs giving him greater speed than the dwarf. The small creature loaded another bolt and fired, the mammoth bone bolt crashed smashed apart the knee of the goblin. The look of terror on the face of the goblin was smashed apart by the dwarfs crossbow. Blow after blow rendered the goblin dead and smashed into little bloody chunks. The dwarf grabbed his copper knife and carved the head off the dead beast before tying it to his short sword and drving it into the ground. His lust satiated he collapsed and looked through the goblins things lazily. A small pouch of documents revealed the location of a colossus. The dwarf realized the value of such a thing and charged off toward camp. The dwarfs were going to have control of a beast of bronze.
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