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smasher89

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Dawn of a legend
« on: July 05, 2011, 07:59:38 pm »
well im new in this forum i play dwraf fortress from 6 months ago and i really like the game whatever, i searched a section to post a new comic that im making based on the adventures (and misadventures) of a adventurer that im playing, i will be updating the comic every week, tought i cant guarante that i will do it always as i have others biz...


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Name: Dawn of a adventurer
chapters: not summary as of yet
state: on going
others notes: updates almost every week/irregulary may contain content not suitable for no +18 people
Violence: D
Vocabulary B
Sex or nudity: A

tought i will censorship most of the REALLY gory situations or make them less gory (i really make blood run very much in adevnturer mode)

Chapter 1: prologue:

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Credits coming soon (i used various tilesets and utilities while playing)
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Corneria

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Re: Dawn of a legend
« Reply #1 on: July 05, 2011, 10:34:28 pm »
I'm going to pose a question in the politest way possible...
Is English your first language?
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Kilroy the Grand

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Re: Dawn of a legend
« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2011, 11:36:04 pm »
Work on the hands, the proportions of the limbs, and make your lines clearer.


Just some helpful criticism.
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*pew* *blam* "Aughgghggurglegurgle..." *slither* *slither* *pit* *pat* *tap* *click-click* *BOOM* "Aiiieeegurgle gurgle..."
X-com meets Dwarf Fortress

Matheld

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Re: Dawn of a legend
« Reply #3 on: July 05, 2011, 11:38:52 pm »
...the severed part sails off in an arc...

...you give into pain...

 >:( THE END >:(
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NRDL

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Re: Dawn of a legend
« Reply #4 on: July 06, 2011, 05:33:51 am »
I like it, the drawings and words are a bit too faint for me to read easily, but other than that, good.  Wonder how the adventurer will develop...


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Re: Dawn of a legend
« Reply #5 on: July 06, 2011, 10:06:39 am »
Quote from: Corneria on July 05, 2011, 10:34:28 pm
I'm going to pose a question in the politest way possible...
Is English your first language?

No, in fact, its spañish, but i will do more corrections to my grammar next time.

Quote from: Kilroy the Grand on July 05, 2011, 11:36:04 pm
Work on the hands, the proportions of the limbs, and make your lines clearer.


Just some helpful criticism.

I will since this was a really quick drawn i will also colour them (in fact i didnt process it much i just darkened it and i didnt clean it after the drawn) but thanks for the advice!

Quote from: NRDL on July 06, 2011, 05:33:51 am
I like it, the drawings and words are a bit too faint for me to read easily, but other than that, good.  Wonder how the adventurer will develop...




ok next chapter will also have a bit bigger resolution and more postprocessing to make it more clean, and about how it will develop, its something really random as the history isnt even at a fixed course (i mean things will develop more spontanely)
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