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Author Topic: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)  (Read 98436 times)

Hugo_The_Dwarf

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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #915 on: November 08, 2011, 06:44:25 pm »

The end appeared as a light, shining through the mist and burning it away. The shadow stopped as the light approached, as if it was being held back. The last thing I saw was the dull gleam of metal. We burst out into the sunshine in an explosion of sand. The sudden stop threw us all out of the wagon and into a sand dune. Sand. God dammit.

Question how many dwarves are left on the wagon.

Diary Of HOG:First encounter

Sand... Goblins... Sand Goblins...
I'm sick of sand and goblins
All I want some good rock under me and...
Screams in terror as a Wagon Comes out of no where.
After moments of shock I realize its just some dwarves and there plan old wagon.
But where did they come from?
Might as well say hi and make friends which is better than being alone out here.
Where ever here is...
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Did i improve?  :D

Can you use this or should i just delete it?

There is an improvent and i don't mind it, still could be improvements but it's still good. Hopefully I can get the sidestory of our mystery dwarves.
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #916 on: November 08, 2011, 06:53:04 pm »

Mine? Or HOG?
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #917 on: November 08, 2011, 07:23:22 pm »

HOG, I like the transition (yours, it was thrilling)
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #918 on: November 08, 2011, 07:25:33 pm »

I thank you for your kind praise.
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #919 on: November 08, 2011, 11:06:01 pm »

A short update, this gives some hints on who the mystery dwarf and metal dwarf are (more of the metal dwarf) well enjoy:

Dwarven Encampment: Barren Wasteland

   Climbing hill after hill thankful for the loss of mortality, I could feel that the dwarves were close. Reaching the top of this hill the dwarves could be seen below, huddled under the wagon to escape the menacing sun. Just then a portal began to materialize not far from the dwarves, within I could see him, the dwarf of black metal. The portal was unstable, as the dark metal dwarf was fading in and out of visibility, could only mean Lustrum was near by was was disrupting the destination. All the dwarves grabbed what they could and drove the wagon to the portal, getting up I sprinted towards the portal the longer human legs giving me more speed. Willing myself to be unseen and passing the dwarves I dived into to portal ahead of them and tackled the Metal Dwarf.

Frozen Cavern Fortress: Portal

   Walking into the portal towards the wagon tracks, things were easy as the dwarves were only around the corner. But inside the portal distance seemed to stretch and shrink, odd the dwarves packed up and are now heading towards me. Seems like I will be reunited with my possession once again, whatever it is, why can’t I remember what it is? Reaching out to the oncoming dwarves, until a bodyless aura sped past them and rammed into me. Then the aura grew a human body, then it formed into a dwarf. Struggling with this new adversary was bothersome, head butting the dwarf and willing my form through time and space towards the escaping dwarves. I almost got to them before they went through the other side if the human-dwarf didn’t tackle me into an nearby wormhole.

Time and Space: Unknown

   Wrestling with this mechanical dwarf was difficult, he never tired or felt pain making it impossible to phase him. Even with my lack of mortality I’m still a fleshy being, but even then I can still delay this dwarf until a way to destroy him can be found. He got past my defences and landed a solid blow to my chest, it felt like a elephant just stepped on me. I was then thrown into another wormhole which quickly ended in a flash of light, and then sand...

   “RISE” pulling myself from the dune and shaking the sand from my beard, it felt great to be a dwarf again even tho I was only human for a very brief time “Astis you never said he was a mad clock makers legendary piece.”
“I HAD NOT KNOWN, HIS SOUL WAS TAKEN BEFORE I COULD BRING HIM BACK.”
“What do you mean his soul was taken? I thought he was a demon?”
“NOT A DEMON, HE WAS LIKE YOU AN AVATAR. BUT OSTAR AND HER MINION HAD TAKEN HIM WHEN HE WAS DEFEATED”
“So your saying... He’s not evil?”
“HE IS NOT EVIL AND IS NOT GOOD, HE IS CONFUSED AND NO LONGER REMEMBERS WHO HE IS.”
“Is there anyway we can bring him back?”
“THERE IS A WAY, BUT IT IS RISKY”
“What do I need to do...”
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #920 on: November 08, 2011, 11:14:35 pm »

Nice    :D
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #921 on: November 08, 2011, 11:25:06 pm »

A short update, this gives some hints on who the mystery dwarf and metal dwarf are (more of the metal dwarf) well enjoy:

Dwarven Encampment: Barren Wasteland

   Climbing hill after hill thankful for the loss of mortality, I could feel that the dwarves were close. Reaching the top of this hill the dwarves could be seen below, huddled under the wagon to escape the menacing sun. Just then a portal began to materialize not far from the dwarves, within I could see him, the dwarf of black metal. The portal was unstable, as the dark metal dwarf was fading in and out of visibility, could only mean Lustrum was near by was was disrupting the destination. All the dwarves grabbed what they could and drove the wagon to the portal, getting up I sprinted towards the portal the longer human legs giving me more speed. Willing myself to be unseen and passing the dwarves I dived into to portal ahead of them and tackled the Metal Dwarf.

Frozen Cavern Fortress: Portal

   Walking into the portal towards the wagon tracks, things were easy as the dwarves were only around the corner. But inside the portal distance seemed to stretch and shrink, odd the dwarves packed up and are now heading towards me. Seems like I will be reunited with my possession once again, whatever it is, why can’t I remember what it is? Reaching out to the oncoming dwarves, until a bodyless aura sped past them and rammed into me. Then the aura grew a human body, then it formed into a dwarf. Struggling with this new adversary was bothersome, head butting the dwarf and willing my form through time and space towards the escaping dwarves. I almost got to them before they went through the other side if the human-dwarf didn’t tackle me into an nearby wormhole.

Time and Space: Unknown

   Wrestling with this mechanical dwarf was difficult, he never tired or felt pain making it impossible to phase him. Even with my lack of mortality I’m still a fleshy being, but even then I can still delay this dwarf until a way to destroy him can be found. He got past my defences and landed a solid blow to my chest, it felt like a elephant just stepped on me. I was then thrown into another wormhole which quickly ended in a flash of light, and then sand...

   “RISE” pulling myself from the dune and shaking the sand from my beard, it felt great to be a dwarf again even tho I was only human for a very brief time “Astis you never said he was a mad clock makers legendary piece.”
“I HAD NOT KNOWN, HIS SOUL WAS TAKEN BEFORE I COULD BRING HIM BACK.”
“What do you mean his soul was taken? I thought he was a demon?”
“NOT A DEMON, HE WAS LIKE YOU AN AVATAR. BUT OSTAR AND HER MINION HAD TAKEN HIM WHEN HE WAS DEFEATED”
“So your saying... He’s not evil?”
“HE IS NOT EVIL AND IS NOT GOOD, HE IS CONFUSED AND NO LONGER REMEMBERS WHO HE IS.”
“Is there anyway we can bring him back?”
“THERE IS A WAY, BUT IT IS RISKY”
“What do I need to do...”
Top-notch quality as always pal!
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #922 on: November 08, 2011, 11:40:16 pm »

I had to reformat the whole idea of the side story when Kisame choose to use the Metal Dwarf's Portal, I'm still milling about on how I'm going to reveal everyone's identity tho
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #923 on: November 09, 2011, 12:33:03 am »

Sorry if I messed with your carefully spun web of plot with my transition.
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #924 on: November 09, 2011, 12:39:24 am »

Sorry if I messed with your carefully spun web of plot with my transition.

HAHA its ok, I'm reasourceful, that is why I waited for your POST MUHAHAHAHA
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #925 on: November 09, 2011, 12:58:59 am »

Hoot. That is all.
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #926 on: November 09, 2011, 01:15:56 am »

Hoot. That is all.
not this again...Simon Cowell is not the king of beavers...
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #927 on: November 09, 2011, 10:32:44 am »

Hoot. That is all.
not this again...Simon Cowell is not the king of beavers...
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #928 on: November 09, 2011, 03:32:14 pm »

AWESOME!!!  :D

Oh, and The Master, while reading over the front page I happened to notice that the rule list was a bit wrong. The numbers (#) are supposed to be on the left, not right. (unless you did that on purpose?)
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Re: A "You son of an elf!" production: Ashes to Ashes (Succession fortress)
« Reply #929 on: November 09, 2011, 03:56:26 pm »

AWESOME!!!  :D

Oh, and The Master, while reading over the front page I happened to notice that the rule list was a bit wrong. The numbers (#) are supposed to be on the left, not right. (unless you did that on purpose?)

Quote from: the rules list
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