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Author Topic: Roll to Crime Signups [2/5]  (Read 2703 times)

jakeread1

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Roll to Crime Signups [2/5]
« on: June 29, 2011, 02:01:23 am »

That's right im going to GM another game.

Combat
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« Last Edit: July 03, 2011, 05:00:11 am by jakeread1 »
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2011, 01:40:27 am »

AW come on  this one will be AWESOME. And its summer so i obviously cant abandon this :3
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2011, 02:35:51 am »

 Many probably don't join this, because it looks too simplistic or not thought out enough. Write more content, get an actual story, etc. Also, people love character customization. At least let them choose some skills or classes or something.
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2011, 03:29:46 am »

It shall be done for king and country! Be back in 8 hours!
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2011, 01:58:56 pm »

Eh, I need a RTD.

Name: Thomas Macan
Age: 18
Bio: Suburban kid who didn't get enough money and ended up becoming homeless. He also happens to be a serial killer.

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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #5 on: July 02, 2011, 03:54:31 pm »

Name: CubOS
Age: 6 years since its creation
Bio: Broken prototype AI created by Enclosure Laboratories to test the power of an unrestrained AI. It went awfully wrong (all dead). She was later found by a hobo and CubOS let him take her to the outside in exchange for the password of the refrigerator of the facility (it was empty). She is a fist sized box with an USB port in her back (just pick a random side as a cube hasnt got a real back) and her default body is a bigger box (1 meter side) with a long duration battery and a four of pneumatic arms which she can use to walk around. She can attach herself to any USB port and get power from them to work so she can be portable. (the main body is heavy, so she is in the cargo bay waiting instead of waiting on a seat).
Skills: Firearms (small retractable gun-turret in main body), Cooking (especially pie) and free running (more like free ramming, only melee attack :P)
Class: Manager (most fitting)
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [2/5]
« Reply #6 on: July 02, 2011, 09:43:15 pm »

Interesting character Night I can tell this'll be good  :D
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2011, 09:48:00 pm »

No offence but I see nothing special in this RTD. It needs you know something special in it, i've seen a countless number of RTD's like this die off. You don't fully explain the mechanics of the game, for example with Alchohol you say "It makes your aim bad but makes you happier.". What bonuses do you get for drinking alchohol? What negatives come with alchohol? To what extent does it make my aim bad? It makes you happier, does this mean theres a morale system? You don't fully explain what your going to be doing, which suggests that your just going to be making it up as you go along.
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #8 on: July 03, 2011, 01:52:10 am »

No offence but I see nothing special in this RTD. It needs you know something special in it, i've seen a countless number of RTD's like this die off. You don't fully explain the mechanics of the game, for example with Alchohol you say "It makes your aim bad but makes you happier.". What bonuses do you get for drinking alchohol? What negatives come with alchohol? To what extent does it make my aim bad? It makes you happier, does this mean theres a morale system? You don't fully explain what your going to be doing, which suggests that your just going to be making it up as you go along.

I don't usually get into detail with that stuff but once it starts you'll see in your status sheet
Aim%:
Morale:
etc
Basically zero morale means suicide
Aim% modifies the dice 80 percent = 5-1 2-1 etc
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #9 on: July 03, 2011, 02:54:49 am »

Oh, come on, Bdthemag, it is not that bad, it has enough freedom to do some crazy PCs like mine and have fun and is focused enough to, well... have a focus? xD
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #10 on: July 03, 2011, 03:00:17 am »

He said no offense therefore he has diplomatic immunity!!
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #11 on: July 03, 2011, 03:35:52 am »

This... it is just, no. The front page has spoilers that have one or two lines in it; There is no DETAIL. It's good for screwing around, if anything. In my RTDs, I have a lot of detail; I don't focus much on system, but I write about a paragraph each for my spoilers. I think out a story, and focus on it. All of your previous RTD's have been the same. It sets a bad reputation, and makes people think this will be the same. Sorry, but it is just bad.

No offence intended.
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [0/5]
« Reply #12 on: July 03, 2011, 03:37:47 am »

This... it is just, no. The front page has spoilers that have one or two lines in it; There is no DETAIL. It's good for screwing around, if anything. In my RTDs, I have a lot of detail; I don't focus much on system, but I write about a paragraph each for my spoilers. I think out a story, and focus on it. All of your previous RTD's have been the same. It sets a bad reputation, and makes people think this will be the same. Sorry, but it is just bad.

No offence intended.

No offence taken (: Im going to clean this up and refine it so it..well it sucks less :P
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [2/5]
« Reply #13 on: July 03, 2011, 04:25:18 am »

Do we have to choose a class and skills or it is just ingame?
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Re: Roll to Crime Signups [2/5]
« Reply #14 on: July 03, 2011, 04:59:09 am »

Do we have to choose a class and skills or it is just ingame?

Modify your sheet you all get 3 skill points Cubos dosnt have to though cuz he's a robot :3
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