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[mcclay]

Irony: whose awesome, you are. What is your action?

[IronyOwl]

Right, still thinking about that. Uh...

Head up to tower.

[mcclay]

one persn left, come on NDRL!

[NRDL]

Make a workbench ( do we really have to do only one thing per turn? ).

[mcclay]

(look at any other RTD on this forums, I would say yes)
{NRDL} LR[4] You make a work bench, good job(Item get:workbench)
{Irony} SS [5] You head up he hill. As you get closer to the Tower you notice two things: the Tower has no door and there is a tunnel going under the tower. Youhead into the tunel but just a uou get to the door of the tunnel an arrow flies right infront of your face. You look  down notice the entire hall is filled with arrow dispensers with well camoflauged pressure plates. crud
{Choo} CC [1] You hed up the hill but fall into a pit trap. the fall is short enugh not to do any damage but there is a creeper down heee. He starts hissing and puffing up...
{Adwarf} Akira [1] you work so fast on making those tools that you catch them, the work bench, and yourself on fire.... OH GOD IT BURNs (lost: two HP, 23 planks)
{Freeformschooler} freeform [3] You only break down half of your wood into planks,huh? (item gain: 24 planks)
{BDthemag} BD [3] see Freeform's turn

[freeformschooler]

Lesse...

4 planks=8 sticks
8 sticks+9 planks=Wooden Axe, Wooden Pick, Wooden Shovel, Wooden Sword

Using someone else's workbench, I spend my turn making the above wooden tools. (Wooden Axe, Wooden Pick, Wooden Shovel, Wooden Sword)

[choobakka]

Jump out! Jump out!

[adwarf]

Do I have the tools, adn stuff?

[IronyOwl]

Lord Reginald, Warrior	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: 32 wood, workbench*]
Akira, Woodcutter	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: 6 wood, 1 plank***]
BDthemag, Crafter	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: 24 planks**]
Freeform, Miner	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: 6 wood, 24 planks]
Sir Scuttlebuett, Builder	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: nothing]
Colon Camaleonte, Explorer	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: nothing]

*Did the workbench cost any wood?
**Or 3 wood, 12 planks?
***Assuming he only made one more plank than he lost, and the workbench cost nothing but burned up


Carefully attempt to navigate the death-laden hallway.

[choobakka]

Irony: Workbench=4 wood, and is kind of used up (placed on the ground - but he could pick it up again.)

[mcclay]

Adwarf is right, the workbench costs and 12 planks
any complaints, construcive ciritscim or tips?

[IronyOwl]

Lord Reginald, Warrior	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: 31 wood, workbench]
Akira, Woodcutter	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: 5 wood, 1 plank, workbench]
BDthemag, Crafter	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: 3 wood, 12 planks]
Freeform, Miner	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: 6 wood, 24 planks]
Sir Scuttlebuett, Builder	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: nothing]
Colon Camaleonte, Explorer	[HP:|||||]	[Equipment: nothing]

Should be right now.

[freeformschooler]

Pretty good so far, I think the two biggest things are:

1) when you run an RTD based on a preexisting game/setting without going into much rule detail, the players are going to assume the RTD follows the setting's rules, and are surprised when it doesn't. You've mostly managed to avoid that so far but keep it in mind.
2) Here's where I criticize your spelling, but honestly it's readable and for all I know you're not a native english speaker. Plus, you should see the typos in my two RTDs

[adwarf]

3.) Also if a player gets an item list it beside the turn every time if you are not making the status yourself that is.
4.) If someone is crafing objects let them make multiple things at once since it will speed up the game immensly.

Ex:
Akira - Craft an Axe, Shovel, and Pick ( Acceptable )
Akira - Craft 5 Doors, and a Axe ( Unacceptable )

[mcclay]

thanks for the feedback

1) I did say in the expostion that this server was heavily modded to an enrmous degree. It acts like the realworld in a lot of ways, look at what happned in the first turn ^^.

2) I am a native english speaker and fancy myself a good writer but  have crap ass spelling. Probably because  am writing this on a Indle si Big finger+ small buttons= fuckton of typos

3) i thught I did that in this turn but I'll try harder :3
4) can do, I just wanted to make sure that you could not spam a crapton of items in one turn.
and all fedd back is apperciated, thanks^_^